Commander Beltar Posted June 12, 2015 Posted June 12, 2015 Location: A07 Lesser Direstan Tags: Land/Water Vehicle, Piracy, Spying =================================================================================================================================================== Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part: 004: “Planet hoppin’ is a semi-fun task. Anyways, I’ve been on a boat for the last couple hours. Even though the air on this part of the planet has been recorded as breathable, I will NOT trust it, kinda a pet peeve of mine. I really won't breath on an alien planet without a purifier near by. Thank Kawashita that this boat isn’t big enough for PauL to get on…He VOLUNTEERED to come with me, there’s barely enough space for me! Oh what do we have here? You look like some of the people that Koro reported. The Dust Demons. Computer, begin transmission with PauL. Computer: Yes sir. PauL: Yes sir? Paul, I’m going to need permission from headquarters to engage a long Dust Demon. PauL: Okay sir, first off, I need to record at least one line of the Dust Demon and I need a description of what he is doing. Okay, I’ll get you a line. Computer, amplify the Dust Demon's speech. Computer: Relaying Now: Ugh, terrible planet, but great money for exporting these, by Dues, they are beauties! These babies are gonna get me a whole lot of gold stuff. I just basically repeated myself…I gotta get ‘em of this planet though. Why do people on Orinshi love these threes? And oh my! I’m talking to myself again… Computer: He’s is now silent. Okay, PauL did you get that? Yes sir, but I still need your description of what he is doing. HE’S GETTING TREES TO SMUGGLE ONTO ORINSHI FOR CRYING OUT LOUD PAUL! Sorry, I exploded again, anyways, don’t add the 'for crying out loud PauL' please. PauL: Okay sir. ...Brief Silence.... P (cont.): Permission to Engage Granted Roger that PauL! Surprise you little demon! Demon: Where'd you come fr— Threat Neutralized. PauL: Good. Yeah now what PauL? I could hang here, seems like the oxygen here is breathable, I wont trust it though till we get a purifier here. PauL: Is everything loaded onto the boat? Yup PauL: Sir, we must take the body and supplies back to HQ for investigation. *sigh* Okay, well maybe I can redeem my Kawashita Land Grant Permissions on this planet...At a later date of course. PauL: Let's get going please... Close Log, Chapter 1, Part 004 =================================================================================================================================================== More Pics in the spoiler! Overview of the Island The Boat The Rest Are Trees! This was a fun build, because I have never actually built good trees before! Yet funny how these trees are not normal trees. Yes, Kawashita has Land Grants on conquered planets. I think. I needed some sort of smuggler, so I figured Koro's may as well work so that it could fit in to continuity because of the Dust Demons being close by. Anyways: C & C Welcome! ~Beltar Quote
pombe Posted June 13, 2015 Posted June 13, 2015 The white trunks and red foliage definitely make your terrain feel alien. Great story, I guess those Dust Demons don't stand a chance against Kawashita! Quote
aeralure Posted June 13, 2015 Posted June 13, 2015 I really like the trees too. Got a chance to see some earlier. Great job! Quote
Dannylonglegs Posted June 13, 2015 Posted June 13, 2015 Lovely build, and excellently executed red foliage! Those trees are stunningly gorgeous! ~Insectoid Aristocrat Quote
Tomsche Posted June 13, 2015 Posted June 13, 2015 I love how you did those `technisized` trees, great job! Quote
LittleJohn Posted June 13, 2015 Posted June 13, 2015 Really great work on the foliage! I like how the red and white flow together Quote
narbilu Posted June 13, 2015 Posted June 13, 2015 Actually the best part is how you use the white background and bottom to your advantage... I love the foliage and build a lot. Quote
NuckElBerg Posted June 14, 2015 Posted June 14, 2015 (edited) Nice build, nice trees, nice story! Good job man (even though you seem a bit too sane now for my taste )! Edited June 14, 2015 by NuckElBerg Quote
Commander Beltar Posted June 14, 2015 Author Posted June 14, 2015 Thanks for the comments everyone! Glad you like it! The foliage was a lot of fun! Nice build, nice trees, nice story! Good job man (even though you seem a bit too sane now for my taste )! Haha! I think with time I will make him more insane. Perhaps Beltar forgot to take a pill or something that day on D10? I'm trying to keep my story going without it all being in caps from a madman Anyways, glad you like the build/story too! Quote
shmails Posted June 14, 2015 Posted June 14, 2015 The colors of your landscaping a fantastic. Really well done! Quote
Big Sal Posted June 14, 2015 Posted June 14, 2015 Loving the foliage, and also the crates. Simple but very effective! Quote
Zepher Posted June 15, 2015 Posted June 15, 2015 Like I said in the discussion, absolutely lovely trees! Great inspiration! And down with the Dust Demons!! They seem to have nearly as many planets as the corporations. Quote
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