Jakorin Swiftsword Posted March 24, 2015 Posted March 24, 2015 Ka'ata, a fierce warrior sent by the Desert King to win the melee and alliance of Lord Kar'dani, doubles over in pain as the wound dealt to him begins to take its toll. He'd run far and fast, hoping dearly to escape the monster hunting him. He sighs as the fear begins to slightly subside, and then leans back against the stone wall. He looks down as his left side, completely stained with blood. It was a terrible wound, he knew, but not enough to kill him just yet. But it did debilitate him for the time being. His plan now was to leave the melee all together. Sure, he'd be disqualified, but at least he'd be alive. Besides, he thought, there were plenty of other Desert King followers participating in the melee. Suddenly, he froze. Terror creeping its way up his spine. Familiar padded footsteps met his ears. The hunter. Shizim D'Ali rounded the corner with a smirk, satisfied by the look of horror on Ka'ata's face. Kat'ata, steeling reeling in pain from the last blow made by that war-club, tried to stand, but merely stumbled. The amount of blood loss was catastrophic on his body. So instead his tried to crawl. Each muscle screaming in pain, each nerve in his body shouting at him to run. But it was no use. Shizim: "Running from me is pointless, coward. Once I have your scent, I can follow you anywhere. No matter how far or fast you run, I'll always be right behind you." Ka'ata: "Spare me! I beg you!" Shizim: "Would you have spared me, were our positions reversed? I think not. In fact, I think I'll just put you out of your misery. There are still many others for me to hunt, after all." Ka'ata: "NOOO!!!" Shizim raised his war-club, cape billowing in the warm Kaliphlin breeze, and brought it down on Ka'ata. Shizim: "By the way, my High Council employers send their regards." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ And there it is, another build cranked out for the High Council. Decided to have a hired thug do the dirty work this time, being we're too busy winning the war on other fronts. Thanks for looking, and C and C is always appreciated. Quote
Umbra-Manis Posted March 24, 2015 Posted March 24, 2015 Hopefully the rest of our messengers will take guards now. Great build! Quote
LittleJohn Posted March 24, 2015 Posted March 24, 2015 Great work with the stone pillars! Cool tree as well Quote
Garmadon Posted March 24, 2015 Posted March 24, 2015 Excellent build Jakorin, great job on the wall, tree and minifig posing (i.e. everything ) Quote
Yzalirk Posted March 24, 2015 Posted March 24, 2015 I really do like the vignette and the story and dialogue are very nice too! Quote
Captain Braunsfeld Posted March 24, 2015 Posted March 24, 2015 Great job! I really love the fence I agree! Quote
Adair Posted March 24, 2015 Posted March 24, 2015 Nice story and I love that wall! Great job! Long live the Republic! Quote
Bacon Potatoes Posted March 24, 2015 Posted March 24, 2015 Excellent work! All the small elements really come together to make the larger piece. Nice work on that wall. Quote
Jacob Nion Posted March 24, 2015 Posted March 24, 2015 Neat vignette. Excellent job on the fence. Quote
soccerkid6 Posted March 27, 2015 Posted March 27, 2015 Neat little gate and pillar designs The border and palm tree look great as well Quote
MassEditor Posted March 31, 2015 Posted March 31, 2015 Fantastic entry, I hate I somehow missed this until now! Love those pillars, the palm tree and the posing. Quote
Kai NRG Posted March 31, 2015 Posted March 31, 2015 Looks like I missed this somehow the first time! A really nice entry, the palm tree looks great and so does the fence! Quote
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