Tezclatipoca Posted January 27, 2018 Posted January 27, 2018 (edited) GBW Campaign 5 - Deland Republic - At the rescue of the COST men Map : Studica Location : Somewhere in E8 Inside Xenor Territory - Here is RTE8 Rescue Team, We are arriving at the location of the COST base. We are deploying the half track vehicle here. No resistance encountered. Do you copy ? - Yes, RTE8, Here is Headquarter Command, receiving 5/5, you are authorized to look after the survivors. If you find Xenor troups, you are allowed to defend yourself ! Over. - Thank you HQ ! Apparently, there is not much left of the outpost; everything is ruined or in fire... We will quickly assist the survivors and leave the area. Over. The bombed outpost was nearly totally destroyed but the team managed to find a hurt soldier on the snow. He was a COST special force officer and had his leg wounded in the bombing. The medical officer took care of him in order to prepare his evacuation. With just one men to rescue, the team concluded to a terrible fact : the COST outpost was definitely lost... They evacuated the man to return him safely in his country and left the area without any problem. In the spoiler, I am adding some single shots of the half track vehicle and another overview of the build. Thanks for reading ! Spoiler Edited January 27, 2018 by Faladrin Quote
sigpro Posted January 27, 2018 Posted January 27, 2018 Hi! I like the vehicle and the detail of the wounded soldier. The penguin can be a disguised Xenor soldier? Good! Quote
The Great Brick War Posted February 18, 2018 Posted February 18, 2018 You’ve been awarded (6) points. Judges’ comments… There isn't a whole lot of structure to the build here, but there are many little points of detail. I think that the half track truck is very interesting and well done. Your presentation and photo work are on point. I just would have liked to have seen something with a little more depth as this largely just feels like a snowy base plate. Even thought you only built up one side of the baseplate ith snow, that's ok. I would have liked to see a bit more, this kinda felt a lil rushed? the gravel road is too perfect; there are no real differences in the rocks. Maybe add some plates (round and squared) and some squared tile into the mix, change up a few colors? I also feel there was too much in this shot, almost like there was too much going on, too busy. I think for the space, it just felt awkward to me. Not a problem, again, my opinion, but just wanted to state that. Watch your lighting, that super treaded halftrack casts a mighty big shadow, unless that's what you were goin for? Also, with all white, try for a slightly different color background. I like the ATV... I like what you did with the half-track. It's a nice vehicle, and it looks like it would work well for a recon/search and rescue situation. The tree and frozen pond are nice, but there aren't too many other details that stand out with this. With the destroyed building, it's basically just a simple wall. Be Sure to Update Your AARs. Thanks for playing! Quote
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