Oky Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 (edited) Thanks for the reply but who build the time machine?Is it top secret?Was it created by the sepratists?Can someone give me an update of this time machine You should read my summaries of ALL the Chapters to fully understand what's going on. You can find them in my signature below. Please spell my name with a double 'm'.Jammiedodger714 instead of Jamiedodger714 Thanks. Are you talking to me? I thought I already spelled you like that. The time machine is a separatist super weapon, designed to help the war effort (going back in time to kill jedi before they join the order/ destroy kamino ect) its gguarded by Bequin (see previous post) who is actually from the future, where the time machine worked and defeated the republic. Should I add the part about Beqin to the summary? Edited October 17, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi
-JD- Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 Thanks. On felucia will we help out the clones or is it just a rendevous? I also have a good design for a felucian.
simonjedi Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 Should I add the part about Beqin to the summary? If you want: heres the complete quote/backstory to save you looking for it "With the time machine intact Dooku was free to do what he wanted, defeats turned to victories, as the clone were destroyed earlier in the war on kamino. jedi knights, thorns in the CIS side were wiped from existence. Eventually the republic crumbled, with sidious becoming the ruler and Dooku the head of a sith army on the ruins of the jedi temple."She sighed again "with the whole galaxy under the CIS, no one was willing to rise up, dooku would be able to destroy the rebellions before it ever started and they did. I was a member of the sith empire when they turned Naboo into a wasteland. I fled and met up with Jim Butcher who sent me back here to stop you, I had the perfect chance to do so before on Utapau, before you damn companion sacrificed himself."
Oky Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 (edited) If you want:heres the complete quote/backstory to save you looking for it Thanks! That helped a lot! I have added that information to my summary now. I have made changes here: ... he was transported through time into the future. There, he met up with Adam and an aged Jim Butcher, who told them all about the Empire, the rebels, and what had happened by the end of the Clone Wars. It turned out that he and his rebel engineers had recreated and perfected the separatists' time machine so that they could warn them about the future. It was also revealed that Beqin is from an alternative future where the separatists succeeded in winning the Clone Wars by using the time machine to eliminate the Republic. It was now up to Adam and Garviel to warn the others and stop Beqin from aiding the separatists in completing their machine. and here: ... Garviel defended himself against his arch nemesis. Surprisingly, he did that using force lightning that suddenly shot out of his fingers. It was then that Beqin revealed to him that she was sent from the future by the Jim Butcher of her alternate universe to prevent Garviel from foiling the separatists' time travel plans. Hope that's OK like that. Anything else I need to change? Edited October 17, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi
JimBee Posted October 17, 2008 Author Posted October 17, 2008 which means... What I meant is that I don't quite understand what you're trying to accomplish here. It would be okay if you stayed on the ship and kind of did you're own thing, but it would be preferred if you don't time travel or take an escape pod for the time being.
simonjedi Posted October 17, 2008 Posted October 17, 2008 (edited) Garviel ran after him, but suddenly, he was transported through time into the future. There, he met up with Adam and an aged Jim Butcher, who told them all about the Empire, the rebels, and what had happened by the end of the Clone Wars. It turned out that he and his rebel engineers had recreated and perfected the separatists' time machine so that they could warn them about the future. It was now up to Garviel to warn the others and stop the group from destroying the separatist's time machine. The three managed to return to their own time successfully, but on the way, there was a glitch that resulted in Garviel being left on board a separatist cruiser above Hoth, right in front of Beqin. While the other two appeared in front of Oky Wan, MacK Wouwie, and Thok and told them what had happened, Bequin revealed to Garviel that she is from an alternative future where Garviel protected the time machine, that caused the separatists to win the Clone Wars. She then revealed to him that she was sent from the future by the Jim Butcher of her alternate universe to prevent Garviel from saving separatists time machine plans. Garviel then defended himself against his arch nemesis. Surprisingly, he did that using force lightning that suddenly shot out of his fingers. fixed the quotes, feel free to improve my grammar ect EDIT: What I meant is that I don't quite understand what you're trying to accomplish here. It would be okay if you stayed on the ship and kind of did you're own thing, but it would be preferred if you don't time travel or take an escape pod for the time being. default_blink.gif My original idea is to stay on the ship, treat 2 chapters worth of wounds, the damaged ship is then attacked by a separatist fleet then, everyone has to evacuate the ship (introducing one or more new players). but i'm flexible story wise, sorry i got bitchy as well. Edited October 17, 2008 by simonjedi
