Adam Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 As Adam flew, he noticed a group of RGSs zooming towards the Easy 101 battalion. However, the large amount of droids had begun sending anti-air missiles, taking down most of the ships. Adam slowed the ship, careful to not get in range, but close enough for the troops on the ground to see him coming to help. Off in the distance, Adam noticed a small group of people trying to find Easy 101. He sent up a signal flare, then landed. He'd have to continue on foot.
Wouwie Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 ''Sir, we see a flarre up in the air! Maybe that's someone who is coming to help us!'' ''Lets hope so, watch the radio for incoming messages!'' ''Yes sir!''
Adam Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 Before stepping out of his vehicle, Adam tuned in to Easy 101's frequency. "Easy 101, this is Adam, can you hear me? Over." A second later, a soldier came up on the opposite end. "This is Easy 101; we can hear you loud and clear. Are you from the ship that sent the flare? Over." The man was frantic, and Adam wasted no time in responding. "Yes I am, but I'm afraid I was the only one aboard. It seems what's left of the backup is attempting to approach on foot, as well as a small party of 4 or 5 that seem to be trying to locate you. I'll be approaching on foot also, but it'll be about 20 minutes untill I'm there. Over." The trooper sighed. "Your the only one? No offense, but that probably won't help much." Adam smiled ruefully. "Ahh, but I have something that may help." "What?" Adam opened a hidden compartment in his ship, pulling from it a heavy black object. "Don't worry, I'm on my way."
Lt. Col. Thok Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 (edited) Thok: How well do you trust these guys, Jim? Butcher: Ummm...well, I trusted them with my lives back on Utapu, and I'm still here so....And how can I trust you? Thok: I'm just a simple clone doing a simple job. Anyways, back on Utapu, I heard my captors mention a traitor among us- Butcher: Isn't that convient.... Thok: Hush. Anyways, I've been observing our companions and I've noticed something. I thought I'd tell you know that- *BLAM* Thok: GET DOWN! Butcher: Mmmph! Thok: THAT is what I'd roll my eyes to and say convenient in a sarcastic manner, Mr. Butcher! Thok: Now, help me blow these- *whips around. * Never mind! Thok and Butcher: RUN!!! Thok: Maybe we shouldn't have gone so far ahead! I was bored, so I inverted the colours on the last pic - really cool effect: Even better: Text: Join the SW Comic Game - We're REALLY trippy! Edited August 31, 2008 by Lt. Col. Thok
Adam Posted August 31, 2008 Posted August 31, 2008 (edited) Adam had placed the object on his seat and gone outside. He pulled on a outfit that fit the weather a little more and took out his mobile sensor, finding the exact location of Easy 101. (BTW, I look like this now: That should be the figure put in the banner and the one that you guys use. I have black pants, the clone torso you saw, a black helmet and a black visor, as well as my normal gun.) Unfortunately, the Force was not with him. A CIS missile zoomed towards his ship, and Adam just had enough time to cover himself before the starfighter blew up in a giant explosion. Adam flew 20 yards, skidding on the ice until he came to a painful stop. The ship wouldn't have made as large an explosion if the bomb he had intended to save Easy 101 with hadn't aided to the blast. Adam became aware of a cearing pain in his arm and back, but the mechanical unit in his shoulder fixed the wounds. Temporarily. It wouldn't be long before the effect of the healing system wore of, when he'd need medical help. However, Adam trudged in the direction of Easy 101; helping THEM was his goal right now. Now updated: It seemed that Adam had been blown further away from Easy 101 than he thought. The clones were battling far off in the distance, but a small group of people were being attacked by a Spider Droid nearby. Adam decided that it would be more useful to help them. He ran over to the small group, and, once beside them, began attacking the Spider Droid as well. Edited September 1, 2008 by Adam
JimBee Posted September 1, 2008 Author Posted September 1, 2008 Hey, Thok, nice little addition, but my character only uses Fox's torso/ arms, and not his helmet or accessories. I might have to change the banner, but ~VBBN~ is already making it, so you guys will have to live with what I already submitted. Oh, wouwie, I'm really sorry, but I forgot to add you to the banner. I am really sorry, but you were gone for a while so I kind of forgot... I'l see if ~VBBN~ can make some adjustments. Oh, and from now on, I think it would be wise to give credit to the person who made the banner in your sigs. That is all.
