Hello
I present the first episode of my project: LEGO COMIC BOOK.
I got big dilema with it.
On one hand I got entire story, I would like to tell, in my head.
On the other I am not sure If mange to do it - IT is so BIG WORK.
So this is a try. A first short episode that took me 6 months.
Before I started shoting pictures I needed to build scenography.
The most important object in scenography for first episode was small space ship.
I made it together with interiors.
I really appriciate any comment that will help in continuing the project.
I mean especially comments regarding both visual part and the story telling itself.
I know the story is not revealed yet, and it is only a short fragment.On the other nad it is 34 pages and I am afraid it will be hard to read all of it.
So the main question. Is it readable ?