TheBeeze Posted October 24, 2017 Posted October 24, 2017 (edited) Filace CP4- Dockyard Ambush Map Name: Studica Grid: F4 After the crushing defeat by RON forces, the COAC withdrew back to the town of Carrefour to try and regroup and move forward. The Filace Marines were assigned the task of holding down the dockyard along the river while the higher ups planned out the next phase. Great Brick War by Jesse Beeze, on Flickr The Marines patrolled along the dock all hours of the night awaiting word on when the next move would be made. Great Brick War by Jesse Beeze, on Flickr Great Brick War by Jesse Beeze, on Flickr Great Brick War by Jesse Beeze, on Flickr Captain Beeze and his team were still assigned to shadow the marines so that they could provide support as needed or serve as a QRF Force. Great Brick War by Jesse Beeze, on Flickr Some time during the night, a small band of RON Spec OPs Forces snuck into the Dockyard and started taking down the Marines one by one. Great Brick War by Jesse Beeze, on Flickr Great Brick War by Jesse Beeze, on Flickr Great Brick War by Jesse Beeze, on Flickr the Team became alerted after a single shot was fired and the round ricocheted off the shipping containers. The leapt into action and started returning fire. tean Great Brick War by Jesse Beeze, on Flickr The Team slowly worked their way up on the enemy shooters and retrieving the wounded marines after placing a call to their Friendly Plantasean Snipers on the Roof Tops of the neighby Favela. Favela by Jesse Beeze, on Flickr Great Brick War by Jesse Beeze, on Flickr Great Brick War by Jesse Beeze, on Flickr Great Brick War by Jesse Beeze, on Flickr Great Brick War by Jesse Beeze, on Flickr The Team managed to restrain the last attacker alive in hopes of interrogating him and getting some more information out of him. Edited October 24, 2017 by TheBeeze Quote
paintballman Posted October 25, 2017 Posted October 25, 2017 Like in the movies! Very nice story and I liked most the massive use of the containers. Αs for the captive, give him to Kira. She is in the area and she knows how to talk to him ... Quote
sigpro Posted October 25, 2017 Posted October 25, 2017 A lot of action! Good! The containers are very realistic, good job! Quote
Maxim I Posted October 29, 2017 Posted October 29, 2017 Great action! I really enjoyed the minifig posing and the background you made for this story! Quote
Tezclatipoca Posted October 31, 2017 Posted October 31, 2017 A great scene ! As always, your action is easy to follow. This is a really smooth action move! I would just have wish to see some less zoomed pics in order to figure out the global building. Great entry ! Quote
The Great Brick War Posted November 8, 2017 Posted November 8, 2017 You’ve been awarded (8) points. Judges’ comments… BAM!!!! The detail hits me from the first shot. Dock walls are detailed, the containers are tight, well built! The background vehicle looks good. Super detailed soldiers, along with the enemy and lookout snipers. Overall shot would have been good to have at the end. Not sure if the lighting was planned this way or not, but with the containers and shadows they cast, it was great. Could have used a background behind the snipers though, dark shot. Was not able to find a collaboration though between your team and your soldiers? So there was a loss of point for that. I really enjoyed this build and you kept to urban combat so there were some close quarters engagements. Some surfaces seem to be too smooth , more details, neutral background would be better A good, clean build with plenty of fun details. Great story which was very entertaining to read. Overall, the build could use some more details to really help convince me it’s a dock. Floodlights, additional signs, a small office, etc. would all go a long way to making it more interesting than just a few shipping containers. Be Sure to Update Your AARs. Thanks for playing! Quote
TheBeeze Posted November 8, 2017 Author Posted November 8, 2017 This is the part where I should complain about being docked a point for my lack of cooperation that could have pushed us to crushing victory over the RON since the snipers in my build were taken straight out of Paintballman's Favella...... but I don't care haha. Great Job All! Quote
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