simonjedi Posted October 11, 2008 Posted October 11, 2008 If anyone is bothered the cruiser in question is a banking clan frigate {meanwhile on the bridge of the seperatist cruiser} Bequin stumbled forward, summoning her lightsaber with the force. She was clearly in shock about the sudden change in the duel, and actually so was Garviel. He couldn't explain why lightning had emerged from his fingertips, before the fight could continue, klaxtons wailed across the bridge "Intruders" Bequin shouted. "Show me." a holocam feed appeared on a monitor showing 5 people dodging blasterfire. Bequin instantly recognised them. "how heroic" she scoffed, "Your friends are here to rescue you, too bad they never will" She ignited her lightsaber. Before she could strike several bolts of energy ripped through the bridge, the republic cruiser orbiting hoth had engaged the ship. Loken snatched the lightsaber from Bequins hand and ran out of the bridge.
Adam Posted October 11, 2008 Posted October 11, 2008 The group leapt out of the crates and began firing their guns while Adam whipped out his lightsaber. In the moments of spare time that the group had, he had been practicing. Adam still wasn't very good, but good enough. In a short amount of time, he had gotten skilled a deflecting bullets and basic swings- advanced moves, however, he could not perform. His moves, however, were enough- with the help of the others, the droids went down quickly. However, another group moved in, and Adam knew that they couldn't take a lot more. However, they were aided when Loken ran in with a red lightsaber...
JimBee Posted October 13, 2008 Author Posted October 13, 2008 "Guys, the plan was to *sneakily* scuttle over to this ship, grab Garviel, plant the bomb, and run. Apparently, we failed..." Jim Butcher said. "Wait, what's that?" he said as a figure with a red lightsaber ran towards the group of five. Butcher instinctively grabbed his lightsaber and ignited it. It turned out that the figure was Benquin, and Garviel was floating in the air in front of her. She obviously was using the force to lift him, but to do what? Butcher soon found out when Loken was thrown towards the group. He landed painfully on the hard, metal floor. "Everyone, find a ship, there's no way that we can take all of them! Adam, help me defend Oky Wan as he starts the bomb, and the rest of you find a multi-passenger ship. Take Garviel with you." Butcher yelled over the sound of blasters from the droids, the hum of three lightsabers, and the deafening blow of cannon fire from the Republic and CIS ships. As Adam and Butcher blocked laser bolts, Oky Wan started to set up the bomb, while Thok carried Loken to a two-seater CIS fighter and MacK took a Droid Dropship. Benquin charged towards Adam, and slashed out. The blow caught Adam off guard, and was cut in the arm, fortunately not too deep. Nonetheless, he screamed out in pain at the burning. Butcher attacked back with a quick stab, but missed. "Kenobi, leave it, it's too late. We'll be dead in moments, get to a ship." Butcher said. Oky Wan happily obliged while ducking, diving, and dodging blaster fire, and headed towards a medium-sized attack shuttle. Butcher and Adam slowly backed up towards the ship as Oky Wan fired up the engines. The dark Jedi was surprisingly fast, and the two lightsaber wielders had a hard time blocking them all. After about 15 seconds of blocking, they finally reached the cruiser door, and jumped in just before it took off. In the cruiser, Adam and Jim were catching their breath. "So, did you finish the bomb?" Jim asked. "No, we're going to have to take our chances with the ship chasing after us" Oky Wan replied. "Then our main priority is to get back to the main Cruiser and rendezvous with the rest of the group. We're in bad conditions as it is, with the Cruiser being damaged and Garviel being injured." Butcher said. "Especially since we have no communications, not even comm links." put in Adam. When they reached the Republic Attack Cruiser safely, the group found that the situation was not any better than they had left it. The Banking Clan warship was gaining on the RAC, and causing heavy damage. "Our only choice is to turn tail and run, and jump to hyperspace as soon as we can." explained Wouwie. "Then that's what we should do. Set coordinates to Felucia. Can we get a time estimate?" said Butcher. "About 10 minutes, I would say" said someone who looked quite out of place. "And who would you be?" asked Jim. "Jamie Dodger, sir, or JD for short. I'm from the future." he said with an eerie tone. "Uh huh..." Butcher replied. Yep, he thought. This is getting weirder and weirder. "They're gaining on us, there's no way that we're going to make it into hyperspace" said Wouwie. Butcher was at a loss of what to do or say. As the group argued over what they should do, Thok noticed that MacK was gone. "Hey, guys, have you seen MacK?" he said. Everyone paused. "Mack? Ma-ack?!" Oky Wan called out. "Wait, what's that on radar?" Wouwie asked, pointing