BrickCurve Posted September 8, 2014 Posted September 8, 2014 (edited) The gate of Anrarr Castle, stronghold of the Wanderer of Kaliphlin, Located on the grasslands of the northernmost Island of the Inland Sea. UoP credit for Landscape Design, Dense foliage landscaping, Architecture, Round walls and Towers, Geography, Grass lands and Military Science, Fortification. Edited September 27, 2014 by BrickCurve Quote
robuko Posted September 8, 2014 Posted September 8, 2014 (edited) Very nice BrickCurve! The wanderer has a nice home base. I especially like the vegetation, which gets a +1 from me. Some things to think about: those lower floor windows are very easy to enter for a bad guy army, if that fails they could swarm up the ivy, so there might need to be some back story that the walls are no longer defensive because of the glorious peaceful nature of the island or whatnot. Also the color blocking on the walls is nicely varied as you intended, but generally real buildings use color variation either as quite geometric decoration, or in patched up walls from different time periods. You might like to experiment with different color patterns on this round wall technique. I realise the cylinders are limiting your color usage. Have a think about how you could put some nice little scenes in the back ofthe towers. Great build. Edited September 8, 2014 by robuko Quote
BrickCurve Posted September 8, 2014 Author Posted September 8, 2014 (edited) Very nice BrickCurve! The wanderer has a nice home base. I especially like the vegetation, which gets a +1 from me. Some things to think about: those lower floor windows are very easy to enter for a bad guy army, if that fails they could swarm up the ivy, so there might need to be some back story that the walls are no longer defensive because of the glorious peaceful nature of the island or whatnot. Also the color blocking on the walls is nicely varied as you intended, but generally real buildings use color variation either as quite geometric decoration, or in patched up walls from different time periods. You might like to experiment with different color patterns on this round wall technique. I realise the cylinders are limiting your color usage. Great build though. True and good advice, but I would like to see an attacking army attempt to get through the small window with an archer on the other side, (not to mention that they wouldn't fit through the window). I have considered getting dark tan textured bricks as well, although I haven't got around to ordering them. Edited September 8, 2014 by BrickCurve Quote
Alfadas Posted September 8, 2014 Posted September 8, 2014 Nice! Like the curved towers, and the gate looks nice! Great work! Quote
Gunman Posted September 8, 2014 Posted September 8, 2014 Nice tower mate, if you are open to CC I would advice you not to use stems on all ground. Make variations Quote
BrickCurve Posted September 8, 2014 Author Posted September 8, 2014 (edited) Nice tower mate, if you are open to CC I would advice you not to use stems on all ground. Make variations Definitely a good idea although i'm not sure what to put there instead. Edited September 8, 2014 by BrickCurve Quote
IenjoyLego89 Posted September 8, 2014 Posted September 8, 2014 Wow looks really good. Might have to borrow some ideas from this :) only thing I say is maybe some brown tiles for the floor would be great :) Quote
TenorPenny Posted September 8, 2014 Posted September 8, 2014 The dry grass mixed with the green is really well done. Quote
Duvors Posted September 8, 2014 Posted September 8, 2014 Grass? In Kaliphlin? Sacrilege! Seriously though, great work, I like the mix of tan and grey in the walls. Quote
mccoyed Posted September 8, 2014 Posted September 8, 2014 Definitely a good idea although i'm not sure what to put there instead. Bare dirt in patches, maybe some water, or leaf peaces work nicely for thick vegetation. Quote
TheRedViper Posted September 8, 2014 Posted September 8, 2014 Nice gatehouse, very impressive build! Quote
Yzalirk Posted September 8, 2014 Posted September 8, 2014 Very nice build and the gate looks awesome. Quote
LordDan Posted September 8, 2014 Posted September 8, 2014 Looks very good! However I think that the vines growing in the same spot on each side makes it look too symmetrical. Maybe make on shorter than the other and don't have the guards on top of the wall be symmetrical. Quote
Gideon Posted September 8, 2014 Posted September 8, 2014 Very nice gate and towers, I especially like how you've managed to roof them so well Those tan round bricks by the gate would have been better spent breaking up the symmetry in the towers however imho, as the bands of dk bley cylinders draw my attention to the building technique used instead of just letting me enjoy the excellent shape of the towers. UoP +1 for grasslands. Quote
Scaevola Posted September 8, 2014 Posted September 8, 2014 Very nice moc, I really like the door and overall shape. UoP DoH +1 Quote
mrcp6d Posted September 9, 2014 Posted September 9, 2014 Definitely a good idea although i'm not sure what to put there instead. I would add a mix of tan sand and bley rock structure, especially since you're using tan (very effectively too!) as a major wall color. Some more tan on the ground would I think better sell the typical Kaliphlin landscape.Also, easy on the pictures... when I have to scroll through pics that are about 66% of the thread and I'm posting reply 16, I have to believe you've overdone it. Posting 1-3 pictures and then a link to the gallery is fine. Quote
-Carson Haupt- Posted September 9, 2014 Posted September 9, 2014 Well you're certainly living up to your name! I like it! I'd have to agree about breaking up some of the patterns more though. Quote
Hammerhand Posted September 9, 2014 Posted September 9, 2014 Nice gate! It fits along nicely with your other build! Quote
NiceMarmot Posted September 9, 2014 Posted September 9, 2014 Nice job all around. +1 for the grasslands. Quote
de Gothia Posted September 9, 2014 Posted September 9, 2014 Looking good for sure! The grassy area in front of the wall is a great touch according to me! The minifigs could use some more posings! Right now they all look in the same direction (and it´s not towards the rider leaving). Arrow slits on the first floor is rare, archers from the attacking side coulkd easily get near and kill the defenders.. Quote
cesbrick Posted September 11, 2014 Posted September 11, 2014 Nice MOC and nice color mix! Love those round towers! Quote
MassEditor Posted September 11, 2014 Posted September 11, 2014 Nice work BrickCurve, this is a pretty little scene. I think the color scheme works well and the overall design is simple but elegant. I too like the grassy area but maybe a small boulder or two would have broken things up a bit. The advice given above is all really good and could help you turn this into a really first-rate MOC. As it is, the build is just a little too symmetrical (even the figs are standing in the same spots) and could use some variation here and there. In any case, good job! Quote
soccerkid6 Posted September 22, 2014 Posted September 22, 2014 Sweet shape for the gatehouse I like the colors you used as well Quote
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