[OL FQ] Part 1 - An unexpected meeting

[robinnilsson403]

This is the first part of the faction quest to discover the hidden artefact on Île de Zeus.

It was a peaceful day on Île de Zeus. There hadn't been as much fog as usual and this young lad, Gawyn, ventured into the forest hoping to find a nice place to make a treehouse.

Suddenly there was a noise behind him. He turned, and when he saw the reason for the noise he screamed! He even dropped his axe.

"Aaaaaaah!!!"

"Don't you worry lad! If I would want to harm you I wouldn't have made that sound. I'm Herid Fel, and I'm a scientist. I've lived with the natives for some time now."

Gawyn relaxed. He hadn't met any natives who could speak his language with such a nice accent.

"You see lad, This tribe has things to tell us, or rather you, now. My companion here would like to see the chief. Eh, I mean... Mayor or military commander. There is something in the forest they should know about."

"Oh, well that's a'right then! I know both the mayor and the commander!"

"Well lad, could you take us to any of them?"

"Sure! This way mister scientist man!"

While they began walking the two natives began to speak, but nothing that Gawyn could understand.

Critics and comments are welcome!

I didn't have time for a setup with a nice background, and the light was... Bogus.

A few more pictures can be found at my Flickr page.

[soccerkid6]

Good use of the palm leafs on the cliff wall, and the pictures accompany the story nicely

[TitusV]

Nice story, Nice vegetation, Nice build!

[Tezclatipoca]

Nice little jungle!

I like the way you used the palm leaves on the rocks ! Good job !

[blackdeathgr]

Indeed, palm leaves on the wall is a nice idea! Now lets see how our story evolves