The Star Wars Comic Game-Season One

[Adam]

Got rid of my first post, 'cause it sucked. Here's a new one:

Adam quickly whipped out his gun and shot down each of the droids, swerving and jumping to avoid blaster fire. When he was done, he glanced back. No Butcher. What could have happened to the guy? He'd have to go back and che-

A shriek was heard from somewhere ahead. Adam made a snap decision and ran to it. A left, two rights, and then a door. Inside was the very room he had been secured in- inside was, instead, a dead figure with blood all over the floor. The room, which had once been full of all sorts of materials, was empty. All that was left was a giant case. It was easy to guess what was inside. "Jim? Butcher?!" Adam tried the radio, but to no avail. What was going on? He tried contacting MacK's frieghter, but it seemed that he was unable to. Adam looked quickly for a way to get this case out of here, and found an exit not far from the room. He used a maitenence cart to float the crate to the door, and then used a small speeder to ship it out. He placed it not far from the facility, and sent up one of his signal flares. He hoped the Republic could get it, because he had to go back and save Jim.

Edited September 22, 2008 by Adam

[JimBee]

I'm a rebel!? What a twist!

The chair's clamps were so tight that Butcher's hands were losing circulation. Butcher had just woken up, and had a splitting headache.

"Remember me?" said a voice. It was the "drug dealer" from Coruscant. He was working with Grievous, and shot the seller.

"Now, I want you to cooperate, otherwise there will be a very sharp pain in your vein in your arm" he said. Butcher tried to move his head to look at his arm, but that was clamped down to, with a metal ring around his neck. Instead, he moved his eyes toward his arm, and saw a needle was half poked into it.

"If you do anything that might make me irritated, I will push my thumb, and a serum will be released into your blood, causing your whole body to override. It most likely do permanent damage."

How could I have gotten into this mess? I'm better than this Butcher thought.

"Now, tell me where the rest of your miscreants are" ordered the Seperatist. Butcher didn't open his mouth.

"Alright, then" he was ready to drive the serum in. But the CIS didn't know one thing, one big mistake. The commander drew all of his energy, and aimed a small force blast at the interrogator, and then at the clamps. The needle fell to the floor. Butcher's adversary pulled out his pistol, shot, and missed by inches. Jim tackled him, and wrapped his hands around the dealer's throat.

"Big mistake" Butcher said. within seconds, his enemy was dead. Now, it was time to find Adam.

Oooh, violent post!

[Adam]

Adam entered the facility once more to see Butcher running right towards him. "What happened?" Adam asked? "Drug dealer," Jim panted, "dead. The drug dealer we'd been after was about to inject me- fortunately, I killed him." Adam nodded. Just then, droids swarmed the corridor. "We have the intruders, roger roger," one of them said into a radio. "Roger roger, kill them," buzzed from the radio. As they raised their guns, Adam pulled his gun out. He was relieved when Butcher pulled one out too, apparently, he must have picked it up from the bounty hunter. They were about to fire when an idea came, suddenly, to Adam. With no time to consult his compainon, he fired at the light above them, showering sparks on the droids. Adam grabbed Jim and dove away just in time as the droids started to catch fire. The first explosion triggered the next to explode, resulting in a hailstorm of droid-debris. When they got up, Jim frowned. "That was quite effective, but we could have easily taken them." Adam acknowledged this fact and said, "Yes, but look around. There are no droids in the area. Doing that was the only way to activate the alarm." Butcher stared at him. "You WANTED to activate the alarm?!" Adam shook his head. "No, I wanted to draw them all to this spot while we make are exit." He motioned to the flaming droids. "That should lead them away from your dead drug delear, so it'll be a while before they notice him." With that, the two ran out and hopped in the speeder that Adam had parked just outside.

Edited September 22, 2008 by Adam

[JimBee]

They hopped in the speeder.

"I'll drive" said Adam. "We'll have to find the others by going through the front."

"What happened to your commlink?" asked Butcher.

"I can't get a hold of them, something is wrong"

"It's a trap, they've probably already been captured" said Butcher. "We'll have to find another way in. Land over there, on top of the east wing."

"And what if it isn't a trap? They could be in trouble!"

"The CIS wouldn't kill them. Not yet. They need to find us too, and they would use them as bait".

"Hmm, maybe we should split up" said Adam. To Butcher, it seemed as though Adam was trying to get away from him.

"No, we stay together. More of a chance that they will find us, but less of chance that we will die. And hurry, they could have already spotted us."

