-JD- Posted September 16, 2008 Posted September 16, 2008 Thanks for letting me join. I am wondering how I can come into the story...... perhaps you could somehow escape the droids etc and find me in another part of the facility. I could be a hostage and you rescue me. Or I could run in and kill all the droids! Nah. What do you think? J PS: I'll add a picture of my character soon.
Oky Posted September 16, 2008 Posted September 16, 2008 Well, once you tell us what kind of character you are playing, we can think of a way to integrate you into the story, OK? Personally, I would prefer it if you would join me and Simonjedi instead of Jim's group because our group could use more players.
-JD- Posted September 16, 2008 Posted September 16, 2008 (edited) Well, once you tell us what kind of character you are playing, we can think of a way to integrate you into the story, OK? Personally, I would prefer it if you would join me and Simonjedi instead of Jim's group because our group could use more players. Cool. I have some thinking to do. Also, I don't mind where I join, either group is fine. J Edited September 16, 2008 by Jammiedodger714
Adam Posted September 17, 2008 Posted September 17, 2008 (edited) MacK's freighter landed at the coordinates that Adam had given them. However, they had landed in a blank stretch of snow and ice- no facility, no CIS base. Jim frowned. "I thought that you said we were going to the facility? Where you were kept?" "Just wait," said Adam as he hopped out of the ship. Jim nodded to the others and followed him out. "Where is it..." Adam mumbled as he tapped the ground with is hands. Eventually he came upon a large snowbank, and came up smiling. "Over here!" he shouted. When Jim came over, Adam tapped something on the ground. Instantly, where snow was half a parsec before, an invisible door was revealed. "They brought me in this way," Adam explained, "and since they don't want anyone to know that they have a hidden base over here, there's a lack of security. Any droids would give them away." With that, the two entered the facility. As they walked through the corridors, Jim quietly asked Adam a few questions. "How did you get out? Through the door?" Adam gave a silent laugh. "I blew up one of the generators. It made a hole large enough for me to crawl out, but I doubt that I can-" He stopped when they heard the clank of droids. Ohhh, cliffhanger! Edit: Dang, I meant the freighter! And the narrator measures time in nanoseconds, even if the people in SW measure it in parsecs. Just kiddn'. Edited September 17, 2008 by Adam
Oky Posted September 17, 2008 Posted September 17, 2008 (edited) The gunship landed at the coordinates that Adam had given them. I think you mean "MacK's freighter", since that's what you guys are traveling with. Adam tapped something on the ground. Instantly, where snow was a nanosecond before, an invisible door was revealed. Isn't time being measured in parsecs in the Star Wars universe? Nah, just kidding. If you don't get the joke, read this. I was refering to what Han Solo said about his ship in Ep. IV. Btw, where is simonjedi? I am waiting for him to post something before I post something again. And is Thok still playing? I know he said he was busy, but we haven't seen anything from him lately. Edited September 17, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi
JimBee Posted September 17, 2008 Author Posted September 17, 2008 Jamiedoger, I would prefer it you went with Oky Wan and Simonjedi for now. I'm glad you joined, we've lost many players. Sorry for not posting pics lately, I haven't really had time. I'll try to do a small MOC while we're in the facility, though. Also, I thought parsec was a measure of distance? Eh, now that I think about it, maybe not...
Lt. Col. Thok Posted September 17, 2008 Posted September 17, 2008 And is Thok still playing? I know he said he was busy, but we haven't seen anything from him lately. [/color] I'm playing - expect more from me this weekend, I have Friday off....