Adam Posted September 1, 2008 Posted September 1, 2008 I hope ~VBBN~ can incorporate all of the new additions to the banner; please, JimButcher, tell us if and when he requests the updated picture. That way, we'll all know if he'll kindly make the new banner.
Wouwie Posted September 1, 2008 Posted September 1, 2008 'Sir, we just had contact with someone called Adam, he said he would help us with somethnig secret!' 'Let's hope it's something powerfull...' Radar trooper: 'Sir, we have a group of droids with a walker attacking an group of people!' Radio trooper: 'Wait a minute! Adam also said there is another group heading towards us to help us! Maybe they are under attack! 'Okay, do we have something near tem?! Radar trooper: 'Uhm....The closest are units of Com Rex, sir.' 'Radio trooper, send a message to rex that there is a small group of people that could use his help!' 'Yes sir! I'm on it.' 'I'm going to my room to prepare myself if the CIS enters this base. Captain, you are in control of the Control room.'
Lt. Col. Thok Posted September 1, 2008 Posted September 1, 2008 (edited) Hey, Thok, nice little addition, but my character only uses Fox's torso/ arms, and not his helmet or accessories. Bollocks! Oh, well, it'll have to stay like that until my next photo shoot. BTW, After tomorrow, my posts will be both shorter and less frequent (Damn high school ), so feel free to drag me along. Just to clarify, I will post, but not as often. Edited September 1, 2008 by Lt. Col. Thok
Adam Posted September 1, 2008 Posted September 1, 2008 'Sir, we just had contact with someone called Adam, he said he would help us with somethnig secret!''Let's hope it's something powerfull...' Radar trooper: 'Sir, we have a group of droids with a walker attacking an group of people!' Radio trooper: 'Wait a minute! Adam also said there is another group heading towards us to help us! Maybe they are under attack! 'Okay, do we have something near tem?! Radar trooper: 'Uhm....The closest are units of Com Rex, sir.' 'Radio trooper, send a message to rex that there is a small group of people that could use his help!' 'Yes sir! I'm on it.' 'I'm going to my room to prepare myself if the CIS enters this base. Captain, you are in control of the Control room.' Too bad that "the something secret" blew up . Adam jerked awake. He had been lying on the ice a few feet from where he landed. He must have collapsed due to the pain, and, sure enough, the ice he lay on was red. Had he been dreaming about the group and the Spider Droid? Apparently not. He noticed the large walker not far from him, attacking a group close to the backup. He tried to get up, but couldn't. I look to his shoulder told him that his mechanical life-support system had crashed in the fall. Adam sighed and put his head back down. Hopefully, help would come. That was his last thought before he passed out.
JimBee Posted September 2, 2008 Author Posted September 2, 2008 Here is the banner! Credit to ~VBBN~! http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3277/2819092373_8b75ea7a20_o.jpg Remember to give~VBBN~ credit in your sigs!