at the green monitor. A little blip was moving away from the RAC and towards the CIS ship. Butcher gasped, "Oh, no". They all rushed to the back window, just in time to see the Dropship land in the hangar bay. About 30 seconds later, there was a massive explosion engulfing the whole CIS ship, sending it down to Hoth. Butcher noticed two small ships fly away as the whole thing went up in flames....... Goodbye, MacK (Cue closing credits). Yes, this is the end of Chapter 3, unless you guys have something else to add. I apologize for not being clear in my previous posts about the bomb and all... I wasn't quite sure what was going on myslef, but I hope this post cleared everything up. As for contacting "Da Death Star", I don't think that him and "The Death Star" are the same person, as you are not allowed to have multiple accounts. I'll have to ask a staff member if this becomes an issue, but for now, it's up to him to post here. Skipper 24 will be temporarily removed for now, but not killed off. He should remain with the ship until he decides to come back. I may add MacK's version of the last part of this chapter... I will start ope registration in one or two days after you guys have said whatever you want to say in the story. I'll also do the normal things at the end of the chapter- costume changes (possibly), banners, and new players.
Adam Posted October 13, 2008 Posted October 13, 2008 Actually, you can ask an admin to change your name, but unless he fits the exact description of The_Death_Star, they are not the same user. To Felucia!
Oky Posted October 13, 2008 Posted October 13, 2008 (edited) Good ending post, Jim! Even though it's kinda sad. The only thing that I have to add to the story is pictures - I have not posted any during this chapter. So, I will need to find some time and take and upload some to meet the requirement of at least one pic per chapter. I am pretty sure that the two Death Stars are the same. Both are from Alberta, Canada, they like the same three lego themes, and they have the same Avatar. Coincidence? I don't think so. So, someone should report to an admin, and if they confirm this and are OK with it, we can ask DS to rejoin for the next chapter. I think I'll keep my outfit for the next chapter. I really like how I look in that jet trooper armor, and a jetpack will probably be useful on Felucia. See you there! Edited October 13, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi
simonjedi Posted October 13, 2008 Posted October 13, 2008 (edited) Another chapter gone! Something that's been bugging me though is theres too many "mary sue" characters around including me. (force powers, suddenly being awesome with a lightsaber, entering the future, ect) I have nothing against it if its logical and i'm writing off my force lightning as an after effect of time travel. But can we please tune it down? i'll try to get a chapter summary done soon. For felucia it will be the battlepack rebel fleet trooper torso and legs. also because i've been thrown around a bit: TFU apprentice body and legs for the first 3 posts. (in the cruiser) EDIT: What part of the clone wars is the story based? I was thinking/basing it on happening a month or 2 after the theatrical clone wars movie which is about 6 months after geonosis Is that ok? Edited October 13, 2008 by simonjedi
Oky Posted October 13, 2008 Posted October 13, 2008 Another chapter gone!1) Something that's been bugging me though is theres too many "mary sue" characters around including me. (force powers, suddenly being awesome with a lightsaber, entering the future, ect) I have nothing against it if its logical and i'm writing off my force lightning as an after effect of time travel. But can we please tune it down? 2) i'll try to get a chapter summary done soon. For felucia it will be the battlepack rebel fleet trooper torso and legs. 3) also because i've been thrown around a bit: TFU apprentice body and legs for the first 3 posts. (in the cruiser) 4) EDIT: What part of the clone wars is the story based? I was thinking/basing it on happening a month or 2 after the theatrical clone wars movie which is about 6 months after geonosis Is that ok? 1) Seriously! Everyone is turning into a Jedi lately. 2) Making chapter summaries is actually my job but if you really really want to, you can make one too. Let's make it a race shall we? The summary that gets done first, will be official. Ready, Set, GO! JK 3) Since only few of us (if anyone) has the Rogue Shadow, we won't be able to recreate that. Any alternative? 4)Well, we never really agreed on a specific time, but we did say that it's halfway through the clone wars, around 20 BBY when the clones were switching from Phase 1 to Phase 2 armor (so that you can use any kind you have/want to in your picture posts ). And seeing as Bequin seems to be the new Assajj Ventress, we have to assume that Ventress has been defeated, which means that this game is set sometime after the happenings of Star Wars: The Clone Wars. What does it matter for you anyway?
