This is my third attempt at making Fernos-the antagonist from an upcoming story on my website: Kingdom of the Lakes.

I will most likely still make some adjustments. I added a scar under his eye and tattoos to both arms, but I would like to make the scar more apparent-right now it looks to similar to the cheek bone lines, and I'd also like to make the arm tattoos bigger. But, I pretty much like it. I redesigned the pecs and abs completely as my original was a template from Classic-Castle and I wanted to design my own, so I could eventually sell the design.

Please feel free to let me know what you think of it.

Awesome customs. But are those tattoos or scars? And when is the Book of the Ancients coming out exactly?

I like it overall, but to me the abs are a bit too flashy.

Maybe tone them down with thinner lines?

Very cool! I would suggest making the scar red, but then people might think it's just another tattoo. Still, it look very cool, not to mention evil! *y*

~Peace

Nice job *wub* *y* . I would make the scar more purple-ish, or red-ish brown, like those on Anankin's face. Or give it a smaller cros scar, like Takeshi's.

LuxorV

Thanks for the advice guys! I really like this forum. I got some really good insight from you guys and it helps out a lot. Thanks. *wub*

I'd have to agree about the scar. Also a scar wouldn't be circular around the eye and have the eye still function, maybe change it's shape to a simple line or curved line?

Also he has a very long face, I'm not sure if that's what you were going for? Great job though! :-)

I'd have to agree about the scar. Also a scar wouldn't be circular around the eye and have the eye still function, maybe change it's shape to a simple line or curved line?

Also he has a very long face, I'm not sure if that's what you were going for? Great job though! :-)

As I see it, the scar is the slim line left-bent (MF's left) below the eye, while the red circle is a tatoo 8-|

LuxorV

I tend to agree with Johnny 5; the abs are great but probably should be either lighter or thinner. I also agree that the scar tends to blend into the cheek. Perhaps a darker colour? I think this is really good though and it seems incredible that you are a newbie at this. 8-

I'd have to agree about the scar. Also a scar wouldn't be circular around the eye and have the eye still function, maybe change it's shape to a simple line or curved line?

Good point. But the red circle around the eye-which matches the red circle on the chest-is a tattoo. The scar is the simple curved line under his left eye. :-P