[M-H03] The Commodore

[SpacerSteve]

Location: H03 Kaalin

Tags: Spying, Land Vehicle, Military Building

Somewhere on the surface of Kaalin.

- Sir we have an Octan cruiser detected in this sector

- Blast it. I will be up there soon. Stay here Spacer Steve. Don’t touch anything

- I think I can hack these panels and transmit Chogg my co-ordinates.

SpacerSteve hacks the terminal and transmits his location to Donwarr.

- Oh, What do we have here? It looks like SpacerSteve needs some help.

- What is that Chogg? Did you hear from SpacerSteve?

- Chogg think that there is a malfunction in the listening computer.

– OK. Hope we hear something soon.

Back on Kaalin

- Blasted Octan. They have stepped up patrols since MANTIS attacked. It really has made it hard to avoid dectection.

- I recognize you. You are the Commodores Daughter. What do you want with me. I have heard about your brutal tactics. Do you plan to torture me for information?

- I'd prefer to be called General. No I don't plan to torture you. The only CEO I’d like end is Agent Raven for her part in my father’s death. I need to talk to you about a very important issue. We have intel that leads us to believe your associate Chogg is working for a secretive organization.

- WHAT! Not Chogg. He has saved my life multiple times. Why would he betray me like this and why should I trust you?

- I will tell you the rest when we get to base.

Thanks for looking. C&C is welcome. I realize that Agent Raven isn't the one that killed the Commodore. I figure the details were lost since it was probably a classified Kawashita opperation and that the Dust Demon survivors don't have all the details.

[David FNJ]

Super cool vehicle! I like the ground surface and the tall rock thing as well.

[Junior Shark]

That rover is very curvaceous. I love it!

[EpsilonEta]

Cool vehiacle. Espesily the rounded front.

And Raven was in charge of the attack so it's not strange to think she's responsible. Either she ordered it or lost controle of the situation so it could well be seen as her fault.

And someone wanting revenge is good for story. Maybe I can make colaburations with you insted of mccoyed/koro

[VK-318]

I love that rover. In particular, I like the way the wheel wells, and the way you match the cockpit canopy with the structure around it.

[SpacerSteve]

Thanks a lot guys! I really like how the rover turned out.

Epsilon Eta I think a collaboration would be great. It would give Raven something to do besides complain ;)

[Andromedas Gates]

The judges awarded you 5 points.