pombe Posted August 9, 2016 Posted August 9, 2016 Personnel Files: Empire Pom Be, Stormtrooper TK-8554 Rookie Stormtrooper assigned to Razer Squad, led by Sergeant Tarina Dooze. Tarina Dooze, Stormtrooper Sergeant TK-947, callsign "Sadist" Leader of Razer Squad, which, while not considered an elite Imperial unit, has developed a reputation for being exceedingly ruthless under Tarina's leadership. Sever Gohlan, Stormtrooper TK-4444, callsign "Sparkles" Veteran Razer Squad Stormtrooper. Currently, on Tatooine... I'm innocent, you Imperial goons! I have no idea what you are talking about! We've intercepted transmissions from your home detailing Imperial patrol movements in your neighborhood. While we don't know exactly who the intended recipients of these transmissions are, we do know the only reason why someone would send them is to help the Rebellion organize against us. It wasn't me! I've been framed! We'll let the interrogation droid determine that. TK-8554, hold on. Sir? See, see?! Listen to your commander! She knows I'm telling the truth! It's time for your initiation. Heh. Initiation? What's going to happen is that this Rebel sympathizer scum is going to resist arrest. And in the ensuing struggle, you are going to put a blaster bolt through him. Then we will leave his decrepit corpse here to desiccate and mummify as a warning to others who might think of betraying the Empire. And in my report, I will state how well you handled your first assignment. Wait...I'm just an old man! You can't do this! YOU FIEND! <pew> Congratulations, "Fiend". And welcome to Razer Squad. All comments and criticisms welcome! Quote
bricklover Posted August 10, 2016 Posted August 10, 2016 Excellent forced perspective and story! Quote
Merc4Hire Posted August 10, 2016 Posted August 10, 2016 Great forced perspective! I like how you managed to fit all the details like the moisture vaporator and the two suns. Quote
WickNole Posted August 10, 2016 Posted August 10, 2016 Oh mine oh mine... That's a thing the Alliance certainly was not expecting. Welcome! Quote
Cody Startale Posted August 10, 2016 Posted August 10, 2016 Admirable build, but what got me the most is the simple and effective narrative. I gotta admit, I'm a sucker for the story parts of Nar Eurbrikka, especially when they are executed as well. Fantastic! The part about Fiend getting her alias is very cleverly written, I really love that. Can't wait to see more! Quote
Zaael Posted August 10, 2016 Posted August 10, 2016 Oh dear! At least in this universe you sigfig isn't walking around naked (yet). Welcome! Great intro, I really like the forced perspective and the faces of the crazy squad. :-) Quote
Dannylonglegs Posted August 10, 2016 Posted August 10, 2016 Whooo hoo! Pombe's an Imp! Love the story, and love that vig! It's so clean and well designed! Really great work on the forced perspective! Reminds me of your "The freaks come out at night" Also the characters are delightfully viscious! What head do you use for the squad leader? I wanna say it's a tmnt character... Great work and welcome to the Empire! ~Insectoid Imp Quote
pombe Posted August 10, 2016 Author Posted August 10, 2016 What head do you use for the squad leader? I wanna say it's a tmnt character... Quote
Kodan Black Posted August 11, 2016 Posted August 11, 2016 Oh goodness, pombe is building in here too now? Wonderful forced perspective. Quote
Shadows of Nar Eurbrikka Posted August 13, 2016 Posted August 13, 2016 Judges have awarded you 3 XP! Quote
Forresto Posted September 26, 2016 Posted September 26, 2016 The forced perspective is fantastic here! Great job! Quote
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