Puvel Posted June 5, 2015 Posted June 5, 2015 AoM Farm Phase 1 This is my first MOC. Tried to give it some terrain and a bit of rocks, I know there’s room for improvement so advise is welcome. Quote
Garmadon Posted June 5, 2015 Posted June 5, 2015 Very nice little build Puvel, the rocks and plants are great and the photography is superb! I would suggest a tad more texture on the ground and not making the brown lines so straight... a few studs could probably do the trick It is also nice if you could get a full picture of the build without cutting off the corners - still, an excellent first build, I'm certainly looking forward to your future contributions! Quote
LittleJohn Posted June 5, 2015 Posted June 5, 2015 As Garmadon said, this is an excellent first build! I really like the rocks and how you stepped the build up towards the back Quote
Exetrius Posted June 5, 2015 Posted June 5, 2015 Maybe you could mix a bit of the darker shade of brown with the normal brown, to represent wetter soil. Quote
Blufiji Posted June 6, 2015 Posted June 6, 2015 Overall I echo what Garmedon said, however this MOC has a certain charm to it that is worth acknowledging. Solid first build sir. Quote
Puvel Posted June 6, 2015 Author Posted June 6, 2015 Thanks for the comments, I’m smiling as I type! Will play around a bit with ground texture and rocks and see what happens. There are a lot of options so don’t know yet what to build next, maybe the little landscape will lend itself to something specific. Quote
soccerkid6 Posted June 7, 2015 Posted June 7, 2015 Glad to have you in Mitgarida, and this is a solid first build Perhaps lowering the reddish brown plates one plate, so that the surrounding terrain is a touch higher would look better. Or you could do a raised bed Quote
Lord Vladivus Posted June 8, 2015 Posted June 8, 2015 Nice little build- the photography is great! I agree about lowering the brown plates, but I like that the green's not just a flat plate, and you've raised it a bit! Quote
Balbo Posted June 8, 2015 Posted June 8, 2015 That's a nice first build I like the rock and the use of the olive green leaves. Quote
Gideon Posted June 8, 2015 Posted June 8, 2015 Interesting scene, are those plants sprouting immediately by magic from drops from that vial...? Quote
Puvel Posted June 8, 2015 Author Posted June 8, 2015 Hehe the main reason for using the vial was that I couldn’t find a rake or shovel when I was building this. I figured it could be some kind of cure or growth potion. Magic sounds good too, looks a bit like the plants just sprouted indeed! Quote
Jacob Nion Posted June 8, 2015 Posted June 8, 2015 Neat start, Puvel. The edge of the patch looks a bit sharp. Maybe a fence would work to give it a frame. And I don't know about the bark tan leaves on the rock. A plant should always have some kind of trunk, or at least roots that go to the ground. But good to have you in Historica! Quote
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.