Adam Posted October 13, 2008 Posted October 13, 2008 (edited) Felucia me: Since I know you don't have the face, you can just put in an all black head- I'm gonna have to go incognito with that lightsaber. You can change the pants to something with a belt if you like, but it has to be brown or black. BTW, this acutally IS a different color than black, but we can use black now, right? Since the chapter is over? And new people can start joining? Edited October 13, 2008 by Adam
simonjedi Posted October 13, 2008 Posted October 13, 2008 (edited) alternative costume: "battlepack rebel fleet trooper torso and legs" also i quite like the rouge shadow :P Bequin seems to be the new Assajj Ventress, we have to assume that Ventress has been defeated, which means that this game is set sometime after the happenings of Star Wars: The Clone Wars. default_sceptic.gifWhat does it matter for you anyway? I'm guessing Assji is still around fighting the important characters :P Bequin is stuck with us. Not any real reason i just want to know where it is so i can make a few referances to the series "master koon has reported fantastic results with the new Y-wing bomber." I also wanted to get a time frame so i know half way through a chapter order 66 isn't sent or something also Da Death Star is actually the death star, according to his sig his account is borked so he's got a new one. you might as well do the chapter summaries i won't have the time to do it till thursday. Edited October 13, 2008 by simonjedi
JimBee Posted October 13, 2008 Author Posted October 13, 2008 Alright, since it seems that we're pretty much done, this is the End of Chapter Three You can stop talking in different colors, now, until the story starts up again. And, anyone who wants to join may do so now, the deadline for entering is Friday, the 24th of October, so eleven days. I'll try to make a banner, but CCP (Crystal Clear Productions, the people who helped make our banner last time) seem to be busy. If any of you want to make one, please, feel free to do so. As for outfit changes, mine will be my regular one, which is a tan Naboo pilot torso (a Nazi one will do as well) with Indy legs, a regular smiley head, and a brown squashed police cap, like the one in the N-1 Starfighter. Brown hands, please, if possible. Regular weapons, too: Harpoon gun with grey EF robot hand on barrel, blue lightsaber (used rarely), small black handgun (found in most Agents sets), and the usual gadgets (mostly comm links, sometimes tracking devices and other necessities). Adam, is it okay if I use that Castle head that I've used before? It looks very similar to your choice, just with black hair. And yes, it is okay to change your costume to black, or any color, but I strongly suggest colors that don't stick out in the location that we're currently in. Simonjedi, I don't have the Apprentice torso, so I'll just be sticking with the rebel torso all the way. As for the Jedi thing, I was the first one! Well, not actually a Jedi, but a slightly force sensitive being. Plus, I barely use my lightsaber in the story. It's okay to have a lightsaber, but please don;t take it to the extreme, such as a superhuman with unlimited life or an expert lightsaber duelist. Actually, I don't care if you're a Jedi, as long as it's realistic. And no, not everyone can be a Jedi. Did I cover everything...? Remember, new joiners join now! I suggest current players put that in their sigs. I am, at least.
