The Star Wars Comic Game-Season One

[Adam]

I've been unable to find a font yet, but I'll keep trying!

[JimBee]

Don't you ever pay attention!? He said that he is going to say that his character left the freighter before it exploded. Sheesh!

Yeah, I heard him, it's just it would make a lot more sense if he didn't leave the ship at all, and lived. Ah, well, we'll just leave it at that (that he left the ship) and continue the story.

And about Skipper... he should still have a spot in the game, unless he requests to be killed off (which, admittedly, we (or I) should have done with DDS). It's not like we're "dragging him along", he's just part of the clone squadron for now. The new chapter starts later today, so be ready.

[Adam]

I'm planning on killing off the mutant plotline somewhere during the chapter. It sucked, I know, but I had to introduce myself somehow...

[JimBee]

Well, here we go again. But before we start the game up again, here's a few reminders:

- Remember to post all non-story related things (such as commenting on a MOC) in a different color, like this.

- Please try to post pics for the story at least once per chapter.

- Have fun!

Chapter 4

Jim Butcher gazed out of a port-side window. Even from space, he could see the beauty of the planet Felucia, as well as the dangers that came along. This is going to be a tough one, he thought. But he could also feel the end coming, whether good or bad for him and his allies, he didn't know.

"Sir, we've arrived," stated one of the clone pilots that were on board. Jim started. He hadn't even sensed the pilot approaching.

"Very good, corporal. Prepare to land".

Now was the time to hold a private meeting with his teammates to discuss the plans for Felucia. He headed towards the conference room. They would be there.

As he walked through the automatic sliding door, he pondered their coming mission.

"Jim, you're here" greeted Oky Wan. Butcher sat down.

"Okay, let's discuss the plan," said Thok. "Since the CIS are regrouping, we'll have a good chance of landing, but not too close to the bunker, where Adam has informed us is".

"Then sneak into the base?" asked JD.

"Unfortunately, it's not that simple this time. They will be expecting us, and will have tripled security" explained Adam. "We'll have to do an aerial attack with a small ship, and hope that we blow the place up. Most likely not though, the CIS aren't that careless. We'll have to use the explosion as a distraction while we sneak in, and plant charges on the main generator. But it won't be easy".

"With all of the security?! It's doubtful" said Easy 501.

"We'll have to take our chances," said Butcher. "It's the only way for now, but a solution will present itself when the time comes. Now, I suggest we get ready for the assault, there's no time to lose, they could use the time machine at any time, and that spells doom for us all".

Everyone was happy to oblige, and headed towards their respective quarters to suit up.

[Adam]

Adam walked backed to his room, surveying their plan of action. With such a small party, their chances were incredibly small- the main attack force sent to blow up the generator would have to be less than 5 or 6 people. It was important that the clones caused the diversion, for they were the easiest to recognize and would be less effective as commando operatives. Adam worried- MacK had died on the Seperatist Crusier, and from what he had heard from the others, many others had died as well- inclding that soldier in MacK's frigate. "We're entering the atmosphere, sir!" The pilots were to direct all updates to Adam and the others. As Adam walked in the room, he instantly veered toward the left, which was completely blank. He pressed his hand upon a section of the wall, which opened at his touch. From inside the opening, he removed a small, rectangular object. He stared at it for a while, then, with a sigh, put it away. All of a sudden, the ship lurched.

You guys wanted to be attacked, or something? Voila.

[pr0visorak]

OOC: Sorry for interupting the game but am I suppose ro introduce myself or not? Or is someone doing that for me?

[-JD-]

The pilots stared out the cockpit window and saw five venator-class star-destroyers which had just come out of hyperspace. Some banking clan ships appeared from nowhere and the two sides opened fire. All hell broke loose.

The clone invasion has begun!

Edited October 24, 2008 by Jammiedodger714

[JimBee]

OOC: Sorry for interupting the game but am I suppose ro introduce myself or not? Or is someone doing that for me?

Nope, you do it yourself. You could fly in on a ship and help with the CIS ships attacking our Republic battleship, or just meet us on Felucia. Whatever you want.

The pilots stared out the cockpit window and saw five venator-class star-destroyers which had just come out of hyperspace. Some banking clan ships appeared from nowhere and the two sides opened fire. All hell broke loose.

The clone invasion has begun!

Not to attack you or anything, Jammie, but that post just kind of threw off the whole story. How were we supposed to communicate with the Republic, we've been jammed by the CIS. Besides, one of the points of the story is that we're supposed to be alone and unaided.

[simonjedi]

The Transport containing Garviel Loken, was half way to Felucia, when separatist reinforcements emerged out of hyperspace. He was sent to scout the area out and establish a staging post for the rest of the team.

The first opening salvo ripped through the engines

"Sir" Called the Clone sergeant of the squad escorting Loken to the planets surface "We've lost engines."

