halixon Posted May 29, 2015 Posted May 29, 2015 (edited) Next Chapter: The Tomb of Dar Askelohn Aeldric and Voraal usually took a circular patrol around the outskirts of Vanhorn, but this time they decided to take a different route. They traveled straight out west, on an old and forgotten road. They came across an old, ruined, and abandoned house which seemingly belonged to a Citizen of Avalonia. Though it wasn't necessarily abandoned, for the remains off the owner laid in a corner. Voraal peeked down a deep, dark hole in the flooring. He suggested to Aeldric that they explored it, for it seemed deep, and as if it held secrets down below. More Angles Below: The hole in the flooring: And the forests: I tried out a couple of different techniques for mini-trees here. The triple round 1x1 brick, and the dark-brown telescope. Edited September 18, 2015 by Windusky Quote
Balbo Posted May 29, 2015 Posted May 29, 2015 Very nice creation and story. I like the mini-trees you made Quote
Garmadon Posted May 29, 2015 Posted May 29, 2015 Nice job on the forest here, the abandoned house is also pretty good as well, especially the furniture inside A few tips for improvement would be to perhaps use some cheese slopes on the ruins to give a more jagged feel, and the forest ground could use a bit of texture with rising and lowering ground using smaller plates I'm looking forward to more of Aeldric and Voraal's adventures! Quote
Bregir Posted May 29, 2015 Posted May 29, 2015 Nice little ruin, Windusky! And I am wondering where your stories will take us next! I would suggest building some surroundings for the house to put it in a context, but in any case - cool first build! Quote
halixon Posted May 29, 2015 Author Posted May 29, 2015 (edited) Thanks for the tips and constructive criticism guys! Their next adventure (my next build) will represent whats down in that dark hole. Also, let me know, do you guys want dialogue in the descriptions for my builds? Edited May 29, 2015 by Windusky Quote
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