MacK Posted September 2, 2008 Posted September 2, 2008 As Oky Wan Garviel and MacK continued along the tracks along the snow, Thok and Jim bolted around a pillar of snow and ice, stopping in front of the others panting. "Big problem... up ahead... four legs many guns... not good", Jim managed to say in between breaths. "Wait what are you talking about Jim Aliens, or CIS?” "Droids!" called Oky Wan as he spotted several battle droids running along Jim's and Thok's steps, cause him to react by firing several shots from his blaster followed by similar blasts from everyone else who was near them. As the last of the droid squad fell MacK turned around facing his companions "Come on that's probably the last of them, we'll just have to be more comfortable from now on MacK said, oblivious to anything that wasn't directly in front of him. "Err... MacK there’s a large spider droid right behind you" Oky Wan commented as a large iron beast walked towards them lasers trained on MacK's back. MacK said "Dang this day is just getting better and better" MacK commented. As he lunged to the right to avoid a few blasts from the secondary gun of the spider droids top half. Everyone else followed suit moving out of the way of deadly lasers as the spider droid advanced on them. Jim crouched beside MacK while he fired his rifle at the main body of the towering droid. "Forget it Jim" MacK said "It's futile the blasters won't be able to affect the droid, because of its layer of armor.” "What about grenades Jim said they could probably pierce it’s armor." Jim replied as he reached for a grenade on his utility belt. “It’s a very hard throw MacK said eyeing a laser zooming over their heads, and melting a decent amount of snow where it landed "Besides we may need them later on in case we walk into more CIS".”Well then, how do we get past the spider droid?" Jim asked starting to get annoyed at the Lieutenant, which MacK could hear in his voice. "Everyone follow me!" MacK yelled in his comlink as he got up and bolted into a newly created ditch of melted snow from the spider droids weapons. As he did so he laid on his back as flat as who could be and starting scooping snow on to his legs and torso. As he had hoped everyone else followed suit as the hostile droid approached them. With one last scoop he moved a bit of snow over his face to cover most of it but so that he could still see, and breathe. In his mind he knew that this would either work great or fail miserably resulting in his death and the death of everyone around him. The sounds of the spider droid moved closer. Everyone could hear the sounds of the pumps engines and joints as they labored to move the iron creature move along. they got louder and louder with each passing moment, but soon they started to fade off as the droid moved away thinking it had killed the expedition; while still on the look out for any more enemies that had managed to allude it. The plan had worked. MacK carefully lifted his head and torso up looking to see if there were any more droids around. When none were to be seen, MacK called out to the others to get up and continue on their way. Inside everyone silently hoped that they could find the Republic out post soon and get out of the frigid weather, because now they were colder than ever. "Alright guy’s we can't be far let's just keep close together, and continue on we should be fine" MacK said shivering slightly as he continued to walk in the direction that they had been heading in the first place. P.S. as you can see I'm back home so I should be able to start posting again. Sorry for the lack of pictures in this post, it's just that I haven't really had the time to build and photograph anything lately so I hope that just text is okay for now. Although I'll try to add some in my next post; I can't promise it since I've just started high school so I'll be fairly busy for the next little bit .I apologize for my previous absence and for any plot errors that I may have made in this post. Other wise it's nice to be back on Eurobricks . Great banner by the way ~VBBN~, it seems clone armor is all the rage this season .
Adam Posted September 2, 2008 Posted September 2, 2008 Adam drifed into slight awakness, where he saw five lumps in the snow, with a Spider Droid far in the distance. As one of them emerged to reveal a person, Adam moaned as loudly as possible to alert them of his presence. He then passed out once agian.
Oky Posted September 2, 2008 Posted September 2, 2008 (edited) "What was that?" asked Oky Wan. "Sounded like a moan." "I heard it too" said Mack. "I think it came from over there" said Oky Wan and pointed toward a cloud of smoke that arose from a spot nearby. "Maybe it's another downed Gunship" said Jim. "Quick, we need to see if there are survivors who need help!" And so, they all ran over to the crash site. As they got closer, they realized that it wasn't a gunship, but a personal fighter, and that the pilot was lying in the snow, bleeding. This post looked different before. This is how it was: "What was that?" shouted Oky Wan over the noise of blaster bolts zipping through the air. "Sounded like a big explosion." "I don't know and I don't care - right now I'm a little busy fighting for my life!" replied Mack while firing shots at the droids. Jim seemed frustrated. He said: "We don't have time for this! Doesn't anyone have an