simonjedi Posted September 19, 2008 Posted September 19, 2008 (edited) 3 battle droids exploded in a shower of sparks as the gunship returned firing across the hoard of battle droids. In the moment of panic the bounty hunter fled into the core ship knocking Oky down. Garviel ran after him. "Garviel, wait!" Oky called out but Loken was too focused in capturing the bounty hunter. He stumbled over the ruined corridor trying to avoid the wreckage. "Hello old friend, have you missed me." Garviel realised the voice straight away and turned around, the once damaged corridor was suddenly brand new and he was looking at Bequin's back strangling him at utapau. He noticed Xela stiring next to him. Before he spoke he was in the flower planet of felucia, He had appeared behind a mysterious person holding a gun at a group of familiar people. He identified Oky and jim, in the crowd and MacK who was lying on the floor. "NOOOO" he cried and the mysterious figure turned around. Before he could identify the shooter, he awoke in a medical bay with a soldier looking over him "You're awake," he smiled "Glad we got to you before the Imps did." :O Garviel has travelled through time, where is he? Who will be the mysterious shooter of MacK. Concerning Jamiedoger,i think he could either be a prisoner in the core ship or a member in the rebel base? Edited September 19, 2008 by simonjedi
-JD- Posted September 19, 2008 Posted September 19, 2008 (edited) ..... a member in the rebel base? That fits right in with my character's profile. I'll add details soon.... J Edited September 19, 2008 by Jammiedodger714
Adam Posted September 19, 2008 Posted September 19, 2008 The clank of droids was stopped by a deafening sound, a high pitched screeching and a flash of light, coating Adam and Jim with a strange feeling. "What the heck was that?!" Jim gasped? Adam coughed. He knew what it was- he had seen it on the Republic's database. "Time travel- something- or someone- has traveled through time." Little did he know, it was worse than anything he could imagine... I'll fill you in later, if I can- Hinck might ban me!
Oky Posted September 19, 2008 Posted September 19, 2008 (edited) Good to have you with us again, Simonjedi. And very interesting twist! I wonder what happens next, although it looks like you will meet Jammiedodger soon. Adam, I'm a bit confused about your post. I thought the facility you guys are in is miles away from the core ship. So, how could you hear or see anything of Garviel's disapearance? Edited September 19, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi
JimBee Posted September 19, 2008 Author Posted September 19, 2008 (edited) Wait, I'm confused . Simonjedi, when you were in the Core Ship, you saw Benquin, and then travelled through time? How did you get on Felucia? We haven't finished on Hoth yet... And Adam, I don't understand your post, how can you know when someone has travelled through time? This is a new thing to the galaxy, and yet-to-be discovered by anyone besides us and the minority of the CIS? Hinckley is going to ban you...? Apparently not... Edited September 19, 2008 by JimButcher
simonjedi Posted September 19, 2008 Posted September 19, 2008 Wait, I'm confused . Simonjedi, when you were in the Core Ship, you saw Benquin, and then travelled through time? How did you get on Felucia? We haven't finished on Hoth yet...And Adam, I don't understand your post, how can you know when someone has travelled through time? This is a new thing to the galaxy, and yet-to-be discovered by anyone besides us and the minority of the CIS? Hinckley is going to ban you...? Apparently not... I was on the coreship in the present chasing the bounty hunter, i teleported back in time without me realising to see my confrontation with bequin. I then get teleported to sometime in the future seeing the group on felucia, under gunpoint and with MacK dead. I then wake up in a medical wing in a rebel base during the rise of the empire era. Hope that makes sense
JimBee Posted September 19, 2008 Author Posted September 19, 2008 (edited) Hope that makes sense Not really, but okay... maybe you should come back to the present? Then we can finish the chapter. But good entry, you could tell us (in the story) what happened, and we'll take it from there. Edited September 19, 2008 by JimButcher
Adam Posted September 19, 2008 Posted September 19, 2008 Not really, but okay... maybe you should come back to the present? Then we can finish the chapter. But good entry, you could tell us (in the story) what happened, and we'll take it from there. You see, that blast was megablocking powerful, and remember the "cosmic disturbance"? This was a replica of that. Also, just a reminder, put it in an alternate color.
simonjedi Posted September 19, 2008 Posted September 19, 2008 I teleport back to this post: then get teleported to chapter 3 where everyone is under gunpoint by someone, and MacK is dead Then i get teleported to a rebel base during the galactic civil war. But good entry, you could tell us (in the story) what happened, and we'll take it from there. I'd prefer it if i'd stay in the future for a few of my posts anyway, but you can teleport me back, in the next post or two. BUT Garviel has to be a bit more dark and cynical and perhaps making an effort to slow down the group. Having seen the future and what happens is bound to change someone.