-JD- Posted October 13, 2008 Posted October 13, 2008 Nice ending! Except for MacK dying . Couple of questions: How many more players will join? Will the game carry on into the empire era, as I have something planned. J
Adam Posted October 13, 2008 Posted October 13, 2008 I think that the game will carry into the time inbetween episodes 3 and 4, when the Jedi are eliminated. Also, you can use that Castle head, but for the banner image, if the one making it doesn't have my head, could the Castle hair be colored red?
JimBee Posted October 13, 2008 Author Posted October 13, 2008 Nice ending! Except for MacK dying .Couple of questions: How many more players will join? Will the game carry on into the empire era, as I have something planned. J The amount of players is limitless, within reason. The game will remain within the clone wars, with the exception of occasional time travel. Also, you can use that Castle head, but for the banner image, if the one making it doesn't have my head, could the Castle hair be colored red? I'll see what can be done. I don't think that the hair will show up much under the hood, anyway.
Adam Posted October 13, 2008 Posted October 13, 2008 Wait. What about using MacK's head? He's dead, and the two heads are virtually the same!
-JD- Posted October 13, 2008 Posted October 13, 2008 How about this banner I made? http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3473770 Hope it's ok. J
JimBee Posted October 13, 2008 Author Posted October 13, 2008 Wait.What about using MacK's head? He's dead, and the two heads are virtually the same! Sure, that works. How about this banner I made?http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3473770 Hope it's ok. J Not yet public, do you mind deeplinking it?
Bob Posted October 14, 2008 Posted October 14, 2008 Mind if I join? Thats me with a bunch of clones Thats just me (Im not a beachcomber, its supposed to be a mine detector.) Character: Bob Constructionmanly (attempted to combine two words in one) Story: One of the few people that werent Kaminoans living on Kamino, Bob noticed a huge rush of clones being formed about 10 years prior to the start of the clone wars. Wanting to make his own clones he put his DNA in for an order of 8 clones. He trained them under his guidance for advanced combat. Now that the Clone Wars have started, he requested the services of a Jedi and recieved one. His name is complicated so everyone calls him Al for short. His squad only lost one clone when there gunship was shot down. The clone flew out the open doors of the gunship, no body was recovered. The loss hit everyone hard because they were close. Since there high effectiveness, the Republic calls them in for "important" operations. Bob uses a gunship. He is also a good pilot, despite the fact that he is not force sensitive. So thats my character basicly.
JimBee Posted October 14, 2008 Author Posted October 14, 2008 Hm, thank you Bob. Unfortunately, I only have the helmet to your character, and there are some pretty rare parts that you have. Do mind changing it a little bit? Also, your characters name... Constructionmanly is a little... un-star warsy... I don't have a problem if that's really what you want, but perhaps something a little more fitting would be better. Just a small suggestion, and I'm glad to have you in the game!
Bob Posted October 14, 2008 Posted October 14, 2008 Okay, Ill search for some new clothes and a new last name. lll have it up soon.
-JD- Posted October 14, 2008 Posted October 14, 2008 (edited) There you go. I love the chaingun I made, even though I had to break up a custom mini-fig scale chicken to make it. I saw it somewhere on EB or another website. J Edited October 14, 2008 by Jammiedodger714
Adam Posted October 14, 2008 Posted October 14, 2008 (edited) What about my new outfit? We're on Felucia! Not some desert planet. So why is the ground tan? EDIT: My character also has Indy's pouch. Edited October 14, 2008 by Adam
Bob Posted October 14, 2008 Posted October 14, 2008 (edited) I took your advice and make: Bob Artigulu as my new name. (Thats not my real name) Thats me, revised addition Attack Position B! Its basicly the same story. Edited October 14, 2008 by Bob the Construction Man
JimBee Posted October 14, 2008 Author Posted October 14, 2008 Thanks, JD for making the banner, but you have some wrong outfits in there. I'll try to have mine up soon! Bob, thank you for changing those things. I'll have to use a black visor instead of gold, though, if you don't mind.
-JD- Posted October 15, 2008 Posted October 15, 2008 The costumes are based on Oky's old banner. I thought they would be ok as it is the clone wars! J
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