Zaael Posted September 21, 2015 Posted September 21, 2015 (edited) : "We're approaching the location sir. Want me to wait at the entrance?" : "No, fly around a bit. I'll send you a signal when I'm done." : "Yes sir." This gives Zaael the chance to park the cab somewhere close by and listen in on the conversation. He takes up position around the corner. : "Move along!" : "I'm here to see your boss, it's important." : "And I should believe that why?" : "Your faith in your friends is yours." : "Correct answer, proceed." : "Our efforts to sabotage the Rebellion's mission are paying of." : "Very well, we are very happy with the progress you are making." : "How is your end of the deal coming along?" : "We are taking the measures needed to get you the correct codes." : "Very well, I take it they will be delivered in time?" : "Yes, one of my guards will bring you the datapad in person." : "I will be looking forward to it. Driver, come pick me up." : "Oh one more thing..." : "Yes?" : "When you're moving your... uhm cargo... we need you to take one extra piece. My guard will be filling you in on the details when he brings the pad." : "What?!? This is not what we agreed upon!" : "We could always perform a security scan on your ship..." : "Grrrr, whatever, we'll do it, but we need extra credits for the extra cargo." : "It will be arranged." : "Get us out of here driver!" : "Very well sir. Did the meeting go well?" : "None of your business!" : "Sorry sir, none of my business indeed." Zaael got the information he needed. The Black Sun is sabotaging the Rebels for someone to get Imperial codes to get their goods off planet. And they are working with or rather for someone with access to those Imperial codes. Interesting! And this extra piece of cargo, could it be? Only one way to find out! Extra pics: 10/01/2015: I've edited in the first picture. This is not supposed to be judged, but I feel like my post is more complete like this. Edited October 9, 2015 by Zaael Quote
mediumsnowman Posted September 21, 2015 Posted September 21, 2015 Great vehicle! I'm not entirely sold on the color scheme, but it has a really cool design. The building is also great, I love the lettering over the door. Quote
Kodan Black Posted September 21, 2015 Posted September 21, 2015 That taxi is so tacky (in a good way!) and very scifi. You did a very nice job on the street scene build and even included stuff up on the roof even though it is only visible in one picture. Quote
Artizan Posted September 21, 2015 Posted September 21, 2015 Great building and speeder design! Interesting story as well.. Quote
Commander Beltar Posted September 25, 2015 Posted September 25, 2015 Wow, great build! Love the taxi, and the building, sidewalk design is a neat addition too! I also have to say that I really like the format of your build, with the 'opening scroll' and all. ~Beltar Quote
Zaael Posted September 25, 2015 Author Posted September 25, 2015 Great vehicle! I'm not entirely sold on the color scheme, but it has a really cool design. The building is also great, I love the lettering over the door. Thanks! I picked this color scheme because the vehicles on Coruscant are colorful. Glad you like the design. That taxi is so tacky (in a good way!) and very scifi. You did a very nice job on the street scene build and even included stuff up on the roof even though it is only visible in one picture. Thanks! I've added some figless shots where the roof is better visible. Great build! Thanks! Great building and speeder design! Interesting story as well.. Thanks, I tried to mix the story in the original assignment in my own. This is awesome! Thank you! Wow, great build! Love the taxi, and the building, sidewalk design is a neat addition too! I also have to say that I really like the format of your build, with the 'opening scroll' and all. ~Beltar Thanks!! I hear the voice of TCW and Rebels series intro scroll in my mind every time I read it myself. What do you guys think of my story? This is the first time I've done it like this, with a whole conversation in there. Do you see the reference to the Episode assignment? Quote
goatman461 Posted September 30, 2015 Posted September 30, 2015 great color scheme and amazing details on the building walls. I think some background removal would've gone a long way to making this feel more in-universe. as it is now, i think seeing the blue ground makes this feel like it's on the ground rather than part of a Coruscant city-scape. Can you post a link to where you got that opening scroll effect? Quote
Zaael Posted September 30, 2015 Author Posted September 30, 2015 Yes good point. I will try and edit one picture and see if it changes anything, for future purposes. I created the scroll in Gimp. Added a text box to an empty canvas and used the perspective tool. :-) Quote
Zaael Posted October 1, 2015 Author Posted October 1, 2015 (edited) SoNE Ep IX: A Secret Meeting on Coruscant That turned out pretty awesome if I say so myself. Edited October 9, 2015 by Zaael Quote
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