[GBW] - Supporting the war effort- EROTEMA – Recruitment of valuable personnel

[sigpro]

Erotema is facing a possible war with the countries of the Republic of Nations, but that does not prevent its citizens to have fun, for example at the cinema.

2 cine IMG_20170326_124405 by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr

However, there is always a news report before any movie starts…

3 cine con peli by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr

Everybody knows about the seizure of a Joint radar station by the Briolui forces and the subsequent attack by FILACE.

After the movie, all the cinema users return to their normal life…

 

This is Doctor Smith. A famous surgeon, he has developed many interesting techniques to prevent bleeding in traumatic wounds, such as caused by shrapnel or bullets.

He opens his laptop and reads a message sent by the EROTEMA electronic administration.

DOCTOR OK2 by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr

And he has a kind of revelation…

doctorok by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr

 

The same happens with the surfer on the beach…

SUFER BEACH by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr

 

The cook…well, he has to start a war with a spider in his pantry

cook by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr

The other two are a scientist and an engineer. They have an R&D laboratory. The build everything to help their country. And they have finished another prototype…

scientist engineer by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr

 

All of them finally go to the recruitment station, and they are welcomed.

RECR1 by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr

Everybody has something to offer

recr2 by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr

recr3 by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr

Pleased by the compromise showed by some citizens, the Officer informs that they will be contacted soon…

RECR4 by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr

The end.

[VaderFan2187]

Pretty cool story!

8 hours ago, sigpro said:

The cook…well, he has to start a war with a spider in his pantry

I laughed so much at this part

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A little repetitive with the amount of people shown. This is a case where less would have been more if you focused a little more on the details of 2 instead of 4. Original idea, goes well with the story.    

 

I like the idea of a recruitment story, but ALL THAT OPEN SPACE!!!!!  Details, details, details!!!  Fill in all of that open space with details.  Take your time.  There is a deadline, but plan ahead.  One thing I like to try is go for a few smaller builds so you can detail them, but build on a bigger plate, so 10x10 scene, but do it on a 16x16 base, so you have overlap when you phot these.  This has so much potential, I'm excited to see your future builds!

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