You've done really well as someone who's been reading Lego comics forever, I'm truly impressed. You got the angles and photography down, and it's one of the cleanest, least cluttered comics I've seen in ages. Maybe just find an editor and you're set!
I guess you could say this is a...Rayvision. Hahaha, I'm sorry, had to make the joke.
I remember when the original of this came out. I like what you've done. Definitely a lot more sleek. Better color scheme too.
Sorry, I was in Denver. Now that summer is here, I'll try and throw in a few free-builds. Haha, never was much use to start with, but hopefully I can be a little more helpful this time.