Castle Cormaris

[Sir Tsaboc]

Hey everyone, here's my latest castle MOC. It was inspired by Kevin Fedde's (crimson Wolf) Castle Caraval.

Here's the rest of the set.

Let me know what you think!

[Sir Dillon]

Nice work. Crimson Wolf's original is very cool, and yours is a neat variation.

I like your choice of colours, but the mixing could use a little smoothing. You have seemingly random spots of colour, and I think the overall effect is a little ugly. Perhaps it might help if you try to think about why something is the colour it is, and then use that to effect their placement. (For example, if the tan is plaster, and the white and grey are different types of stone.)

The structures look good, and so does the bridge. One thing that caught my eye is the slopes under the arch on the bridge. I suggest either extending the bridge to eliminate those slopes, or add some on the other side. Having them on only one end like you do now looks bad to me.

[Sir Tsaboc]

Thanks for the tip! I also had some issues with the color scheme while building this.

[saberwing]

Looks good , but likeSir Dillon said; The colour scheme isn't correct.

I do like your Gondor soldiers though!

[Norro]

Interesting, I missed the original (so no prejudice there...) but I still can't help feeling that this MOC is missing something. And probably something easily added since the current elements are all quite well done. Cheers for posting!

God Bless,

Nathan