mediumsnowman Posted August 3, 2015 Posted August 3, 2015 (edited) NOTE: This is a direct continuation of the story begun in Dannylonglegs build Cheknov's Gauntlet Location: F04- Illustria Tags: Spying, Piracy, Spaceship, Civil Onboard the OCS Axle, 1200 Hours. Octan Special Forces Break room. "Attention all Special Forces agents. This is Dr. Danielle Long. There has been a breach and an escaped prisoner has launched an escape pod and is en route to Illustria as we speak. Find him and subdue him with non-lethal force. This is not a drill. It is imperative he is recaptured as soon as possible. I repeat, this is not a drill." "You heard her. Let's move out." "This is Jebediah O'Reilly reporting in from Illustria. We've found the escape pod but there's no sign of the prisoner." "It's empty." "Ambush! Get down!" "Aaaaarrrrrrgggggggg!" "Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhh! Sssshhhhoooooooootttttt hhhiiiiiiiimmmmm!" "Fire!" "This is Jebediah O'Reilly. We've subdued the prisoner but I've got two agents down with minor electrical burns. Thank the Lord the Gauntlet was on its non-lethal setting. Requesting immediate extraction and medical attention." "Good work agents. Let's get him back to the Axle." Whew! Thanks for reading through all that! As usual, comments and criticism welcome. Did anyone catch my Jurassic Park reference? Edited August 3, 2015 by mediumsnowman Quote
mrcp6d Posted August 4, 2015 Posted August 4, 2015 I really like the shuttle/escape pod! Also, hooray for Octan coffee! Quote
SpacerSteve Posted August 4, 2015 Posted August 4, 2015 I like how you sunk the pod into the terrain. Quote
Kodan Black Posted August 4, 2015 Posted August 4, 2015 Nice pod and I especially liked the scene of Jeb waist deep in water. Very cool idea. Quote
Dannylonglegs Posted August 10, 2015 Posted August 10, 2015 Man, I loved this! The escape pod is perfect! And the scenery is awesome! The action is the best part! Love the waist deep water scene! Very good idea! pleasure working with you on the shared story! ~Insectoid Aristocrat Quote
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