James Wellington Posted January 26, 2015 Posted January 26, 2015 (edited) [soNE Freebuild] "The Escape" Please comment, tell me what you think, it helps me to better perform next time. This is my fifth Episode. INTRODUCTION: Captain Vars recently found out that one of the B-Squad members, Dan Jars, James's friend, was a Rebel spy. The Captain now waits for Admiral Brickton's arrival, as he prepare's to take one of B-Squad's members into Imperial custody. Meanwhile, the B-Squad do their transmission duties, awaiting their secret mission to the Rebel station that won't arrive. Star Destroyer "Tyrant", Brick System, 2 ABY. SONEe5s1 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Captain Vars: We welcome you aboard the Star Destroyer Tyrant, Admiral. Admiral Brickton: Thank you. You have a lovely ship. Perhaps after we terminate this spy I can tour the ship. Now, we do have a mission of our own to do here. SONEe5s2 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Captain Vars: Yes, Sir! SONEe5s3 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Admiral Brickton: We all know he's dangerous, and possibly even armed at the moment. Do you know his current location and what he's doing? Captain Vars: Yes, Admiral. He's in the Communications Room with the other B-Squad members. It's not far from here. SONEe5s4 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Admiral Brickton: Excellent! We shall have to calmly get the other B-Squad members out of the area before we make our move. Captain Vars: Yes, Admiral. Admiral Brickton: We'll require weapons, too, in-case it goes wrong. Captain Vars: Already taken care of, Sir. SONEe5s5 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Imperial Gunner: Here you are, Captain, Admiral. Captain Vars: Thank you, gunner. SONEe5s6 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Admiral Brickton: Shall we catch this rebel spy? Captain Vars: *Sigh* Yes, Sir. SONEe5s7 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr SONEe5s8 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr SONEe5s9 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Captain Vars: Hello, Sergeant Trans. Sergeant Trans: Hello, Sir! Captain Vars: I'm afraid we have to arrest one of your B-Squad troopers for being a rebel spy and traitor. We will explain it after. Sergeant Trans: What?!? I've fought with these boys through many battles, I...I. This is not possi- Captain Vars: We will explain it after, Sergeant. Step aside. I know it's hard, but you will understand soon. SONEe5s10 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Darek: Not bad, newbie. I think you just saved the Imperials on Coreillia. Didn't think you had it in 'ya. Dan Jars: Yeah, great job, James! I knew you could prove yourself a value to the team! I consider you a great friend. James: Thanks, guys! It was nothing, really, I was just doing my job as a Stormtrooper. Dan Jars: Heh. Keep doing your job like that, and a promotion's coming on for you, bud. James: That'd be cool. Thanks for the support, Dan. Dan Jars: No problem, you're my best friend. We all need some support. SONEe5s11 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr SONEe5s12 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Captain Vars: James, Darek, please get out and get some rest in your rooms. The Admiral and I have to talk with Dan for a little bit. James: Alright, Sir. See 'ya, Dan. Dan Jars: Bye, have a good rest you guys. SONEe5s13 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr SONEe5s14 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Captain Vars: Hello, Dan. How are you? Dan Jars: Hello, Sir! I'm fine. You wanted to talk with me? Captain Vars: Actually, Admiral Brickton would like to talk with you for a bit. SONEe5s15 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Dan Jars: Alright, Sir. SONEe5s16 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Sergeant Trans: Sir, what's going on here? I just saw James and Darek go by, why is the Admiral talking to him? What did you say about an arrest!?! Captain Vars: *lowers voice* Dan Jars has been found guilty for being a Rebel spy, and a traitor of the Empire by the Imperial Security Bureau. Sergeant Trans: What??? No! SONEe5s17 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Captain Vars: Look, I don't want this to be happening right now, either, but he is one of the many Rebel spies that are spying on us, even within our own ranks. That get close to us, even become high ranks, and then feed information to the Rebellion and wait for their time to either make their escape or to cause damage to the Empire. Sergeant Trans: No, I refuse to believe this! He can't be a spy, he can't be, he is a loyal trooper in the B-Squa- SONEe5s18 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Captain Vars: Be quiet! It's hard to understand, but if you don't be quiet, you'll be going away with him! We will fully explain it to you and the team after we arrest this spy! Now be quiet! Sergeant Trans: *Sigh* I don't believe that what's happening right now is real. SONEe5s19 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Admiral Brickton: Hello, Stormtrooper Dan. Dan Jars: Hello, Sir! SONEe5s20 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Admiral Brickton: I'm quite afraid my visit with you will not be pleasant for you. Dan Jars: Why would that be, Sir??? Is something wrong? SONEe5s21 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Admiral Brickton: I'm quite afraid there is something wrong. You're a traitor to the Empire! You're a Rebel Spy! Dan Jars: What? No, you have the wrong man! I'm not Rebel spy! I'm a Stormtrooper Corporal, Sir, I'm loyal to the Empire, I... I'm I- SONEe5s22 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Admiral Brickton: Quiet! You will come with me now, Spy. You will be interrogated, and most likely terminated. If you do not come with me without any stuggle, I will shoot you, Rebel Scum! SONEe5s23 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Dan Jars: NEVER! Admiral Brickton: Agh! SONEe5s24 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Stormtrooper: Urgh! Captain Vars: Wait, what? SONEe5s25 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Dan Jars: Don't move, or I'll shoot! Captain Vars: You traitor! How could you do this, we trusted you, we, we, we- SONEe5s26 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Dan Jars: THE EMPIRE BETRAYED ME. SONEe5s27 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr SONEe5s28 by BrickJamesWells, on Flickr Sergeant Trans: Urg, he shot me in the leg, I'm wounded! Captain Vars: *panting* He.....escaped, *pant* Sir... Admiral Brickton: *panting* Get him before he causes damage! See what happens next in Episode 6! Please comment, and tell me what you thought! Edited January 26, 2015 by James Wellington Quote
MKJoshA Posted January 28, 2015 Posted January 28, 2015 Great action! Your story is progressing nicely! I would also recommend not counting this as your last XP freebuild. I think part 2 would be a better fit. Quote
James Wellington Posted January 28, 2015 Author Posted January 28, 2015 Thank you. I'm not quite sure 100 percent how the XP thing works, how you get it from the judges, when they judge, how they give you points, etc. Quote
MKJoshA Posted January 28, 2015 Posted January 28, 2015 You get XP from the judges (and no one knows exactly who they are) and they judge when they have time. After they are done judging they will post on your freebuild topic how many XP points you've earned and then your stats on the Character topic get updated. You can also update your signature after getting XP. You are only allowed to earn XP from 4 freebuilds per episode. As soon as a new episode starts, the count roles over. Right now we are still in the Episode 7 time for freebuilds. As soon as Ep. 8 starts you will get 4 new freebuilds open to you. You can build more freebuilds outside those 4, but only 4 get judged. I hope that makes some sense Quote
James Wellington Posted January 29, 2015 Author Posted January 29, 2015 I completely understand now. Thanks for helping! Quote
James Wellington Posted January 31, 2015 Author Posted January 31, 2015 Thanks! Glad you like it. Quote
Shadows of Nar Eurbrikka Posted February 7, 2015 Posted February 7, 2015 Judges have awarded you 2 XP! Quote
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