Natman8000 Posted May 17, 2009 Posted May 17, 2009 (edited) In the dawning of the Pirate Imperials, they were commonly found to be raiding villages inhibated by the islanders. And now, the new Islander Rebellion has started a new project and created several ships in defense. This is one of them. It is a fusion of the A-wing, and the Islander theme. Front- Back- Top- Side- Side- Edited June 14, 2009 by Natman8000 Quote
Artizan Posted May 17, 2009 Posted May 17, 2009 nice start, you captured the islander feel in it, my suggestion is that you try to make it resemble more like the a wing, like maybe adding spears as side cannons or etc. Quote
Natman8000 Posted May 17, 2009 Author Posted May 17, 2009 nice start, you captured the islander feel in it, my suggestion is that you try to make it resemble more like the a wing, like maybe adding spears as side cannons or etc. Actually, yesterday I was building on it, and I did just that. When I make it perfect You'll see. Quote
Guss Posted May 17, 2009 Posted May 17, 2009 I have to say I totally agree with Artizan, and I think that if you improve it a little, it would be a great entry As example, use the palm tree things : I mean, this piece in brown ^^ Quote
Natman8000 Posted May 18, 2009 Author Posted May 18, 2009 Updated. I'm still working on it, so keep in mind the isnt the final edition. Quote
CloneCommanderDelta7 Posted May 18, 2009 Posted May 18, 2009 (edited) It just looks like a flying rock Edited May 18, 2009 by CloneCommanderDelta7 Quote
posades Posted May 18, 2009 Posted May 18, 2009 It just looks like a flying rock Haha, a flying rock in the shape of an A though! Quote
xenologer Posted May 18, 2009 Posted May 18, 2009 Too long and tall for the A wing. Ought to be short and wide, with an obvious triangular shape when seen from above. Quote
Natman8000 Posted May 18, 2009 Author Posted May 18, 2009 Too long and tall for the A wing.Ought to be short and wide, with an obvious triangular shape when seen from above. Yes, but it sort of is an A shape. Its really just an islander spaceship, that is a bit like an A-wing. Quote
YG-49 Posted May 19, 2009 Posted May 19, 2009 Nice It's just, there's this beautiful rock and foresty type look, with all the green, and then there's a control panel. It really breaks the forest look. Also, it's a little skinny. Goodbye... *The critique* Quote
RileyC Posted May 19, 2009 Posted May 19, 2009 Its good but doesnt really look like an a wing. I do like how you did the cockpit though its really good I like how you used the rock for the fuselage. Quote
KimT Posted May 19, 2009 Posted May 19, 2009 Indexed. Make sure to make good use of the comments given by other members - as they are the ones supposed to vote for you in the end. Quote
calebexo01 Posted June 4, 2009 Posted June 4, 2009 That is really cool! King Kahuka is one of my favorite minifiguresand you created a great vehicle for him. I love the rocky details on the front. Unlike everyone else, I think it looks like an A-wing. But, if you wanted it to look more like an A-wing, I suggest making the tail divide into two seperate parts, to look like the A-wing's rocket jets. Great job! It just looks like a flying rock I also think it looks like a flying rock Quote
Commodore Hornbricker Posted June 4, 2009 Posted June 4, 2009 I love the rock built A_wing fighter piloted by an Islander. I imagine it is equipted with the latest Palm Frawn shields and coconut blasters! Quote
Wout Posted June 5, 2009 Posted June 5, 2009 lol, never knew King Kahuka was allied with the rebels. Maybe some extra palmleaves for the shape of a a-wing. Quote
KimT Posted June 8, 2009 Posted June 8, 2009 Great entry, now where's that needed background story? Quote
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