Commander Beltar Posted June 26, 2015 Posted June 26, 2015 (edited) Location: F10, Arium Major Tags: Military, Spaceship, (Octan) Spying VERY STORY/PICTURE HEAVY ============================================================================================================================ Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part: 006: “So I got to go on the front. Boring. Haven’t seen an Octan Camp in a while…And PauL? That robot? He just LEFT ME HERE! ALONE! Eh, at least he isn’t bothering me. But he seriously shouldn’t be alone on an Octan controlled planet…I’m in a ship called the Tap Dancer, or in its real name, Tappudansu. But it means Tap Dancer. Yes, it’s definitely a weird name, it comes from a flying technique where you fly and land the ship every mile or so, for sightseeing, or other things like dropping bombs…This one is heavily modified, the Labboys removed the ‘heel’ for me, in order to dock with my main ship. Nice and quiet at this alti- SIR, THIS IS PauL! I REPEAT THIS IS PauL! COME IN? PauL? What is it? Octan Ambush, they were quick they took the research tablet, I can’t stand up, theurestillhere,comequicksir! QUICKLY? Octan? I’m comin PauL, got your coordinates and going there as fast as I can. Also, wow! YOU’RE asking ME for help! ! … Alright, coming in for a landing! PauL, PauL, PauL! You're a wreck! What have they done to you? Sirkkzzzz…The-y-y-y-y Tooooooookkkk, theeee re-sear-ch-ta-ble-t-in-my-chest. What was in the tablet, better not have been Kawashita Secrets… Nononosir, It was quantum research and psychological research. Psychological? I’d deactivate you right now, but you're already in ‘pain’ let me hook you up.. Sirr…Behind…The…Bush…Octan…is…here…get….your…stuff…quickly… Octan 1: Wait till he walks away from the robot between his ship. O2: Got it! O1: SHHHH… Drone: I will record for Octan Command… kr O1: Freeze you Kawashita scum!! Beltar: Whoa, whoa, we can talk this out like gentlemen can’t we? O2: I’m afraid we can’t. And that robot technically belongs to us now by the Octans Laws of The GATES Volume X. Beltar: um- O2: It states that anything fund on a planet unaccompanied by a minifig is ours to take. (Beltar tries to tiptoe over to his ship to get his swords and wingpack) O2: STEP AWAY FROM THE SHIP! We don't want any surprises.. **Minifig Discretion Is Advised** You think all my surprises are on that? THINK AGAIN! COME AT ME YOU IDIOTS! PauL: *faintly* NO SIR! Don’t—your condition---the drone----- O1: Let’s get him! AHHH O2: YEAH! OH MY! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Beltar: HAHAHA! O1: Runn—nn—nnnn--- O2: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Beltar: WHERE ARE YOU GOIN? COME BACK HERE! YOU OCTAN SCUM! O1: *panting* You! You MONSTER! Have mercy! I BEG OF YOU! Beltar: Monsters have no mercy. What were you saying PauL? PauL: get the drone…. GET OVER HERE! Octan, If you use that research tablet from my robot, I will find you all, and you will end up like those men over there. NOBODY OTHER THAN ME CAN SHOULD HARM MY ROBOT! AND TAKE HIS STUFF! SO GOODBYE AND FAREWELL TILL I GO KILL ANOTHER COUPLE! (uh, sir? Better not ask him right now…) Well PauL, let me go hook you up to the ship now.. More Pics in the Spoiler: The Octan Bike is based of my rendition of Dragonfly in Rendezvous with Rama, with added lights. I never put all those mini mocs up or took photos. Also the drone is based on Bob’s. Main Terrain All Terrain Bloodied Terrain Ship Landing Bonus PauL does fit! Come on, how does that not look like a shoe? (Added the heel for photo…) Encoded Octan Channel: Edit that message, and send it to Kawashita. I want them to see a different reason for this attack. Not for his robot, add something, ‘just for fun’. That’s the quote. Add that in there. Encrypted Kawashita Channel: Octan just sent this in sir. Looks edited. And that guy’s got a condition. Let him off the books for now. Give this report to someone else, like the labboys, I think his condition is getting worse… Close Log, Chapter 1, Part 006 ============================================================================================================================ Thanks for reading this pic and story heavy build. I took way to many photos…Also, Beltar is getting more insane I think.. Hope you enjoyed! ~Beltar *I believe Tappudansu does translate to Tap Dancer.. Edited June 27, 2015 by Commander Beltar Quote
narbilu Posted June 26, 2015 Posted June 26, 2015 OMG... What a scene, so Samurai... so little honor so much glory Fabulous build Agent... Quote
Ferdinando Posted June 26, 2015 Posted June 26, 2015 Cool story and vehicle! You did a great work with the minifig posing and the gory details. Quote
Dannylonglegs Posted June 26, 2015 Posted June 26, 2015 Great build! I love that the ship can carry your wounded PauL! Hey, wait... is that one of Dr. Long's balls? What's that doing there... "hmm... So Kawashita's serial killer is upset with us. I wonder what's on this nifty Research Tablet that he's so upset about? I suppose there's only one way to find out..." ~Dr. Long Quote
Kodan Black Posted June 26, 2015 Posted June 26, 2015 (edited) I like the Kawa ship and the Octan "dragonfly"... it seems a bit odd the Octan guy with the gun would walk up to you. Clearly we need better firearms training. Edited June 26, 2015 by Kodan Black Quote