idea how to take that Spider out quickly?" "I have an idea" said Oky Wan a moment later. "Everyone, aim for the laser emplacement on top of the Walker!" The others followed his advice, and sure enough, the laser couldn't stand this concentrated firepower and exploded after a while. "Good!" said Oky Wan. "Now, MacK, give me one of your grenades!" Being hardly able to part from one of his favorite weapons, MacK hesitated, but then decided that it would be in good hands and finally handed it over. Once Oky Wan was holding the thermal detonator in his hands, he activated his jetpack and flew over the Spider Walker. He landed on top of its spherical body, activated the grenade, and dropped it into the hole that the exploded laser emplacement had left. Immediately, Oky Wan reactivated his jetpack to fly to cover, and one moment later, the round head of the Spider droid blew up into a thousand pieces, leaving only a quartet of legs which fell over slowly. They all cheered in triumph and blasted away the remaining Battle Droids. "Whew, glad that's over!" said MacK. "Now what were you saying about an explosion, Oky Wan?" "I think it came from over there" said Oky Wan and pointed toward a cloud of smoke that arose from a spot nearby. "Maybe it's another downed Gunship" said Jim. "Quick, we need to see if there are survivors who need help!" And so, they all ran over to the crash site. As they got closer, they realized that it wasn't a gunship, but a personal fighter, and that the pilot was lying in the snow, bleeding.Cool group photo! Thanks VBBN! The only thing missing in it is an indivation that it is the pic for Chapter 3. For now, I think I'll stick to the ad that I have made, though. EDIT: Aw, man! MacK beat me to it! Did it really take me more than 30 mins to post this? Damn I'm slow! Oh well. shall I delete my post then? I decided to change it intead of deleting it and "cut" out the part with the Spider droid fight. Edited September 2, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi
Adam Posted September 3, 2008 Posted September 3, 2008 Oky Wan, since you're in your Dark Ages (I'm in a semi-Dark Age ), we understand that it may take you time to post. I hope your grades improve ! Though I know you don't need to improve your english grade; you are a very good poster. Adam opened his eyes. Through blurred vision, he saw people bending over him. Adam raised an arm, but that arm had little blood, and if fell quickly. He sighed and managed a smile of thanks. Then, he went back into a state of unconsiousness.
simonjedi Posted September 3, 2008 Posted September 3, 2008 Before the group could help the pilot, there was a thudding noise. The spider droid was back, it had picked up the wreckage of the fighter and was heading back. Mack saw it first "IT'S BACK!" Oky swore "Spread out" he shouted "keep its fire away from the pilot" the group crouched down and began to open fire, blaster fire ricocheted from the dome, "That amours too strong for blasters" Garviel shouted, just as his defence position melted away under beam fire. The spider walker began to walk towards him. "Garviel watch out" Jim called, before garviel could react. The droids head exploded in a massive fireball, leaving 4 smoldering legs standing. "wha" Oky wondered "what happened?" His question was answered when 5 clone troopers appeared out of the snow, one holding a rocket launcher, The closest one spoke "I'm Commander Rex, we better return to our base, the droids will realize whats happened" "Good idea" replied Jim "Oky, Garviel, help carry the pilot. Lead the way commander"
Adam Posted September 3, 2008 Posted September 3, 2008 BTW, you guys don't have to PM me to request dialogue untill I say otherwise.
JimBee Posted September 3, 2008 Author Posted September 3, 2008 BTW, you guys don't have to PM me to request dialogue untill I say otherwise. Nobody really follows that rule anyways... just don't use other's dialogues to the extreme, like making them die or getting captured. Sorry for the lack of pics by the way, I haven't had time since school started...
Oky Posted September 4, 2008 Posted September 4, 2008 (edited) Oky Wan, since you're in your Dark Ages (I'm in a semi-Dark Age ), we understand that it may take you time to post. I hope your grades improve ! Though I know you don't need to improve your english grade; you are a very good poster. Thanks. "So... Who are you exactly?" asked Oky Wan the clone commander, breathing hard under the weight of the wounded pilot. "I am the leader of one of many squads sent down to this frozen wasteland to search for CIS activity. We found it alright. Part of that "activity" shot down our Low Altitude Assault Transport back there. Luckily we were able to jump out and land in a soft pile of snow before the missiles reached our ship. I am also one of the best friends of Easy 501, the one in charge at the outpost that is being attacked right now. Saved his sorry behind on many occasions. I assume you are here because of his SOS?" "Correct, Commander" said Jim. "Well so am I. Good thing you're here. We will need all the help we can get." A moment later, they saw what he meant: As they reached the top of a hill, they gazed down at a massive battle. The droids were attacking the outpost from all sides and with all kinds of vehicles. "They really don't want the Republic here, do they" said Thok. "How