Battles Of Time-Chapter 4

[Eskallon]

Hi all

I guess I shold get straight too the comic but if you have any thoughts about this please comment.

If anyone has read up too the end, thanks for reading.

[Luke McAwesome]

The comic is good, but there are a couple of things you should try to work on:

1) Maybe give the guy with the visor some hair to cover his "other" face?

2) Try to work on the punctuation, it got really confusing because I couldn't really understand what they meant.

3) Try to prefocus the pictures. This is kind of hard at some times, and I have trouble with it too if it's a cramped space. For example, in my series, TTOTLM, I have a boat-load of pics that turned out terrible because where I was taking pics was too cramped.

Take this in consideration, it might help a lot.

[Eskallon]

Thanks for commenting Striker, I will be following all your suggestions and improve the comics to come in the future.

Oh and for anyone else interested the next comic will be up in a week and a bit as I am going on vacation tomorow.