They landed ob the roof. There was a ventilation chute blowing out cold air. Butcher took it off, and the two climbed down. They dropped to the floor. In the room that they were in, there were several electric and heat generators, as well as other appliances. It must have been the maintenance room. Adam and Jim headed off to the time machine.

Sorry for not having pics lately, but I also want to see more from the rest of you.

[Oky]

Hi. Sorry I haven't been around here for a while and left you in suspense about my character's fate, but... you know... Dark Ages ...

Oky Wan was confused. Something strange had happened. At one moment, he was watching Garviel running down the corridor, then, there was a bright flash of light and a nasty noise that was so loud that it could have been heard miles away and that the audio receptors in his clone trooper helmet failed. If he wouldn't have been wearing the helmet, he would have been deaf by now. Finally, he realized that Garviel had disappeared. Oky Wan called for him, but there was no answer. Carefully, Oky Wan got up and tried to collect his thoughts. The bounty hunter - he was probably still there and might have the answer to Garviel's disappearance! He threw away his helmet with the busted sensors and ran into the direction that the bounty hunter had fled. He ran down the corridor with his blaster ready to shoot any attacking enemies and at the end, he turned into the only open room. There he was, the cornered bounty hunter, and in his arm he was holding a person. He was holding his blaster at the person's head, and this person was... Annix!

"Hold it," said the bounty hunter, unable to ban the fear from his voice, "or your friend here gets it!" Oky Wan didn't move, not being sure what he should do. "Put your gun down and back up slowly!" the bounty hunter ordered him. "Do what he says," said Annix. Oky didn't have a choice. He dropped his blaster and backed out of the room. The bounty hunter followed him, picked up the blaster on the way out, and passed him in the hallway until he was standing with his back to the corridor. Then, he suddenly pushed Annix forward so that he bumped into Oky Wan, and ran back through the corridor. Oky Wan, remembering the bounty hunter's weak spot from their first encounter on Utapau, picked up a hard, little piece of wreckage that was lying next to him and hurled it at the villain's neck. The bounty hunter gave out a scream of pain and fell to the ground. The two friends quickly ran over to the armored man and picked up their weapons. "This is for Xela!" said Oky Wan and finished the bounty hunter off with a shot through his neck. After some silence, Annix asked: "Who is Xela?" "A man who died while helping us back on Utapau" Oky explained. "If this bounty hunter wouldn't have wasted our time, we could have saved him."

They walked back toward the room where Commander Rex and the clones were waiting for them. But before they could reach them, the corridor suddenly collapsed in front of them. They were trapped in darkness. Then, the light of a red lightsaber blade lit up the corridor...

Uh-oh! I can smell the death of Annix coming!

[Adam]

Hm. JimButcher, are we on the roof of the same facility, or an alternate one? I'm sorry about reffering to the drug dealer as the "bounty hunter" in my post, I'll fix that. Next up will be the time machine with pics.

[Oky]

I'm sorry about reffering to the drug dealer as the "bounty hunter" in my post, I'll fix that. Next up will be the time machine with pics.

Good. And while you're at it, change "flyer" to "speeder".

Wait... you're getting to the time machine already?? Aw man, I have to hurry up and get over there!

Btw, does anyone else think it's interesting that Garviel could travel through time without any mutant DNA? I guess, if it was the rebels who transported him, they must be in possession of a time machine themselves and perfected the technology so that the mutants aren't the only living tissue that can travel through time anymore. Can't wait to find out why they did that.

Edited September 23, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi

[JimBee]

To answer some questions...

Adam, we are on the roof of the same facility.

Oky Wan, I believe the serum is meant to induce pain or something, like in Batman Begins, when they were getting scary visions due to the poison. Also, what's with the red lightsaber? I thought Dooku wasn't involved in this...? Unless it's a dark Jedi, or Grievous has a red lightsaber.

[Adam]

Thanks, Jim. You'll know all about the serum in my next post, but it kinda relies upon Oky Wan's, so I'll wait for him. Don't ask why, it's supposed to be a suprise.

[Oky]

Oky Wan, I believe the serum is meant to induce pain or something, like in Batman Begins, when they were getting scary visions due to the poison. Also, what's with the red lightsaber? I thought Dooku wasn't involved in this...? Unless it's a dark Jedi, or Grievous has a red lightsaber.

Oh yeah, sorry, what I meant was that Garviel didn't have any mutant DNA when he time traveled. Adam said that that's the only living tissue that can travel through time.

