goatman461 Posted April 17, 2014 Posted April 17, 2014 Tie pilot Goatm An 461 is happy to only have to fly over Nal Hutta on this trip. His sensitive slave girl is happier for it, too. I would like this freebuild to be judged during the SoNE IV episode, please. Quote
SinWolf89 Posted April 17, 2014 Posted April 17, 2014 Wow! I like that window over the planet! It makes the scene more alive Quote
green dewback Posted April 18, 2014 Posted April 18, 2014 You should build more detailed floor plates on the bottom left and right of the photo instead of white plates, that would bring a more immersive spaceship feeling. Quote
MstrOfPppts Posted April 18, 2014 Posted April 18, 2014 (edited) I see you're on a MOCing roll ... These planets really are usefull for such MOCs with forced perspective. I think that there is too much white, which is more suitable for the rebel's ships. Also there's too much contrast using black with white and maybe going with a gray ship would look better. It'd also distinguish the space from the ship more. The outer plate widh grills looks a bit excess for not carying anything or being more detailed (with some tiles around or something ... You'll get used to my comments that usually point out the inferior parts of the builds, but I think you have a lot of potential, so keep up the good work! P.S. I'm not sure Vader would be pleased to find your bxxxx slave on the ship ... Edited April 18, 2014 by MstrOfPppts Quote
Shadows of Nar Eurbrikka Posted April 27, 2014 Posted April 27, 2014 Judges have awarded you 2 XP! Your character's stats will be updated shortly. Quote
markus1984 Posted May 2, 2014 Posted May 2, 2014 Wow - great shot! Nice idea how you use the planet. markus Quote
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