David FNJ Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 (edited) Location: D04 Terrial Minor - inside a Kawashitan Frigate Tags: MANTIS, piracy, military, spaceship interior AG: Frigate Raid by David FNJ, on Flickr Double D's log 13: We've managed to break into a Kawashitan Frigate in one of its open hallways, and we have located our target. We are after the Kawashitan strategic plans which are encoded inside a funny looking device. We have been tracking the device's movement on the frigate for some time, and now that it is in the open it is our time to strike. They should know that we don't like other corporations moseying around in our territory, and this device will make our attacks more effective later. The Kawashitan commander will not escape the hand of M.A.N.T.I.S. Okay, so he got away, but we got the device! Now to head out of here before the rest of the Kawashitan security force arrives! ~ DD out Here are some extra shots of the build. Sci-Fi crates! Bonus pictures of behind the scenes Edited August 23, 2015 by David FNJ Quote
Commander Turtle Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 (edited) Nice angled walls! Good way to make a spaceship interior. That said, I'm slightly concerned by all the killing. Tbh I'm surprised no-one has been court martialled or something from this, given that we're companies not warring factions! Edited August 9, 2015 by Commander Turtle Quote
Graham Gidman Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 Not sure about the pink, but the rest of the build is great! Quote
Dardanel Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 I'm awfully curious as to how you made those walls :D Any chance of you posting a tutorial? : ) Quote
shmails Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 Fantastic walls and the action is really cool! Not sold on the pink, but I understand why you did it, and it is a nice use of the part. Quote
mediumsnowman Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 Love the action, crates and angled walls but I don't really like the bothersome pink accents. Quote
LittleJohn Posted August 9, 2015 Posted August 9, 2015 Fantastic build, David! The walls look amazing, and I personally like the pink accents Quote
goatman461 Posted August 10, 2015 Posted August 10, 2015 amazing, clean build as always. any chance we can see how you supported everything in the back? Quote
Kai NRG Posted August 10, 2015 Posted August 10, 2015 Another fantastic build from you, the angles here are super cool and I must say I really like the pink! The crates are really neat too and great work with the action posing! Quote
SpacerSteve Posted August 10, 2015 Posted August 10, 2015 Very cool build! The wall are great. I am also curious about the pink. Kawashita must be aligned with the forces of Slaanesh. (shamless 40k reference) It all makes sense now. Quote
Garmadon Posted August 10, 2015 Posted August 10, 2015 Excellent build David FNJ! Great job with all the angles on the walls, and the space-crates and fighting scene are quite nice as well! Quote
Dannylonglegs Posted August 11, 2015 Posted August 11, 2015 Great build! Love that wall! And I love the pink too! Such an underused colour! great job! the action rocks too! ~Insectoid Aristocrat Quote
robuko Posted August 11, 2015 Posted August 11, 2015 This is a murderous attack on a sovereign Kawashita vessel on sovereign Kawashita territory. In my view this is against the spirit of the game. Quote
Commander Turtle Posted August 11, 2015 Posted August 11, 2015 I have to agree with Robuko. In contrast, I think Commander Beltar handled a story with death well by having it send him to HQ to get court martialled, and just generally put him on Kawashita's own bad books. I'm not entirely comfortable with the corps just having war without consequence, we should still be accountable on some level. Quote
Dannylonglegs Posted August 11, 2015 Posted August 11, 2015 ^Love that Slaanesh reference! You guys realize MANTIS basically advertises itself as not-quite-legal... right? Some of their tactics are above the board... but a lot are not. They were a criminal enterprise before AG, and are implied to still be that in some respects. I'm sure they had a reason to raid the frigate... or else Will deny this ever happened, or that it was perpetrated by unaffiliated raiders even though those responsible are using MANTIS equipment... ~Insectoid Aristocrat Quote
Big Sal Posted August 11, 2015 Posted August 11, 2015 This never happened. And even if it did (it didn't), it was perpetrated by unaffiliated raiders. And even if it did happen (it didn't), and even if the troops were M.A.N.T.I.S. (they weren't), how could they have known this was a Kawashita vessel? Kawashita vessels aren't pink Quote
Dannylonglegs Posted August 11, 2015 Posted August 11, 2015 This never happened. Snip See what I mean? ~Insectoid Aristocrat Quote
David FNJ Posted August 11, 2015 Author Posted August 11, 2015 (edited) We do have a stun setting on our MANTIS™ Death-Ray Blasters you know. And we needed that device...thing to find out why Kawashita is so near our home planet. Yeah, we know outside this story why they are, but I'm making it so that my character doesn't know quite yet, so this device will help him find out that part of the story that we already know. Edited August 11, 2015 by David FNJ Quote
Umbra-Manis Posted August 12, 2015 Posted August 12, 2015 This never happened. And even if it did (it didn't), it was perpetrated by unaffiliated raiders. And even if it did happen (it didn't), and even if the troops were M.A.N.T.I.S. (they weren't), how could they have known this was a Kawashita vessel? Kawashita vessels aren't pink Absolutely. (Because it didn't) We do have a stun setting on our MANTIS™ Death-Ray Blasters you know. And we needed that device...thing to find out why Kawashita is so near our home planet. Yeah, we know outside this story why they are, but I'm making it so that my character doesn't know quite yet, so this device will help him find out that part of the story that we already know. These are totally not M.A.N.T.I.S. agents. This did not happen. Stop making more PR nightmares. (And explain why pilots and scientists are trying to do PR for the Spec. Forces. ) Quote
Aliencat Posted August 13, 2015 Posted August 13, 2015 That's an awesome interior! I really dig the colours, with the pink. And cool fight scene! Quote
Andromedas Gates Posted August 13, 2015 Posted August 13, 2015 The judges awarded you 6 points. Quote
David FNJ Posted August 23, 2015 Author Posted August 23, 2015 Thanks a bunch all! I really appreciate the feedback! I've uploaded some behind the scenes shots. Bonus pictures of behind the scenes Quote
Dardanel Posted August 23, 2015 Posted August 23, 2015 Great, thank you! I will study these thoroughly! :D I've only now noticed that there's also something else going on behind the glass! Great job, such an amazing build! Quote
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