Tariq j Posted November 30, 2015 Posted November 30, 2015 The Battle of Suprosa had only just begun, and yet it appeared things were going pear-shaped. I had been assigned with preventing the Rebels from getting to the computer rooms, however after shortly separating from my fellow comrades it had come to the Empire's attention that one of the main computer rooms was being breached. I reacted instantly and made my way through the wrecked maze of the Suprosa until I approached the last corridor. As soon as I looked down a heavy object went from my throat down to my stomach. Losing troopers in battle was not uncommon, but the thought of losing a close friend dying for what he believed for without witnessing whether he was successful or not? Now that was a different matter. I made my way to the fallen comrade and lifted his helmet only to realize it was not one of our men, A rebel had disguised himself as an Imperial trooper and had either been discovered by one of ours or been gunned down by his own men, either way he had failed, and anxiously I opened the doors to the computer room to see if anything was destroyed, but It was okay, everything was as though it had just been built. Quote
Lord Tyrus Posted November 30, 2015 Posted November 30, 2015 Nice build, the pictures are a bit big though! Quote
Commander Beltar Posted November 30, 2015 Posted November 30, 2015 Huh, I never really thought about using the existing stickers.... Great use of those, also, you might want to make your photos a tad bit smaller, I don't know if those fit in the restrictions.. Quote
LucasLaughing Posted December 1, 2015 Posted December 1, 2015 (edited) -------------------------------------------------------- After action report - prepared by Sgt. Kirana -------------------------------------------------------- Trooper Tariq performed his duty well, securing a computer room to prevent the rebels from stealing its data. He also discovered an enemy infiltrator, and put out the alert to be on the lookout for others. Although he's still a rookie, Trooper Tariq is a fine addition to the platoon. ------------------------------------------------------- Nice hallway - those sticker parts go really well with the angled columns you built. I also like the angled walls of the computer room, although the gaps between the panels are a bit distracting. I'd suggest using more light when you're photographing - that will help reduce the noise/graininess in your pics. Edited December 1, 2015 by LucasLaughing Quote
Zaael Posted December 1, 2015 Posted December 1, 2015 The stickers are awesome! I also like how you made it modular. The top of your MOC looks a little unfinished, adding tiles makes it look more finished. Quote
goatman461 Posted December 1, 2015 Posted December 1, 2015 great first shot, the angle is just right and the hallway looks good. the door could use some detail to make it look less like a wall, and the final room is too unfinished to have been included. there are quite a few spots where some tiles could have really cleaned up the random studs. great snot work on the floor Quote
Tariq j Posted December 1, 2015 Author Posted December 1, 2015 Thanks for the comments everyone! The pics are unusually large and I will amend those as soon as possible. Quote
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