And the red lightsaber is Beqin's. She is an Assajj Ventress type character, a servant of Dooku.

Thanks, Jim. You'll know all about the serum in my next post, but it kinda relies upon Oky Wan's, so I'll wait for him. Don't ask why, it's supposed to be a suprise.

Sorry to say this, but after this, I will be too busy to post for two days. So you will have to either stall or wait for me. But maybe I'll post something tonight... maybe.

Edited September 23, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi

[JimBee]

Oh yeah, sorry, what I meant was that Garviel didn't have any mutant DNA when he time traveled. Adam said that that's the only living tissue that can travel through time.

And the red lightsaber is Beqin's. She is an Assajj Ventress type character, a servant of Dooku.

Oh yeah, sorry, I forgot about that. (Both of them).

[Adam]

Don't worry, Oky, you already cleared everything up. It was about Beqin.

Sadly, it'll be long before I post again, too.

[Dark Sword Ragnarok]

Hey guys, DSR here! I've been talking to Jim, and he's agreed to let one of my characters from my comic make a cameo appearance! We don't know how it will work out as of yet, but I would like to return the favor by having someone's character from this game make a cameo in my next comic! So, if you would like it to be your character, PM me or reply here, and please post a pic of your fig! I will see if I have the parts to make them.

Thanks guys!

DSR

[Oky]

Even though Oky Wan had not seen her before, he instantly recognized the woman with the red lightsaber from Garviel's descriptions: "Beqin!" He aimed his blaster at her and fired a few shots, but the weapon was powerless against the trained dark jedi; she deflected all of them with her lightsaber so that they shot holes into the ceiling, bringing some light back into the corridor. "What do you want?" asked Oky Wan. Beqin said: "Your friend... Garviel Loken... I saw him entering this wreckage with you. Where is he?" "We don't know." Oky Wan replied coldly. "LIAR!" Beqin shouted, and started to force-choke Oky. With her other hand, she made a wavy motion. "You will tell me where Loken went." Oky couldn't help but answer her: "I will tell you where Loken went. He went down this corridor and disappeared in a flash of light." "WHAT?" cried Beqin, half in disbelieve and half in anger. She force-pushed Oky into a wall. While Oky Wan slowly sat up, she thought about how to proceed. After a while, she said: "Very well. Then you are no use to me any longer." "Does that mean you will let us go?" asked Annix in hope. "No" said Beqin coldly, "you are still dangerous agents of the Republic. I will have to destroy you." With that last word, she leaped forward with her lightsaber ready for attack. But before she could reach them, Annix pulled out his sword and swung it at Beqin's lightsaber. As the red lightsaber blade hit Annix' dark metallic sword, it suddenly disintegrated. Oky Wan had forgotten that the sword was made out of cortosis. Beqin's lightsaber would now be useless for the next few minutes. Enraged, Beqin said: "You dare to oppose me? You have no idea who you're dealing with!" "Oky Wan, run!" Annix called to his friend as he was being lifted into the air by the dark jedi. But Oky seemed to have broken his leg during the crash with the wall, so he had to watch helplessly as his partner was choked to death. There was a nasty sound, and Annix stopped breathing.

Beqin threw him aside and started walking over to Oky Wan. He was getting ready to face the same fate as Annix, but surprisingly, the woman just stood in front of him, staring. Confused and in fear, Oky didn't dare to move. Then, Beqin made a face as if she would be enjoying a good smell. "Ahhh" she said slowly, "I can sense much anger in you, boy. Jealousy... guilt... and fear. The dark side of the force surrounds you... And you have a very creative and clever mind. The separatists could use a man like you!" "I will never work for the separatists! Never again!" "Are you sure?" asked Beqin, "Are you sure that there is no one whose place you would like to take? Are you sure there is no one you would like to get revenge on for doing something wrong? Are you sure there is no one you would like to save at all costs? With some training, the dark side of the force ccould help you enhance your force sensitivity and even provide you with the power to fulfill your dreams!"

Inside of Oky Wan, there was a war of thoughts and emotions raging. He thought of his cousin Obi Wan, the man he had always lived in the shadow of; he thought of the separatists and how they used his droid designs to start this war and terrorized countless worlds; and he thought of Jim and all his other new friends and of how they were suffering and dying because of this war... And he thought about how he could change all of that simply by accepting to become the apprentice of this dark jedi. He couldn't decide, and he couldn't take the pressure anymore. He said: "Enough talking! Just finish me already!" Disappointed, Beqin said: "Well, if that's what you wish..."

