Battles Of Time-Chapter 3

[Eskallon]

Hi

I made comic 3 and 4 together as they are both parts of the same story but anyway the first part is here. I think the gun shots were good in the comic, I made them in Gimp. I know nobody reads these comics but please comment if their is anyone out their. I mean 40 views and no replies and I don't even know if that includes guests. Anyway here you go.

[Eskallon]

Thanks for so many replies everyone.

The next comic will be up tomorrow sometime.

[Zepher]

I can make a few suggestions.

1) Go into everyone's history a bit more! Take maybe an episode for each character to flesh them out a bit, make them real characters, not just people who are there to fight.

2) Scenery is needed. Always. Never let anything that is not Lego show, it looks sloppy.

[Eskallon]

Thanks for your comment Zepher. I will certainly be cutting out any non lego items from now on and this will take place on and after comic 5. I shall also be going into the history of them anyway as that was what I planned for episode 5.

Oh actully sometimes I will use a backdrop as shown in some of the other episodes.