Oky Posted October 18, 2008 Posted October 18, 2008 (edited) Can you leave me on the cruiser when the game starts and you all go down to felucia?i have a few plot points to tie up and i want to enter felucia in an escape pod (spoiler :P) No can-do, simon. The story of this game is based on players' reactions on others' posts. We're not gonna change what we posted just so that you can tell your own little story. You can fill those plot holes in the next chapter via flashbacks. And, who knows, maybe we'll get attacked on the way to Felucia so that we will have to use escape pods to get to the planet. (possible spoiler ) My original idea is to stay on the ship, treat 2 chapters worth of wounds, the damaged ship is then attacked by a separatist fleet then, everyone has to evacuate the ship (introducing one or more new players). Ooops! I misunderstood you there, simon. I thought you wanted us to change the last post of chapter 3 so that you were left behind on the separatist cruiser that crashed onto Hoth. But now I understand: You just want us to leave you on the Republic Attack Cruiser when we get to Felucia in the next chapter. We can certainly do that. Sorry for reacting like that. But as Jim said, it would still be nice if you wouldn't go solo so much in the future. I'll add the changes that you made to the summary. Edited October 18, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi
simonjedi Posted October 19, 2008 Posted October 19, 2008 Don't worry about the misunderstanding, i won't go solo for most of the chapter, the only reason i decided to go solo for a bit was that the plot had become too... confusing. I'm also feeling that Garvi's story should end soon, it ain't concrete yet, because I want to see if we actually destroy the time machine instead of planet hopping for another 2 chapters. Can jim start the chaper soon please, i'm eager to get back into it
Oky Posted October 19, 2008 Posted October 19, 2008 I'm also feeling that Garvi's story should end soon, it ain't concrete yet, because I want to see if we actually destroy the time machine instead of planet hopping for another 2 chapters. Does this mean you're planning to kill yourself off? Can jim start the chaper soon please, i'm eager to get back into it Patience, young padawan! As it says in his sig, you only have to wait until the 24th.
simonjedi Posted October 19, 2008 Posted October 19, 2008 Does this mean you're planning to kill yourself off? i'm thinking about it, i'll see where the chapter goes. Patience, young padawan! As it says in his sig, you only have to wait until the 24th. ah, lol i didn't see it
-JD- Posted October 21, 2008 Posted October 21, 2008 (edited) Are you talking to me? I thought I already spelled you like that. No, not just you. I know you spell it right! Its just that a few members including simon made the mistake and lt.thok. I'm excited about the new chapter. Just realised: I AM A CITIZEN OF EB!!! Yeh baby! Edited October 21, 2008 by Jammiedodger714
JimBee Posted October 21, 2008 Author Posted October 21, 2008 (edited) Hey everyone, I've been really busy with school lately, so I'm changing the deadline. I can either start the new chapter tomorrow or extend it... I'm assuming tomorrow is a better choice. I also have the pic for the banner, but I am unable to make a full banner, anyone want to give it a shot? (Check this post for a pic later). EDIT: Here is the pic. I can try to do something tonight, but no promises. Thanks to anyone who can do this! Edited October 21, 2008 by JimButcher
Da Death Star! Posted October 22, 2008 Posted October 22, 2008 (edited) Okay,I have no idea how I should put this,but:I'm back. Oh,by the way,I'm just going to say that my character wandered off because he saw something. Edited October 22, 2008 by Da Death Star!
pr0visorak Posted October 22, 2008 Posted October 22, 2008 Hey everyone, I've been really busy with school lately, so I'm changing the deadline. I can either start the new chapter tomorrow or extend it... I'm assuming tomorrow is a better choice. I also have the pic for the banner, but I am unable to make a full banner, anyone want to give it a shot? (Check this post for a pic later).EDIT: Here is the pic. I can try to do something tonight, but no promises. Thanks to anyone who can do this! I will try to make a banner too using that pic,no promises though. By the way, how much longer till the game?
simonjedi Posted October 22, 2008 Posted October 22, 2008 Hey everyone, I've been really busy with school lately, so I'm changing the deadline. I can either start the new chapter tomorrow or extend it... I'm assuming tomorrow is a better choice Tomorrow is fine for me, I guess we've got all the new characters we are going to get this chapter, and Da Death Star is back. @ Jammiedodger714 sorry I spelt your name wrong.
Bob Posted October 22, 2008 Posted October 22, 2008 He He. I look great. I look sortof evil, but I guess that doesnt matter.
JimBee Posted October 22, 2008 Author Posted October 22, 2008 Da Death Star, welcome back, I suppose. You can just remain as your previous character, who is still on the ship with the rest of us. Also, I'd like to start the game up again tomorrow, because I'm too busy today. Sorry! I'm also working on that banner, just need to do some fine-tuning. SimonJedi, the time machine will be destroyed very soon, I'm planning on it being in this chapter, but don't tell anyone. (Hehe, whoops!).
Adam Posted October 23, 2008 Posted October 23, 2008 I've finished my banner: If you have any gripes with it, tell me, and I'll try and fix it!