She stretched out her hand and was about to choke Oky Wan for the last time, when the debris that was blocking the exit of the corridor suddenly exploded. Rex and his men stormed in and started to fire at Beqin. With her lightsaber still useless and unable to protect her, she decided to retreat. With a quick motion of her hand, she blew off a piece of the ceiling and jumped outside. The clones turned to Oky Wan and Rex asked: "Sir, what happened? Are you alright?" "Yes, yes," Oky assured him, "it's a long story... just get us out of here... we need to help Jim and the others." Two of the troopers help Oky Wan up and carried him on their shoulders, while two others picked up Annix' body. They got on board the gunship and took off. Inside, while Oky was treated by the medic, Rex asked: "How will we find them, Sir?" "hold on," said Oky Wan, "I'll contact them." He turned on his comlink. "Jim Butcher, come in, Jim Butcher! This is Oky Wan. Our mission was a complete failure! We found Annix, but he's down, and Garviel went missing. We are on our way to you. Please send us your coordinates immediately. Over." Afterward, he waited for response as the Republic Gunship soared over the snowy landscape...

Woah! That was my longest and most epic, character-developing post yet! My character has been put into the temptation of turning over to the dark side! For now, he got away without making a decision yet, but who knows what he will choose to do the next time he is put under this test?

Stay tuned to find out!

I was kinda planning this kind of a development from the start by establishing the whole jealousy and guilt thing. Otherwise, I would have never created a character that has anything against Obi Wan Kenobi, obviously one of the best jedi out there!

I hope you liked it and are OK with the way I killed off Vaders_son. Since I have two weeks of break from school now (and therefore from my Dark Ages), I will have some more time to post here and maybe even have the chance to post some pics again! So, look forward to more quality posts like this in the days!

Edited November 17, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi

[Adam]

Interesting post, Oky Wan! Adam will have to be very careful about you... My post will be up as soon as I find my camera.

[JimBee]

Very nice post, Oky Wan! So now you are temporarily out of your dark ages? I look forward to seeing some of your pics.

Yes, I have agreed with DSR to have one of his characters make an appearance in the game, since he is unable to join as a player. We'll have his British clone (214, I think) be a clone from the remaining on Hoth. I still have to work out the details, but expect to see this soon.

[Dark Sword Ragnarok]

Very interesting post Oky Wan! Sounds like your character is going to have some morality issues...

Also, thanks again JimButcher, I'm very honored that Two-Fourteen will be making a cameo. Just in case you didn't read it earlier, if you would like your personal SWCG character to make a cameo appearance in my comic, please PM me and send me a pic of them so I can see if I can build them!

DSR

[-JD-]

My profile:

Name: JD-714 (nicknamed Jammiedodger 714 or JD)

Height: 6ft 1in

Affliction: Empire/Rebellion

Weapon(s) of choice: DC-15 blasters, chaingun

Other: he was an elite 501st clone scout in the CW. After the Republic fell, he fled at the seige of the Jedi Temple and is now on the Empire's hit list. He fled with a fellow scout, BB-215, but BB-215 was shot down when they tried to escape. He has a grudge against the Empire because of this.

He joined the rebellion and still wears his old armour.

He enjoys killing stormtroopers and jawas and keeping chickens .

Links to pictures....

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=342937

J

Edited September 26, 2008 by Jammiedodger714

[Oky]

Cool, Jammiedodger714. Now all you have to do is make a post where you meet Garviel.

[Adam]

