Tariq j Posted January 4, 2015 Posted January 4, 2015 Hello all, my first sone here, enjoy, Me and Jay continued searching Lotho Minor, the rebel ship was no where in sight, the Admiral would not be impressed, it was only when I saw a pair of macrobinoculars did I remember an incident that my father had told me about. http://www.brickshel...l/LEGOSW2/1.jpg Past Scene My father was a cargo trader, he worked days and nights delivering cargo to all places across the galaxy, he worked with three others, rando, who he considered the fairest of the three as he had convinced the leader to employ him. Rundul, the "right hand man" to our leader, and finally Kaz, are leader, kaz was a straightforward person, you didn't get on the wrong side of him, or you would be sorry. On one occasion they were delivering cargo on tatooine. http://www.brickshel...l/LEGOSW2/2.jpg We saw Battle droids scattered across the town, Kaz asked a man wandering out of a building what was going on, he replied "Jedi were sited here, they are questioning citizens and droids, be careful" "great" he mumbled "Just what we need" he knew there were lots of illegal goods inside the crates. http://www.brickshel...y.cgi?i=6207875 He approached them, and attempted to negotiate with them, but there was no way forward, "we need to see your cargo sir" demanded the droid. Kaz pulled his pistol out of his pocket and nodded to Rundul, things were getting nasty. http://www.brickshel...l/LEGOSW2/5.jpg And before we knew it a gun fight had started between the droids. http://www.brickshel...l/LEGOSW2/6.jpg And before my father knew it, Rando had been shot, my father rushed to him, he had been hit in the arm, he looked up and saw the fighting was still happening. unexpectedly he reached for a thermal detonator in his back pocket and launched it at the droids. http://www.brickshel...l/LEGOSW2/8.jpg http://www.brickshel...l/LEGOSW2/9.jpg The droids were gone in an instant, battered parts lay on the road, they rushed around Rando, who was on the floor, the shot was not fatal, but it had injured him extremely badly. "good going kid" Kaz said to my father. http://www.brickshel.../LEGOSW2/10.jpg My father had been carrying macrobinoculars that day, and, for some reason, whenerver he used them he was reminded of the day he saved his crew. http://www.brickshel.../LEGOSW2/11.jpg Comments and feedback welcome Quote
OHarra Posted January 4, 2015 Posted January 4, 2015 Jawas and a gonk droid! What a great supplement to the scene! Quote
Kodan Black Posted January 4, 2015 Posted January 4, 2015 I'm confused where you say Jedi are there questioning people but then it they never appear and it is battle droids. I like the action shown, but the story was a bit confusing. Quote
Tariq j Posted January 4, 2015 Author Posted January 4, 2015 Thanks for the feedback much appreciated As far as the story is concerned, I see where you got confused, basically Jedi had been sited in that particular area so battle droids were sent to investigate and they were questioning citizens as to whether they had seen the Jedi. Quote
Lord Tyrus Posted January 4, 2015 Posted January 4, 2015 (edited) Nice build, just a tip, paste the link in the box that pops up when you click the icon next to <> in the editing box for the image to appear. Edited January 4, 2015 by Lord Tyrus Quote
Kodan Black Posted January 4, 2015 Posted January 4, 2015 As far as the story is concerned, I see where you got confused, basically Jedi had been sited in that particular area so battle droids were sent to investigate and they were questioning citizens as to whether they had seen the Jedi. Ok, now I get it. Good action sequence. Complements the story very well. Quote
Tariq j Posted January 4, 2015 Author Posted January 4, 2015 (edited) ^^ Thankyou! Both Thanks for the tip as well, I'll try and edit this tomorrow so the images appear. Edited January 4, 2015 by Tariq j Quote
MKJoshA Posted January 7, 2015 Posted January 7, 2015 Great story! I would try to use a solid background for your pictures and be careful about the warmth of your lighting. Quote
Tariq j Posted January 11, 2015 Author Posted January 11, 2015 Markus: Thankyou Markus, glad you liked it. MKJoshA: Thanks, got a solid white background and I'll be using it tomorrow when I post my freebuild. Jacob Nion: Thanks, good luck to you to. Quote
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