Making The Whole World Blind

[Zepher]

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Editor's Note: Mostly happy with this episode. Not 100%, there were some things I tried and didn't like, and a lot of things I tried and DID like. I won't tell which is which, since generally if i do so the "critics" just repeat that back to me. So, tell me what YOU thought was good and what YOU thought was bad.

-Zepher

[Bob]

I've been following these stories, and I must say, these are very nicely done.

Somehow, I picked up in the last story that Green intended on shooting the scientist's after they dug too deep. Excellent story, though. Your photography has improved, too, which is always a good thing.

[Eskallon]

I loved the suspense built up in this chapter of the story. However I disliked the blob of brightness in the second to last photo.

[hawkrider]

This is serious business not what I usually see nice comic only problem wrong is the lighting other then that it's great.

[Asterios]

Well I liked the things that you liked and didn't like the things you didn't like, eagerly awaits the next issue.

[Zepher]

Thanks for the comments y'all! Next comic may be up next weekend, or some time this week, depending on how motivated I am and how quickly I can get a set done.