in the name of the force are we supposed get passed all those droids? It's impossible, even if we had a ship," Mack started whining. "Not exactly," said Rex. "See those hills all around? They're all full of caves and tunnels. I bet one of them leads right over to the outpost." He gave one of his men a hand signal, and the clone started aiming a device at the hills Rex had just pointed at. After a while the clone said: "Sir, according to our sensors, there is a cavern right behind that wall" He pointed at a steep hill nearby. "Good," said Rex and gave the trooper with the rocket launcher a different hand signal. The clone fired one of his rockets at the icy wall and it shattered into a bunch of ice rocks. Everyone wearing a clone helmet turned on the small lights that were built into the helmet, and they all entered the cave. It was quite peaceful at first, but after a few steps, they could see animal bones and blood scattered all over the place. Trying to keep cool, Jim said in a low voice: "Guys, I don't think we should be in here..." But it was too late. Out of a dark corner, a big, strong Wampa who seemed to have made this cave his home leaped forward and attacked them! Btw, I said "the droids attacked with all kinds of vehicles" so that in case someone wants to post a pic of a battle scene in the future, he can use whichever CIS vehicle(s) he has. Edited September 4, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi
-JD- Posted September 4, 2008 Posted September 4, 2008 (edited) As the wampa leapt towards them, Rex pulled out his blasters and fired. The wampa fell to the floor, whimpering in pain . Rex walked on, as if nothing had happened, and the others followed. I thought about making the Wampa kill the clone, but it would be very gory ( i thought it could rip off the clones head ) :skull: Edited September 4, 2008 by Jammiedodger714
Oky Posted September 4, 2008 Posted September 4, 2008 (edited) Woah, woah, waitaminute! You're not allowed to post parts of the story without a character, Jammiedodger714! You need to join before the start of a chapter to have one. And it's already too late to join for this one. So beat it! Nah just kiddin'. You can join in the next chapter, but read the rules completely before you post! Edited September 4, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi
-JD- Posted September 4, 2008 Posted September 4, 2008 Woah, woah, waitaminute! You're not allowed to post parts of the story without a character, Jammiedodger714! You need to join before the start of a chapter to have one. And it's already too late to join for this one. So beat it! Nah just kiddin'. You can join in the next chapter, but read the rules completely before you post! Ooopps! Sorry! I got a bit carried away! I'll read the rules (I didn't know there were any). Again, I'm sorry. Kinda new.
Oky Posted September 4, 2008 Posted September 4, 2008 (edited) Ooopps! Sorry! I got a bit carried away! I'll read the rules (I didn't know there were any). Again, I'm sorry. Kinda new. That's alright, n00b! Wekcome to EB! Edited September 4, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi
Adam Posted September 4, 2008 Posted September 4, 2008 Adam opened his eyes. He was beeing carried by a couple of people that seemed to be formed of a larger group. Adam noticed a cieling of ice, which probably meant that they were in one of the many caves and tunnels that are seen throught the cliffsides and mountains of Hoth. But the beatiful scenery wasn't the attraction. Rather, it was the bloody skeleton and the giant Wampa that had slayed it. Adam thought quickly. It seemed that a bump from one of the people that had been carrying him had pushed a misplaced cord of Adam's life support system, locking it back in place. Artificial blood cells surged through his veins while the solution that they carried patched up his wounds. It wouldn't last for long; eventually, the system would run out of fluid and his cuts would reopen, but for now.... The sudden flow of blood gave Adam an adrenaline rush almost immediatley. He pounced into the air, flinging his arms around the Wampa's neck as he went down. This was a full grown Wampa, and even Adam's long arms couldn't go all the way around it's neck. He found that one hand was clenched to a tuft of fur while the other had grabbed the Wampa's upper jaw, holding it open. Adam quickly shoved his legs on the beast's chest and released his first hand before the monster could react. He searched his holster, and, luckily, his gun remained present. Adam whipped it out and fired down the beast's throught. His many shots seemed to have contacted with multiple organs, causing the Wampa to collapse in a gruesome, bloody mess. Adam jumped off before he was flattened, and, noticing that the group of men were staring at him, turned around. "The name's Adam," he said with a wry smile, extending a hand. Sorry that I didn't count Jammiedodger714's post, I didn't think that his was to be incorporated. BTW, in conversation, I reveal little except that: I work for the Republic Was researching a highly classified expirement when I was abducted by the C.I.S. It has something to do with the time machine and a mysterious serum Also, remember that I'm smart and instinctive, as well as somewhat skeptical of what others belive/think/say/ARE.
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