[SR - MCRA Dec] The Trial of Sinbad part 3

[MKJoshA]

Previously:

Chapter 1

Chapter 2:
Sinbad the Pirate
Hang The Rules
Rescued Shipwright
Shipwright's Office
The Komodo Dragon
"Because They're Pirates!"
Fish Market
The Trial of Sinbad
The Trial of Sinbad part 2

You say it is wrong for my client to attack your ships. Let me give you another scenario.

Imagine with me, a scene down by the docks. One man, a good business man, owns a warehouse. But a better business man buys him out.

Now, is this better business man wrong for being better? Of course not! He's just proven himself superior in his trade.

Can we please got on with this?

Of course, but just as if nothing would happen if the less shrewd warehouse owner had put up a fuss about being bought out, so to should nothing happen to my client. As already proven, his actions were sanctioned by Corrington's Vice Admiral himself. Just because you don't like that my client practiced his superior skills against Corrington's ships is inconsequential.

Um, hmm, that makes sense but it still doesn't seem right.

Or course it's not right! No matter what he says, it's not nice to sink other people's ships!

So it comes down to moral character does it? Let me give you another example...

To be continued...

[Darnok]

Another nice build.

 

I do enjoy this story, and to be honest I do not get the "Corrington leadership" having an issue with how you do this, I feel a bit lost here for different reasons. That is mainly due to a somewhat erratic progression of the story, and it only moving forward in very small steps. To me it feels like getting about five seconds of screentime on a scene, then being interrupted by another block of advertisement - yes, I do want to know how it goes on, but I also feel kind of frustrated to be left hanging in the air at the same time.

 

If you could do bigger chunks of your story at a time - even if it means bigger breaks between scenes - I guess it would be much easier and also much more interesting to follow.

[MKJoshA]

4 hours ago, Drunknok said:

Another nice build.

 

I do enjoy this story, and to be honest I do not get the "Corrington leadership" having an issue with how you do this, I feel a bit lost here for different reasons. That is mainly due to a somewhat erratic progression of the story, and it only moving forward in very small steps. To me it feels like getting about five seconds of screentime on a scene, then being interrupted by another block of advertisement - yes, I do want to know how it goes on, but I also feel kind of frustrated to be left hanging in the air at the same time.

 

If you could do bigger chunks of your story at a time - even if it means bigger breaks between scenes - I guess it would be much easier and also much more interesting to follow.

I understand your frustration. Unfortunately, to be able to claim each build that's part of the story, I have to submit them all as separate topics.