JimBee Posted September 19, 2008 Author Posted September 19, 2008 I'd prefer it if i'd stay in the future for a few of my posts anyway, but you can teleport me back, in the next post or two. BUT Garviel has to be a bit more dark and cynical and perhaps making an effort to slow down the group. Having seen the future and what happens is bound to change someone. Alright. Meanwhile, Thok, Adam, MacK, and the rest of the group are going to do the mission. I'm just waiting for Thok.
Adam Posted September 19, 2008 Posted September 19, 2008 The two ran ahead to see the remains of a group of droids. It seemed that the odd cosmic blast had been too much for their main power functions. When Jim looked up, he noticed that a hidden door had been revealed, the edges of the entry way just outlined slightly. He consulted Adam, who suggested that they blow it down. They gasped when they saw what was inside. Oh, my! CLIFFHANGER!!! I hope no one's ticked about this one.
JimBee Posted September 20, 2008 Author Posted September 20, 2008 (edited) The smoke cleared away. What they saw was not good. What was behind the hidden door was a large, wide room with at least 30 mutants resting, fighting, and doing anything that mutants do. Fortunately, only some notcied that the door was blown open. "...Damn!" swore Adam. "RUN!!!" "C'mon, Adam, we can take 'em!" said Butcher. But when he looked behind, he had already left. "Guys...? Ugh...". He started running after his ally. He was out of sight, but Butcher took the logical way. He came upon a split in the hallway, and quickly decided to turn right. About five mutants were in hot pursuit. He urged the force and slid open a nearby door. Then everything went black... I love cliffhangers! Edited September 21, 2008 by JimButcher
Adam Posted September 20, 2008 Posted September 20, 2008 I'm confused... didn't you tell "the others" to go around the other side with MacK's frigate?
JimBee Posted September 20, 2008 Author Posted September 20, 2008 (edited) I'm confused... didn't you tell "the others" to go around the other side with MacK's frigate? Er... yeah... I forgot... I'll change my post in a bit. Edited September 21, 2008 by JimButcher
Adam Posted September 21, 2008 Posted September 21, 2008 Er... yeah... I forgot... I'll change my post in a bit. This one needs an edit, too. I'd continue, but I'll wait for you.
JimBee Posted September 21, 2008 Author Posted September 21, 2008 There you go, I just changed it so it has you in it, not the rest of the group.
Adam Posted September 21, 2008 Posted September 21, 2008 Adam darted through hallways, hoping that Butcher was close behind. He took a glance back, but he wasn't there. It was then that he ran headlong into a group of droids. Ohh, cliffhanger mania! I'll take care of this with my gun...
simonjedi Posted September 21, 2008 Posted September 21, 2008 Meanwhile IN THE FUTURE: Garviel left the medical bay in the standard rebel fatigues. He was feeling much better. The medical bay was more advance and much better equipted than MacK's freighter. He and the rebel trooper who was called Larkin was walking down the corridor. "You mentioned "Imps" Garviel muttered "Who are they a local tribe?" Larkin laughed "Have you been asleep for the last 20 years, Palpatine and Vader and the empire" Garviel looked back at him confused "Go check the archives" Larkin shrugged "But the imps have been cracking down on the alliance, ever since they lost the death star over yavin" "So why did you rescue me?" Garviel enquired, wanting to change the subject "The boss ordered us to" Larkin replied, stopping at a door and gesturing Loken inside. "an old freind" Sitting at the desk was a man Garviel instantly recognised, and for the first time since before Utapau, he smiled. An older Jim Butcher smiled back at him. DUN DUN DUNNN
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