Puvel Posted August 14, 2016 Posted August 14, 2016 (edited) Haven't build something for AoM in ages so decided to get back into it. Nothing fancy though, just a simple wooden wall: Updated version: Edited August 17, 2016 by Puvel Quote
TitusV Posted August 14, 2016 Posted August 14, 2016 Nice, but I'd recommend to add a bit more to This. Considering It is a Phase II build, maybe a tower or SO would fit? Your photography improved! Quote
BrickCurve Posted August 14, 2016 Posted August 14, 2016 Looks nice. I agree with Titus, your photography has really improved! Although I do think a 3/4 view would be nice. Quote
dathil Posted August 15, 2016 Posted August 15, 2016 I like that you textured it by adding dark brown, and the texture on the ground is good! Quote
Henjin_Quilones Posted August 15, 2016 Posted August 15, 2016 That is a nice little snow drift there! I also like the light tan (or whatever the official name for the color is) at the top of the posts. I will agree that a tower would be nice, or at least a guard's shack or something to make it a bit more substantial, but nonetheless it looks good. Quote
soccerkid6 Posted August 15, 2016 Posted August 15, 2016 Good photography, and snow-scaping The uneven palisade, with dark brown mixed in looks quite nice, though as others have mentioned, a small building fit in somewhere would be great. Or even a wagon or cart traveling along next to it Quote
de Gothia Posted August 15, 2016 Posted August 15, 2016 A good looking moc! I agree with the others though, maybe add something to it..? Quote
Puvel Posted August 15, 2016 Author Posted August 15, 2016 Thanks for the comments! It shows why Guilds of Historica is so good, you get advice instead of just 'Nice' I agree it's a bit weak for Phase II, was sorting and found my Mitgardian soldiers again so got a bit too excited Will update this in the next coupe of days Quote
bricklover Posted August 15, 2016 Posted August 15, 2016 Great wall. The landscape is fantastic! Quote
Garmadon Posted August 15, 2016 Posted August 15, 2016 Great to see you back here again, Puvel, the snow and wall look very nice, and I too like the tan on top of the poles! While a building or something of that sort (as the others mentioned) would be nice, if you had the pieces I would recommend maybe also adding another row of posts in front, and perhaps curving the wall a little bit to add more visual interest ...was sorting and found my Mitgardian soldiers again so got a bit too excited Don't worry, getting too exited for Mitgardia is an moral impossibility (well, probably, at least...)! Definitely happy to see you building for the Guilds again! Quote
Brandon Stark Posted August 16, 2016 Posted August 16, 2016 Nice build. I really like the uneven wall with the light tan on top. The texture on the ground is also very good. Though I would suggest, like the other users, maybe a guard post or something, the build is still very impressive, and fits very well into Mitgardia. Quote
soccerkid6 Posted August 17, 2016 Posted August 17, 2016 Great update! Always very encouraging to see builders putting advice to good use The SNOT tiles for the back wall give a very nice texture, and I like the wedge plates used to give the roof a more unique shape Quote
Puvel Posted August 17, 2016 Author Posted August 17, 2016 Updated the build a bit with a second row of posts and made the wall a bit curvier. Also added a little guard shack with a guard practising his flute, the original guard is on patrol now. Thanks for the advice, guys! Quote
Henjin_Quilones Posted August 17, 2016 Posted August 17, 2016 Much nicer! The small roofed area adds just the right amount of detail and a focal point for the build. I like that the palisade is now two logs thick, too. Quote
Dubbadgrim Posted August 20, 2016 Posted August 20, 2016 Looks a lot better without the gaps and the darker background helps the snow stand out. I hope to see more ! Quote
LittleJohn Posted September 7, 2016 Posted September 7, 2016 Excellent phase II build, Puvel! The varying heights of the palisade is great, and I like the bits of snow and ice on the roof Nice detail with the tree stump too Quote
MassEditor Posted September 13, 2016 Posted September 13, 2016 That updated version looks fantastic! Nice detailing and landscaping! Quote
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