EpsilonEta Posted June 26, 2015 Posted June 26, 2015 Nice build Also, Beltar is getting more insane I think.. Koro will take care of that if it get worse Quote
mediumsnowman Posted June 26, 2015 Posted June 26, 2015 This is an abomination! Kawashita will face charges for the murder of these two spies unarmed ambassadors in the highest court of Andromeda! Quote
Commander Beltar Posted June 26, 2015 Author Posted June 26, 2015 Thanks everyone! OMG... What a scene, so Samurai... so little honor so much glory Fabulous build Agent... Thanks! And I was thinking so little honor when building that. You ruined such a nice suit! Oops...I think you can restitch that back on..But a lot of stain remover too.. Kawashita, Stop this aggression! Technically, it's Beltar's aggression, Don't mess with his stuff. Cool story and vehicle! You did a great work with the minifig posing and the gory details. Thanks! I had a pile of red 1x1 tiles and etc lying around when I was ready to take photos... Great build! I love that the ship can carry your wounded PauL! Hey, wait... is that one of Dr. Long's balls? What's that doing there... "hmm... So Kawashita's serial killer is upset with us. I wonder what's on this nifty Research Tablet that he's so upset about? I suppose there's only one way to find out..." ~Dr. Long Don't you dare open it! And he's not a serial killer...yet..but he probably won't become one.. Love that speeder! Thanks! Except its more of a spaceship that stays in the atmosphere, but I guess it can double as a speeder.. I like the Kawa ship and the Octan "dragonfly"... it seems a bit odd the Octan guy with the gun would walk up to you. Clearly we need better firearms training. Octan needs to train better... Nice build Koro will take care of that if it get worse Uh-oh. This is an abomination! Kawashita will face charges for the murder of these two spies unarmed ambassadors in the highest court of Andromeda! Uhh....This gives me more ideas! (for future freebuilds, when I get around to those...) ~Beltar Quote
mccoyed Posted June 26, 2015 Posted June 26, 2015 Nice build Koro will take care of that if it get worse Quote
Dannylonglegs Posted June 26, 2015 Posted June 26, 2015 Don't you dare open it! And he's not a serial killer...yet..but he probably won't become one.. [/Quote] I was mostly just referring to his "or I'll kill another couple" comment. Octan needs to train better... We might need to learn some ground tactics... ~Insectoid Aristocrat Quote
LittleJohn Posted June 26, 2015 Posted June 26, 2015 Excellent spaceship and cool landscape too Quote
Mike S Posted June 26, 2015 Posted June 26, 2015 (edited) Should've been called "High Heel"! Nice build! Edited June 26, 2015 by Mike S Quote
NuckElBerg Posted June 27, 2015 Posted June 27, 2015 Great build Beltar, really like the story, and the ship and the scenery are fabulous! Great job! (Also, I'm really, REALLY glad Beltar is on our side! ) Quote
Jody Meyer Posted June 27, 2015 Posted June 27, 2015 You ruined such a nice suit! I was thinking the same thing, Nice layout...Why are Octan folks always seem to be killed off? Good story as well Quote
Big Sal Posted June 28, 2015 Posted June 28, 2015 Haha, I'm loving Beltar's descent into total madness Great build too! Quote
Commander Beltar Posted June 28, 2015 Author Posted June 28, 2015 (edited) He is killing for Kawashita..not that like that scientist.. I was mostly just referring to his "or I'll kill another couple" comment. We might need to learn some ground tactics... ~Insectoid Aristocrat Perhaps he will kill a couple others. 'for fun'. Looks like you've finally learned some ground tactics! Excellent spaceship and cool landscape too Thanks! Should've been called "High Heel"! Nice build! I was originally planning having Beltar land on Octan spies...High Heel was a close choice for the name... Great build Beltar, really like the story, and the ship and the scenery are fabulous! Great job! (Also, I'm really, REALLY glad Beltar is on our side! ) Thanks! Be glad! I nearly chose MANTIS at the start... Fantastic story! Love all the action! Thanks! Haha, I'm loving Beltar's descent into total madness Great build too! Doing my best to make him insane. Wait. What did I just say? I'm going to try to show the consequences of his madness and insanity in various freebuilds...if I have the time... ~Beltar Test by DaDudeDownDaStreet, on Flickr Edited July 8, 2015 by Commander Beltar Quote
Blackhawk STX Posted June 29, 2015 Posted June 29, 2015 Oh, my! Such graphic violence! Wolverine would be proud... Quote
Zaael Posted June 29, 2015 Posted June 29, 2015 Very nice build and story... just kidding! You killed Octan employee's. That is not nice! Quote
Zepher Posted June 29, 2015 Posted June 29, 2015 As others have said all around good build and story! Love the work on the ships. I think the only part that's a little funky to me at least is how flat the ship is right around the cockpit, doesn't feel very angular… but great work over all, and I can't wait to see what Beltar gets up to next. He's pretty brutal. Quote
aeralure Posted June 29, 2015 Posted June 29, 2015 Great build! Like the ship a lot, as well as the Kill Bill sort of action sequence. Quote
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