[SoNE Ep. XII.II] E10 - Commendation

[pombe]

Personnel Files:

Imperial


Pom Be, Stormtrooper TK-8554, callsign "Fiend"
Rookie Stormtrooper assigned to Razer Squad, led by Sergeant Tarina Dooze.


Tarina Dooze, Stormtrooper Sergeant TK-947, callsign "Sadist"
Leader of Razer Squad, which, while not considered an elite Imperial unit, has developed a reputation for being exceedingly ruthless under Tarina's leadership.


Sever Gohlan, Stormtrooper TK-4444, callsign "Sparkles"
Veteran Razer Squad Stormtrooper.


Corren Goohee, Captain of the Imperial Carrack class cruiser Seeker
An aging Imperial naval officer with no notable achievements, assigned to a second line Imperial starship. Oversees Razor Squad.

Previously: http://www.eurobrick...howtopic=138634


Currently, aboard the Carrack class cruiser Seeker in orbit above Tatooine...


<door hisses closed>


Captain, you wanted to see me?





TK-8554, yes. I've read the report from Sergeant Dooze regarding your first assignment. You acquitted yourself quite well.

Thank you, sir.

It seems that Dooze has even given you a callsign. It's rare for Razer Squad rookies to earn their callsigns during their first assignment. You must have really made an impression.

If you say so, sir.

Some say our methods are ruthless, that we destroy freedom in the name of oppression, but those are weak minded fools. We do not seek to oppress. You have to understand the fundamental principle of the Tarkin Doctrine, you see.

The Tarkin Doctrine, sir?

The idea that one should rule through the fear of force, rather than force itself. Which is why examples must occasionally be made, such as with the planet of Alderaan and with the Rebel sympathizer that you took care of. Freedom cannot be obtained without order, and order cannot be established without fear.

I understand, sir.

Excellent. Anways, I just wanted to commend you on a job well done. Go on, then. Return to your duties.

Yes, sir.

All comments and criticisms welcome!

[MKJoshA]

Wow. Not only have your perfected Star Wars greebling, you've written an incredible story that fits perfectly within the Star Wars universe! Great work!

[LucasLaughing]

Great use of the soundbrick and missile launchers to achieve a cool wall texture, and I like how the binocular pieces look like cameras (or blasters?) watching every door. A very nice summing up of the Tarkin Doctrine as well.

[goatman461]

Beautiful work Pombe, and so interesting to see your dark side. You did a great job capturing the Imperial style and certainly made a quick study of it. NPU throughout with the floor, transition in the walls, and the curved slopes connecting the ladders is a nice touch.

Really glad to be building with you again.

[halixon]

Amazing job! This feels so Star-Warsy and Imperial.

[Forresto]

Gorgeous! To mirror everyone else, this looks spot on for Imperial design!