sigpro Posted June 30, 2018 Posted June 30, 2018 (edited) GRID C3 (North Godta) Brock is a former member of the Banduad Security Forces. NOTICE by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr He is in route on his brand new Land Rover (probably stole in a wealthier country with a beacon device and microphones to allow him being tracked down) towards a weapons deal in Kiraka, a city in Banduad. One of his henchmen was having a meeting with Ivan Drackoff. The highway is almost deserted, but for a few cows and a lonely, beautiful German shepherd in the middle of the road. Besides, he looks wounded… 1 by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr Brock brakes violently to avoid running over the dog and crashing with the cows. But do you think such a thug would do it for the dog´s welfare? NO. He doesn´t want his beautiful car damaged. He gets off the vehicle and walks towards the dog with a gun in his hand. If the dog is wounded, sacrificing him is the least cruel option, as he would never put the dog in the car. Car wash services are expensive in Banduad! 2 by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr Suddenly, a whistle is heard and the dog attacks Brock fiercely, and attempts to escape, while a group of disguised members of the Erotema Gendarmerie Special Intervention Unit finishes the operation… 3 by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr Small detail of the Eclipsegrafx ™ gloves used by one of the operatives. 3 1 by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr You, son of 1000 mothers, give up now! Says one of the Gendarmes…And he finally gives up. 4 by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr Brock is dragged and taken off the higway… 5 by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr But the attack dog is nervous. Why? By the way, Brock´s wig is on the road… 6 by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr Goddamn dog! It´s a box full with turkey legs! 7 by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr But there is something more…gold taken from nobody knows where that can pay for many weapons to do bad things… 8 by green helmet spanish AFOL, en Flickr The end! Edited July 1, 2018 by sigpro Quote
paintballman Posted June 30, 2018 Posted June 30, 2018 Nice build Miguel. It's easy to recognize the Land Rover and i like the way you build the road. Quote
TheBeeze Posted July 3, 2018 Posted July 3, 2018 You have failed your mission. Shortly after the attempted extract, your team was overwhelmed by a small convoy of Servants of Freedom Fighters following closely behind. He lives on to fight another day. Judge Feedback: These builds require a large amount of detail to pass. This one just doesn't cut it for me. You could have added a lot of other things to spruce this up. Make the landrover much more articulated, vary the terrain (which the judges have continually asked you to look into doing), and just work on the surroundings. This would not have been a bad side build, but this is a higher level than that. Sorry, but this one doesn't pass for me. I think if you cut the build in half and focused on more of the details, then it would have gone through as a pass. What kind of details...? Worn roads, normal cows, NOT THE REPEATED SAME TERRAIN BUT IN DIFFERENT COLORS, a couple of trees to adjust the display's height which doesn't rely on the telephone polls, ditch off the side of the road, litter... These contract missions have some great rewards, but they are therefore graded with the highest attention to detail. Quote
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