Bkrosell Posted February 22, 2014 Posted February 22, 2014 We've been chasing this man for what seems like forever, a man with no name, no face, and no witness's left behind. He has always been good at covering his tracks, until I came along. This man has a rep longer than Corusant's history, murder, armed robbery, you name it he's done it. Probably the most important thing about him though, he's my brother. After our parents were brutally murdered by the imperials, we both took measures to make sure they didn't do that again. His turned out to be more drastic, which brings us to why we are hunting him. The republic needs his expertise for... certain jobs. We tracked him to Nar shaddaa, me and my team, and learned of his favorite club. There we loaded the area with undercover agents, when my brother walked by three of the agents placed there turned on him and drew their guns, at the same time as him. Hearing the commotion, I ran across a short walkway through a crowd of civilians and saw the following scene... To be continued... I would like this to be judged C&C welcome Quote
MKJoshA Posted February 24, 2014 Posted February 24, 2014 Wow. This is definitly one of your best builds yet! It has a very SW feel, great angles, it's a street scene instead of the normal space ship/station (which is great!), and your photography is improving greatly! Quote
sin Posted February 24, 2014 Posted February 24, 2014 I like the 'moment in time' feel to this MOC. There is definitely a sense that all hell is about to break loose, I want to see an 'aftermath' vignette . Nice work! Quote
Nom Carver Posted February 24, 2014 Posted February 24, 2014 I like the action going on between the crowd, great job. Quote
Bkrosell Posted February 24, 2014 Author Posted February 24, 2014 Wow. This is definitly one of your best builds yet! It has a very SW feel, great angles, it's a street scene instead of the normal space ship/station (which is great!), and your photography is improving greatly! I like the 'moment in time' feel to this MOC. There is definitely a sense that all hell is about to break loose, I want to see an 'aftermath' vignette . Nice work! I like the action going on between the crowd, great job. Thanks, for the positive feedback guys, I've actually had this thing stored on a shelf since sometime before Christmas. I just never found the time, with school and extra curricular sports, it just gets hectic around Christmas. Anything you would like me to fix? Quote
Shadows of Nar Eurbrikka Posted April 27, 2014 Posted April 27, 2014 Judges have awarded you 3 XP! Your character's stats will be updated shortly. Quote
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