Matteo Kenobi Posted March 18, 2009 Posted March 18, 2009 (edited) First of all if someone could completely change the title to Republic Mobile Command Speeder (MCS) as it has been completely updated! Thank you Pieces: Roughly 154 Back story- During the Great Clone Wars Jedi and Clone would work together to defeat the separatists. During large land battles when vast amount of Clones would need to be controlled the MCS would act as a mobile command station as well as a taxi, being it well armed and well armored and of course speedy. It was a center for contact between clones and Jedi and in emergencies used to get the wounded off the battlefield Front: Back: Back-Open: Top: Top-Open: Left: Right: Angle: Please Post, Comment, Critique, it would all be very much apprecieated!! Many many more pictures on Flickr http://www.flickr.com/photos/organize/?start_tab=sets Thanks for looking!! Edited March 30, 2009 by KimT Quote
Natman8000 Posted March 18, 2009 Posted March 18, 2009 If you dont mind I really would like to say that this looks like a pile of bricks on legs. I dont really like the whole shape of it IMO. But the idea is good, and improvements could really turn it around. Quote
Matteo Kenobi Posted March 18, 2009 Author Posted March 18, 2009 If you dont mind I really would like to say that this looks like a pile of bricks on legs. I dont really like the whole shape of it IMO. But the idea is good, and improvements could really turn it around. No I like the critique, I understand though, how do you think I could improve the shape? Quote
Natman8000 Posted March 18, 2009 Posted March 18, 2009 No I like the critique, I understand though, how do you think I could improve the shape? I think you could use some wheels instead of legs, and then the shape could be different. so you could have a pilot in a small canopy in the front, and then the command center behind it or something like that. Quote
Matteo Kenobi Posted March 18, 2009 Author Posted March 18, 2009 Hmm, that I see, I think I could definitely work with something like that, I'm getting a few ideas now that could definitely improve it. Maybe treads with a larger area yet still open. Thank you Natman8000 I am still open to other opinions though! Quote
Natman8000 Posted March 18, 2009 Posted March 18, 2009 Hmm, that I see, I think I could definitely work with something like that, I'm getting a few ideas now that could definitely improve it. Maybe treads with a larger area yet still open. Thank you Natman8000I am still open to other opinions though! One more thing. Doing a mobile command center on a small scale is very tricky, so you might want to expand your pieces. Quote
Matteo Kenobi Posted March 18, 2009 Author Posted March 18, 2009 One more thing. Doing a mobile command center on a small scale is very tricky, so you might want to expand your pieces. I understand, I'll think about that, the only thing is my pieces are limited and don't have to many, although that's what BrickLink is for Quote
Tim Bit Posted March 18, 2009 Posted March 18, 2009 I like it but I think you could beef up the legs. Other than that its a nice moc. Quote
CommanderCody77 Posted March 19, 2009 Posted March 19, 2009 I think that the shape looks like the head of a Tri-Droid and I suggest you could make the interior bigger and make more armor for the legs Quote
Matteo Kenobi Posted March 19, 2009 Author Posted March 19, 2009 Thank you all for the great critiques, I guess it's safe to call this a WIP as I have taken all of your suggestions and I now have a new design in mind that will hopefully improve this! Thanks again! Quote
CloneCommanderDelta7 Posted March 19, 2009 Posted March 19, 2009 No I like the critique, I understand though, how do you think I could improve the shape? You could start with a roof, and maybe a bigger interior space? Quote
Matteo Kenobi Posted March 21, 2009 Author Posted March 21, 2009 Thank you all, I have decided to completely destroy and start again with all your suggestions, hopefully I have come up with something better, please let me know! Quote
KimT Posted March 21, 2009 Posted March 21, 2009 Hmmm... looks like a scorpion with no legs to me Perhaps adding scorpion legs would look great? Quote
RileyC Posted March 21, 2009 Posted March 21, 2009 I think you should make the engines bigger because engines that seize couldnt push that ship. Its just too unfeasible to me Quote
Matteo Kenobi Posted March 21, 2009 Author Posted March 21, 2009 Hmm Scorpion legs, an interesting idea, I may just use that. Thank you all for the comments, I'm off for spring break now but I'll get back and have an official entry by the due date, thanks again! Quote
CommanderCody77 Posted March 22, 2009 Posted March 22, 2009 You have changed quite a lot! It looks great now and has a lovely interior Quote
KimT Posted March 30, 2009 Posted March 30, 2009 Super update. Hopefully it'll do well in the vote. Good job on the pics and modifications Quote
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