As they walked through a hallway, Jim observed a black wire running across the wall. He could easily guess what it meant: control panel ahead. Sure enough, Adam and Butcher soon encountered a closed door and a access panel. Butcher frowned. "Kinda Oky Wan's field, don't you think?" Adam raised a small, grey box. "He gave this to me just for this kind of situation." Jim thought that Adam looked very nervous, twitchy, almost, as he placed the box near the panel and read the code. He punched it in (with his fingers shaking, Butcher observed), and the path cleared. They walked across the new corridor, and Butcher made a startling realization. The security is rather low in here- TOO low, he thought. However, this did not seem to be on Adam's mind. Or maybe it was, for Adam was shaking. "Maybe we should split up?" He suggested suddenly. He's downrighty jumpy, Butcher thought. "Whaaat? And where would we split up? There's no fork up ahead..." Not long after that odd, brief exchange, the two encountered a strange black door. "D-do you think that this is the time machine?" Adam asked. There's definately a reason why he stuttered at the beginning of the sentence, Jim thought wildly. But then, his attention turned to the door. WAS this the time machine? All I've worked for.... and is this it? Jim asked himself. From the moment I saw that drug dealer, I knew something was up, and now I find myself inches away from a great victory for the Republic. If I this IS the time machine, and I can get the information to my superiors, the CIS plan will be terminated. We'd be one- no, ten- steps closer to defeating these guys, and am I gonna pass up an opportunity for all of that and leave this door forever closed, or am I going to jump in there, no matter what? Butcher's thoughts wre interrupted by a yell from Adam. He had collapsed to the floor, and something very strange was going on. Adam seemed to be changing, his clothes turning dark as his hair turned black as well, his bangs replaced by black locks, and then back to his normal hair. He was in mid transformation, but into what? It didn't look like a mutant, but had he really been injected? He remembered Adam's dissapearence back on the ship, and now Butcher was growing very, VERY suspicious of his comrade. Especially now that he was flailing on the floor between two different forms. "Adam!" Jim cried. "What the heck is going on?!" It wasn't Adam's voice that answered him, but a deeper, rougher voice. "That Republic fool? Soon, I will be able to gain full control of his body!" The voice switched back to Adam's. "Run, Jim! Before he- my other half- takes over!" Huh? Other half? "Whaat?! Adam-" He stopped when he- or it, or whatever- yelled again and ran foward towards the black door, almost fully transformed into the other being. But there was still a trace of Adam, for Butcher heard: "Run! I can't hold him back any longer!" Jim was shoved aside, and was able to catch a better glimpse at the man: he had a black robe with a star-coated cape, wavy black hair, and a thin mustache that was slightly more prominent than Adam's stubble. Before Butcher could react, Adam- or the other man- tumbled through the strange black door.

Adam had no idea what was going on on Hoth- he was in his mind, struggling against his evil half. The evil half that was winning. How did I get myself into this? Adam asked himself. Oh yeah- never make deals with a dang statue that'll promise you your deepest, darkest desires. Yeah, 'cause they'll never keep their word. Instead, they put a megablockin' being into your body and turn you into a freak. Just what Mommys should tell their children at night. With that thought, Adam tried desperately to fight back. But the other self was winning, and it was obvious. But then out of the darkness, a flash of light sent the dark other flying away.

Adam woke up in a strange room with a man and an older Jim Butcher looking at him.

Yeah, I'm in the future with Garviel. I hope that's okay, because I intended to come and help him out. I'll add pics later, and I hope everyone is okay with this- you learn more about my character and nothing big happens except my time traveling.

Edited September 27, 2008 by Adam

[JimBee]

The strange being rose. It was hideous, and looked noting like Adam. Jim slowly pulled out his pistol from his belt. He had found all of his equipment in a room on the way in. The thing looked at Jim, and surprisingly quickly, knocked Butcher to the wall. The commander quickly got up and shot twice, dead center in the heart area. But it didn't seeto do any damage, and the last thought of Butcher's was Dammit, not again...

[Adam]

My first thought was: wait- I'm in the future! But then I understood that you were filling the gap between the time that I was in my mind and the time I was in the future.

[simonjedi]

I hope that's okay, because I intended to come and help him out.

I dunno, i don't mind you teleporting into the future, but not where i and jammiedodger will be, i have the "future arc" story planned out and am returning to hoth in a few posts

[Adam]

Well, I'm fine with you doing whatever with the story arc, just try to include me. Come back to the present- or past- however you like.

[Oky]

Very interesting post, Adam!

My first thought was: wait- I'm in the future! But then I understood that you were filling the gap between the time that I was in my mind and the time I was in the future.

Yeah, I was confused too. But that's the good thing about the fact that we are telling a time travel story - we can post parts of the story from whatever point in the time line!

The strange being rose. It was hideous, and looked noting like Adam. Jim slowly pulled out his pistol from his belt. He had found all of his equipment in a room on the way in. The thing looked at Jim, and surprisingly quickly, knocked Butcher to the wall. The commander quickly got up and shot twice, dead center in the heart area. But it didn't seeto do any damage, and the last thought of Butcher's was Dammit, not again...

C'mon, Jim, you can do better than this! Stop posting such (almost) useless posts and tell me your coordinates already! I'm waiting for that.

Edited September 27, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi