The Legonater Posted November 11, 2010 Posted November 11, 2010 (edited) At the corner of two busy spacelanes sits a popular site in Coruscant- the Jones Hotel. Standing like a ruby on the crowded streets it draws in tourists everywhere, as well as people with little else to live in. Cheap prices make easy marketing for the hotel, as well as a spectacular view and comftorable rooms. Vendors often profit from the hotel's success, setting up shop near the bright red walls. The local isn't just a place to sleep overnight, however. Some busy pedestrians like to go there merely to relax outside home. Whether you're a Ithorian or Human, the Jones Hotel is the place for you. Outside the hotel, a weary travellor stops at a bench. As he looks out at the traffic, he considers staying at the hotel. Beside him, a Bothan sells a rare drink from his homeplanet. A thirsty man takes a drink, then prepares to finish it before heading into the hotel himself. An elderly gentleman on his hoverchair comes back from a 'stroll' through the city. As he enteres Jones Hotel to rest, someone else exits, a holopaper in hand. A couple walks nearby, considering the hotel as a place to rest. Inside the main lobby, a large statue captivates people as they wait to be checked in. People look mournfully at the seal in the middle of the room, representing the place where Inry Jones's grave was buried- the hotel was then bult in her honour. A Kel Dor sits on a comfy chair- also red- and watches. A young women from a distant planet speaks with the secratary, hoping to stay in the hotel for a few days. Meanwhile, the fan blows the room to a comftorable temperature. Inside the rooms, a women lyes on her bed, witha comfortable night gown supplied by the hotel. In another room, an old mechanic works on his bike from the ground up- something that he's been working on for years, with full support by the staff of the Jones Hotel. Personally, I was hoping on finishing this earlier. But alas, here it is. Comments and conserns are welcome. EDIT: I have added the roof, it took shorter than I thought. I have also added the word Hotel in Aurebesh, a fan, a plant, and a seal with a backstory. Edited November 13, 2010 by The Legonater Quote
Masked Builder Posted November 11, 2010 Posted November 11, 2010 I think it cool! Nice work on the curved rooms. Quote
Darth Yogi Posted November 11, 2010 Posted November 11, 2010 Looks nice. Are you going to build a roof? I like how you made the effects of all the lights in the darkness. Good luck. Nice job Quote
XimenaPaulina Posted November 12, 2010 Posted November 12, 2010 Nicely done The Legonater, simple but gets the job done. A bit more of additional detailing would really improve this one. Good luck in the contest bud! Quote
The Legonater Posted November 12, 2010 Author Posted November 12, 2010 Looks nice. Are you going to build a roof? I like how you made the effects of all the lights in the darkness. Good luck. Nice job I plan to make a roof, but I'm not sure if I'll get it done in time for the contest. Quote
The Legonater Posted November 13, 2010 Author Posted November 13, 2010 Unlikc I thought I would, I have added the roof, it took shorter than I thought. I have also added the word Hotel in Aurebesh, a fan, a plant, and a seal with a backstory. Quote
Big Cam Posted November 17, 2010 Posted November 17, 2010 This is very basic, but I like it. Agreed, it brings me back to my younger days when I MOC'd regularily. Quote
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