krono111 Posted May 21, 2014 Posted May 21, 2014 Hey Guys Here's my entry for Category A in Challenge II. Main: Closeups: And here a story behind it: A two-men team was searching for those ridiculous drow. Suddenly, one of them heard a noise. "Wait, I heard something." "What you heard?" "Steps..." "Yeah, I hear them too" They both gripped their swords. "Fast! Hide behind this rock!" Screamed the smaller soldier. They both ran and jumped behind the large boulder. "It's a drow." Whispered the bigger soldier as he peeked through a crack. "Those d... dr... drow are really dangerous" "We have to run on three, otherwise it will find us." "O.. Okay" "1... 2... 3!!!!!" They jumped out and sprinted away as fast as they could. When they were about two meters away, one of the soldiers tripped and so the other stood guard and helped him up. Then, the drow mysteriously sank down to the ground. "We... we.. we did it!" "Yes we did but those drow may come back." And so, the two soldiers walked away, more scared than ever. A huge thank you to my friend Kian Greyhelm ( https://www.flickr.c.../116481599@N03/ ). He corrected the story and replaced many words with better ones (I'm sadly not a native speaker but working on a better English). CC is always welcome especially for the tree since it's my first one (I recently ordered many leaves and plants). Bye and we hopefully see us in Category B (I'm already working on it) Quote
Scaevola Posted May 21, 2014 Posted May 21, 2014 Nice entry, the the rock and landscaping are good. The tree is also excellent, Quote
Yooha Posted May 22, 2014 Posted May 22, 2014 A nics vignette and tree. By the way, which soldier is the bigger? Quote
Lord Vladivus Posted May 22, 2014 Posted May 22, 2014 Nice tree! Love the expression on the soldier! Great story too. Quote
TheUtilityBelt Posted May 22, 2014 Posted May 22, 2014 Lovely vig, Krono! The tree is a good first. Heck, I can't build like that yet! Quote
krono111 Posted May 22, 2014 Author Posted May 22, 2014 (edited) By the way, which soldier is the bigger? The one that peeked trough a crack. Thank you for your feedback guys! Edited May 22, 2014 by krono111 Quote
soccerkid6 Posted May 23, 2014 Posted May 23, 2014 Excellent photography, your tree and landscape look good as well I like the pose of the guy peeking around the rock Quote
krono111 Posted May 23, 2014 Author Posted May 23, 2014 Excellent photography, your tree and landscape look good as well I like the pose of the guy peeking around the rock I love your MOCs so thank you for your feedback! Quote
MassEditor Posted May 24, 2014 Posted May 24, 2014 Nice photography and scene, keep it up dude! Quote
Rogue Angel Posted June 21, 2014 Posted June 21, 2014 Nice little build! I like the tree and the story. Quote
de Gothia Posted June 21, 2014 Posted June 21, 2014 Looks very good for sure! My only small nitpick would be to edit your background better... Some small areas where you still have some dots Quote
Gabe Posted June 23, 2014 Posted June 23, 2014 Nice landscaping on your vig krono! You've got some good height and bulk on the tree, which is an excellent start. Next time you might want to start experimenting with longer or branching branches, protrouding tree roots or boles in the trunk - all ways in which you can increase realism in your trees. (It's also good to remember that the ground often tends to be be slightly higher around the base of large trees.) Quote
Maxim I Posted June 26, 2014 Posted June 26, 2014 (edited) Very nice tree!! The only remark is to fill the empty studs on the tree with cheese slopes :) Edited June 26, 2014 by Damaximus Quote
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