Oky Posted October 23, 2008 Posted October 23, 2008 (edited) Okay,I have no idea how I should put this,but:I'm back. Well, I don't know how to put this, but: You better mean it this time. Last time you disappeared after only a couple of posts. And it wasn't even very clear what was going on in those posts. No hard feelings, but it would be nice if you would join up with the other characters soon and post regularly in the future, like the rules of this game call for. Other than that: Welcome back! Da Death Star, welcome back, I suppose. You can just remain as your previous character, who is still on the ship with the rest of us. No, he isn't! He was left for dead in front of the CIS facility, remember? If you have any gripes with it, tell me, and I'll try and fix it! Hehe, that's very nice, especially with the background and all! And - woah! - is that a custom jetpack my character is wearing? Sweet! However, the pic is still a little too big to fit in a sig. Would be nice if you could resize it for us. Additionally, as I have said before, it would be good if it would say "Chapter 4" somewhere in there. More informative, you know? And even though it's pretty cool, the font isn't very SW-ish. Perhaps you could download a SW font from somewhere? They're usually free. But that's just being nit-picky of course. Also, could someone please tell us who is who in that pic? Just to be sure. Edited October 23, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi
Adam Posted October 23, 2008 Posted October 23, 2008 Here is the updated version: while I try and find a font. BTW, the pic is Jim's, so thank congratulate him on the jetpack! Here's the people in the sig: From left to right- Top Row: pr0, Annix (?), Bob Artigula, JD Bottom Row: Garviel, Oky Wan, Jim (he matured! ), myself (Adam), and Thok. Hope that helps!
JimBee Posted October 23, 2008 Author Posted October 23, 2008 No, he isn't! He was left for dead in front of the CIS facility, remember? Hehe, that's very nice, especially with the background and all! And - woah! - is that a custom jetpack my character is wearing? Sweet! However, the pic is still a little too big to fit in a sig. Would be nice if you could resize it for us. Additionally, as I have said before, it would be good if it would say "Chapter 4" somewhere in there. More informative, you know? And even though it's pretty cool, the font isn't very SW-ish. Perhaps you could download a SW font from somewhere? They're usually free. But that's just being nit-picky of course. Also, could someone please tell us who is who in that pic? Just to be sure. Ah, I see... well... can we just say that that didn't happen? Nah... just make a new character, DDS. I also made the picture, Oky Wan, not him! No, the jetpack isn't custom, just a ski backpack. That other black thing that you see on the right side of the pack is part of wouwie's gun. From left to right, top to bottom: pr0 Wouwie Bob JD SimonJedi Oky Wan Jim Butcher Adam Thok Thanks for the sweet banner, Adam, much better than mine (although I used the same background pic). As Oky Wan said, you could maybe tweak the font, but other than that, great work!
Oky Posted October 23, 2008 Posted October 23, 2008 (edited) Ah, I see... well... can we just say that that didn't happen? Nah... just make a new character, DDS. Oh,by the way,I'm just going to say that my character wandered off because he saw something. Don't you ever pay attention!? He said that he is going to say that his character left the freighter before it exploded. Sheesh! I also made the picture, Oky Wan, not him! No, the jetpack isn't custom, just a ski backpack. That other black thing that you see on the right side of the pack is part of wouwie's gun. I never said that he made the pic. Could you show me a bricklink pic or something of that "ski backpack"? I don't think I've ever seen it before. BTW, do we still have to drag Skipper24 along with us? As you said, this is probably the last chapter, so if he's not going to play anytime soon, there's no point in keeping him alive. @Adam: Nice size! Thanks! I still don't see a "Chapter 4" in there, but... whatever. Chapter 4 ON! Edited October 23, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi
pr0visorak Posted October 23, 2008 Posted October 23, 2008 Here is the updated version: while I try and find a font. BTW, the pic is Jim's, so thank congratulate him on the jetpack! Here's the people in the sig: From left to right- Top Row: pr0, Annix (?), Bob Artigula, JD Bottom Row: Garviel, Oky Wan, Jim (he matured! ), myself (Adam), and Thok. Hope that helps! Nice banner! Yay! My character is first!
Da Death Star! Posted October 23, 2008 Posted October 23, 2008 Well, I don't know how to put this, but: You better mean it this time. Last time you disappeared after only a couple of posts. And it wasn't even very clear what was going on in those posts. No hard feelings, but it would be nice if you would join up with the other characters soon and post regularly in the future, like the rules of this game call for.Other than that: Welcome back! Short explanation:Account screwed up on me,and I couldn't get back in.Long explanation:I deleted some of the cookies on my computer(Can't remember why,I think it had something to do with the Page can not be displayed message coming up every time I tryed to go to BZPower)and so it didn't do the thing with the Do you want Internet explorer to remember this password?And I tryed logging in to EB,put in my password and username(The correct ones,mind you)and it didn't work.And I WILL post regularly.
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