[K B06] Houston, we have a problem...

[Col. Brik]

Mission 04 Sorn

It was a hectic week in the corporation. Orders changed around and I was limited in time and ability to make a proper plan for landing on Sorn. As I entered the atmosphere I had forgotten to adjust for the planet. In my haste, I still had a previous planets layout in the navigation computer and I wasn't prepared for the difference in gravity, altitude and the lack of actual land. A water planet. Me and water usually have issues.

****Mayday....Mayday.....This is flight BR549 in Sorn airspace, I lost thrusters and have had to ditch.******Mayday.....Mayday******

I crashed hard, not sure how I'll explain this to the bosses. The ship will be a total loss, parts of it are still visible, I hope they stay afloat because I am not sure if the rescue beacon is transmitting.

****I repeat....This is flight BR549 on Sorn, Col. Brik, I have crashed in area 6-4-4-3 and am in need of rescue*****

Oh great....what the heck is that floating at me? Some kind of big eyed red shark thing, just what I need. Bad enough I destroyed my ship but now I need to deal with this? Well, if I can take it out, I'll have food. If it is edible.

All I know is I better see a Red and Grey ship come soon. I'm also going to hate filling out the TPS reports and crash assessment forms.

[narbilu]

We'll pick you up Col.

[Balbo]

Nice! I like the brick build rubber raft

[Big Sal]

Haha, great lifeboat and creature!

[rodiziorobs]

Nice story, and I really like the wreckage.

[aeralure]

Great raft! We will be by to pick you up, just as soon as someone builds a rescue plane.

Edited June 29, 2015 by aeralure

[Andromedas Gates]

The judges awarded you 3 points.

[Mike S]

Command has ordered a scout boat to your coordinates to retrieve you.

Nice build! Really like the raft!