mediumsnowman Posted June 19, 2015 Posted June 19, 2015 (edited) BEGIN TRANSMISSION 06: SPECIAL FORCES JEBEDIAH O'REILLY TO OCTAN HQ SECURE CHANNEL 768954 18 JUNALI AD 3815 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hey HQ, I've got a Code 3819: Undead Artichoke on G03. I'm transmitting you my coordinates. Requesting immediate backup. I want Dr. Long here in half an hour, max. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- END TRANSMISSION 06 OCTAN DISPATCHER: Dr. Long and her team are airborne. ETA 20 minutes. DANIELLE LONG: Hi Jeb, what's up? JEBADIAH O'REILLY: I've got an unidentified alien artifact. Looked like it fell from the sky, tore up the sand and clay pretty good. I want you and your team to get a look at it. The artifact has a identification number and some sort of eagle symbol, but Octan databases have nothing on either of them. DANIELLE LONG: Good thing I brought the mobile lab. We'll find out where it came from and what it's doing on G03. We'll be there in a few minutes. Long over. [O-GO3] A Mysterious Commodity [O-GO3] A Mysterious Commodity [O-GO3] A Mysterious Commodity [O-GO3] A Mysterious Commodity [O-GO3] A Mysterious Commodity [O-GO3] A Mysterious Commodity Poor employee getting chased by scorpions! [O-GO3] A Mysterious Commodity Though Dr. Long seems more interested in her new plant specimen than the alien wreckage Thanks for looking! I think this is my best Andromeda's Gates build so far and definitely the one I worked the longest on. Comments and criticism are welcome! Edited June 19, 2015 by mediumsnowman Quote
Dannylonglegs Posted June 19, 2015 Posted June 19, 2015 Ah, it seems Dr. Long is trying out her yellow protective gloves this week! Poor employee getting chased by scorpions! Following in the grand tradition of Octan employees! It seems this galaxy has an infestation. Though Dr. Long seems more interested in her new plant specimen than the alien wreckage What can I say? She's more of a wet sciences, kinda woman, after all. Lovely build! I agree that it's your best yet! There's so much going on! I love your SNOT BURP! Very effective! Also, the rockwork on the ledge is very well done! Great job! ~Insectoid Aristocrat Quote
mrcp6d Posted June 19, 2015 Posted June 19, 2015 I really like the crime scene vibe this gives off. We've really got to come up with some repellent for this galaxy's scorpion populations! Quote
LittleJohn Posted June 19, 2015 Posted June 19, 2015 Great build! I really like the use of the LURP Quote
aeralure Posted June 19, 2015 Posted June 19, 2015 I too like the investigative quality and the staging. Well done! Quote
rodiziorobs Posted June 19, 2015 Posted June 19, 2015 Got to agree with mrcp60d, the mobile lab, the flood lamps, it all gives a nice crime scene feel. They better be careful, though, or they'll have more to worry about than scorpions--they may just find an enormous green rage monster! Quote
Big Sal Posted June 19, 2015 Posted June 19, 2015 Maybe this should be called the scorpion galaxy Nice build mediumsnowman - great work on the landscaping Quote
Kodan Black Posted June 19, 2015 Posted June 19, 2015 Great staging with the guy running from the scorpion and the CSI crew! Quote
pombe Posted June 19, 2015 Posted June 19, 2015 Awesome scene! I love how it conveys the feel and action of an investigation site! Great terrain, the rock work is fantastic! And best of all, brilliant dialog and story! Quote
LucasLaughing Posted June 20, 2015 Posted June 20, 2015 Hah, I love the code undead artichoke I like your terrain - especially the way the rocks slope downward gradually. My only suggestion would be to use more light while you're photographing - the picture are a bit grainy / dark. Quote
shmails Posted June 20, 2015 Posted June 20, 2015 The story is great, and I love the CSI feel of the build. Nice work! Quote
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