Zepher Posted May 17, 2009 Posted May 17, 2009 (edited) EDIT: COULD A MOD/ADMIN CHANGED THE TITLE TO EPISODE 7? Season 1 Episode 7 The Invasion of Ingration Part 6: Rescue Catch-up: Vimpu has threatened to kill Versilles and Marik if Gruff and Old Papa refuse to surrender the planet. Kuplo is creating a distraction while, at least he thinks, everything else is going according to plan. Gruff and Old Papa, while refusing to save Versilles and Marik, have shut down half of the Droids by seizeing and shutting down one of the droid control towers. Okay, time for editors notes! I know you're going to tear the opening set apart becuase you're going to hate the colors. Fair enough. I've always imagined cities to be colorful. You don't. We differ. We'll be leaving this planet within the next few comics, so we won't have to to debate it further shortly! I personally loved the opening set, and wish I could of played with it more! That's really it for this episode! Hope you enjoyed! -Zeph Edited May 17, 2009 by Zepher Quote
Natman8000 Posted May 18, 2009 Posted May 18, 2009 I hate to be a wet blanket, but almost all of them to me feel the same, a bit uninspired. You should try to change the setting and plot a bit, because frankly, I really cant follow this. Quote
Zepher Posted May 18, 2009 Author Posted May 18, 2009 No need to be sorry for saying what's on your mind. They should all feel bsically the same, they're the same story. A setting change happens after number 9 though, and then again in number 14 I dmit they're hard to follow. I wanted a complicated story. Here's a synopisis, for what it's worth! Episode 1: Jedis are intro'd to the clones, learn of the Clone Wars. Episode 2: Old Papa lands and meets Vimpu, who shows he knows Versilles. Episode 3: The others land, and then split up. Gruff and Old Papa go to the Droid control center, Versille and Marik to the CIS general. Episode 4: Versilles and Marik are captured after a fight. Episode 5: Gruff and Old Papa capture the control base. Vimpu alerts them that he's captured Versilles. Gruff says he'll not save him. Epsiode 6: Versilles flashes back to the last time he was captured on another planet (where he was in episode 1) Episode 7: Versilles is rescued. Quote
Bartram Posted May 18, 2009 Posted May 18, 2009 Good work, Zepher, I'm really enjoying this series I agree semi with Natman, but why not make some huge twist or something? Quote
CommanderFox Posted May 18, 2009 Posted May 18, 2009 (edited) Another WONDERFUL comic Zepher Well done!! i cant wait for the next one CommanderFox Edited May 18, 2009 by CommanderFox Quote
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