TheBeeze Posted November 14, 2016 Posted November 14, 2016 (edited) First Sergeant Alarkis: Our agent on the ground indicates there are (2) of them possibly a 3rd. We'll be landing at Pad 37 in the administrators' column. As soon as we hit the deck, we're hauling to the chamber. TheBeeze: Do you really trust these outsiders to provide reliable intelligence? First Sergeant Alarkis: It has been very successful in my prior sorties. This particular one has a higher benefit to cost ratio than some of the others. *TWO MINUTES TO TOUCHDOWN. STANDBY* Bowszex: We have what we came here for. I fear our transmission may not have gone through as we thought. Inferion: The Imperials would pay dearly for this intercept. Prince Xizor will be most pleased to have this bargaining chip at the table with him. We'll be back there shortly. Willrow Hood: The Black Sun think I'm one of them. General Calrissien sent me back to infiltrate the group and see what they have found out. Lobot: They have enough to worry about. If the imperials don't get them first, the Rebels will. **Closes Eyes while head band starts to blink** Lobot: An Imperial Detachment just landed and is headed this way. You need to leave. Willrow Hood: I will get this data back to the General. First Sergeant Alarkis: Where are they?! TheBeeze: STOP! TheBeeze: We're too late. First Sergeant Alarkis: Nevermind him. Our agent says he is making contact now. Keep moving Dengar: If you wanna stay in one piece, drop your blasters. Inferion: What's your end here Dengar? Black Sun will pay you and handsomely to spare us. Dengar: And indeed you shall. Hand over that intercept and I won't kill you. Bowszex: You got what you wanted. Now go. Dengar: I have one more bit of business to finish. Scout: This is the door Sergeant. First Sergeant Alarkis: Blow It Open. TheBeeze: We have you now. Black Sun Scum. Bowszex: You said... Dengar: I said I wouldn't kill you. Never mentioned these boys here. First Sergeant Alarkis: FIRE! Blast fire rains across the Holo-Room The Two Black Sun Agents lay in ruin... Dengar: You tell Lord Vader this little box is gonna cost him extra. First Sergeant Alarkis: Your credits have been transferred for this job. You can discuss your plans with Lord Vader yourself for whatever it is that you're carrying. Dengar: Black Sun intercepted a rebel transmission. Something about a little plan to spoil your party on that reconstructed ball of yours.. Holo Room with no minifigs. Spoiler Edited November 25, 2016 by Thebeeze111 Quote
Puvel Posted November 15, 2016 Posted November 15, 2016 Interesting story! The light in the trans blue columns works really well. Did Willrow Hood snatch half computer? Looks like something big anyway Quote
TheBeeze Posted November 16, 2016 Author Posted November 16, 2016 On 11/15/2016 at 8:19 AM, Puvel said: Did Willrow Hood snatch half computer? Looks like something big anyway He's actually one of those people that appears in a movie for about 5 seconds and then some nerd goes online and writes a whole story about him haha. He was in Empire Strikes Back during the Cloud City Evacuation carrying something. You can check it out and read the wookiepedia article for a laugh. Quote
TheBeeze Posted November 25, 2016 Author Posted November 25, 2016 Someone pointed out a few links above were broken for pictures. They've been fixed. Thanks, Quote
Cody Startale Posted November 25, 2016 Posted November 25, 2016 Great build, I like it! It is well built and I really like the light setup with the blue pillars, excellent. Also neat that you included Lobot and Willrow in your story, haha. Especially Willrow and his icecream maker thingy are a cool little detail. Cool stuff all around! Quote
MKJoshA Posted November 25, 2016 Posted November 25, 2016 Great entry and story Thebeeze111! You've communicated a very ruthless of the Empire extremely well. As a gamemaster though, I do have to point out one thing. The official rules state that customs are only allowed with your sigfig. So the extra custom blasters you've included aren't allowed. Can you provide a shot of your build without the blasters that we can use for judging? We would then put that at the top of your post and hide the non-approved photos behind a spoiler tag. We don't want other players to get the wrong idea about being able to use custom and 3rd party weapons. All of the judges have seen your entry and we will judge the story as you've presented it so you don't have to worry about that. Thank you for working with us on this. I understand that the customs rule was not the easiest to understand and we are working on making it more clear for the future. Quote
Merc4Hire Posted November 25, 2016 Posted November 25, 2016 Most excellent entry Thebeeze111! The story flowed nicely and the builds layout captures Bespin's design very well with the curved wall bits and the control panels spread through out the rooms. Quote
TheBeeze Posted November 25, 2016 Author Posted November 25, 2016 1 hour ago, MKJoshA said: As a gamemaster though, I do have to point out one thing. That was brought to my attention as well from one of the others asking me to do the same. Unfortunately, the build has since been disassembled without any "non-pure" weapons. I did also voice my concern as to how the rules were written and addressed at that time as I only interpreted that as building parts. There are several pictures that still have regular weapons only though, so they could be graded I suppose.. I will take that into consideration in the future. Thanks. Quote
Zaael Posted November 29, 2016 Posted November 29, 2016 Great job capturing the Bespin feel! I really like it! Nice use of lights. I like the hallway the most, the 2nd picture make your build seem much larger than it really is. Great job! Quote
TheBeeze Posted December 5, 2016 Author Posted December 5, 2016 On 11/29/2016 at 8:30 AM, Zaael said: the 2nd picture make your build seem much larger than it really is. Great job! Thanks, used a 32x32 baseplate only. Quote
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