Loken sighed, he was hoping the mission would go better than this "Contact the fleet and tell them, we're crash landing but we'll meet up on the surface when we can."

"Yes sir" The sergeant replied "Everyone strap in, its going to be a bumpy landing"

Edited October 26, 2008 by simonjedi

[BPac21]

Any possibility that I can join in? If so, I hope this descripion will help: light bley hips, white legs, white torso with classic space printing, white arms, black hands, old dark grey samurai chast armor, dark bley battle droid body (fits as head, place where legs WOULD go facing back), one trans-lime cone on each side where the arms WOULD go, one trans-lime cone on top of head, and on top of aforementioned cone a ''bubble helmet'' from Insectoids or Alpha Team- it can be trans-green or trans-lime. I will try and post pics ASAP.

[Bob]

(Small cruiser comes in from out of hyperspace)

Attention Republic Ships. Need any help beating off those droids? This is Bob, a loyal republican fighter. My clones are ready for attack as well. I repeat, Need some help?

[-JD-]

They are not helping us. It is meant to be the 501st and they won't be aiding us as their target is somewhere else. They were just intercepted by the seps on their way to their target. So it does not effect the story .

I was planning for my character to go off and see himself fighting. Then something happens. So it is just affecting my character, not you lot.

I hope this solves the problem.

[Adam]

Adam swerved around and looked at a monitor, and then listened to the message that the ship had just recieved. This was the perfect opportunity. A plan came into his head, and Adam made a snap decision. He switched the open channel to a private one between he and the engineers.

"Quick- ready two escape pods and the back cannon. I'll explain when I get there."

Adam swerved through hallways until he reached the engine room, grateful that no one had intercepted him. He opened the doors and saw the bewildered engineers at the controls, fiddling with the backup escape pods that they kept there. They looked up questioningly when Adam arrived.

"Okay, here's what I want you to do: A Republic transport is being is on it's way in as reinforments, and this is the perfect time to do a little recon of my own. I want you to tell no one about this, you got that?"

The engineers nodded.

"Here's the plan: You're to send out the first escape pod in the direction of the Republic backup. Make sure it's not going to fast, and when it nears his ship, I want you to blow it up."

The engineers were shocked- blow up the escape pod? What would that achieve?

"But before you do so, use the radio feed between you and the escape pod to send out a cry of help- from the escape pod. I'll be in the second escape pod. As soon as you blow up the first escape pod, send me out towards the alternate landing point at the fastest speed possible. Don't ask questions!" He said when one of the engineers opened his mouth.

"Just do it."

Edited October 25, 2008 by Adam

[Da Death Star!]

OOC:So should I make a new character or just carry on as if nothing happened?

[JimBee]

Any possibility that I can join in? If so, I hope this descripion will help: light bley hips, white legs, white torso with classic space printing, white arms, black hands, old dark grey samurai chast armor, dark bley battle droid body (fits as head, place where legs WOULD go facing back), one trans-lime cone on each side where the arms WOULD go, one trans-lime cone on top of head, and on top of aforementioned cone a ''bubble helmet'' from Insectoids or Alpha Team- it can be trans-green or trans-lime. I will try and post pics ASAP.

Sure, sine the chapter has only started, just get some pics.

They are not helping us. It is meant to be the 501st and they won't be aiding us as their target is somewhere else. They were just intercepted by the seps on their way to their target. So it does not effect the story .

I was planning for my character to go off and see himself fighting. Then something happens. So it is just affecting my character, not you lot.

I hope this solves the problem.

Still confused... but just post something to clear this up (in the story).

OOC:So should I make a new character or just carry on as if nothing happened?

Carry on.

Sorry I haven't made a post (besides the starter) yet, I'm just waiting for more people to post.

Edited October 25, 2008 by JimButcher

[Adam]

Adam climbed into the second pod while the engineers fired the first. He would be on the planet soon, and would finally be able to finish what he had started what felt like so long ago... If only he could remember it's exact position, if only he didn't have to grope through the devilish beauty of Felucia to find it. But he'd have to, because it was completely necessary to not only save the galaxy, but himself from what promised to be a life long feud between pain and destruction. He couldn't let that prospect become a reality.

"We're ready to deploy you, sir!" The operation was going by quickly. Good.

"Okay, send me out!" Adam replied, closing the escape pod's door. The engineers fiddled with the controls until the pod's speed was supposedly set at it's maximum. When Adam checked the set speed in the cockpit, he found that he could raise it more. He was glad that he had taken the extra precation of disabling their commincation feeds to the rest of the ship, and also happy that he had stolen their commlinks. The pod shot out of the ship.

[simonjedi]

Loken regained conscious 10 minutes after crash landing on felucia, looking into the armoured head of the clone sergeant.

"Sir, you're alive!" he looked shocked "We couldn't find any other survivors"

Garviel sighed "How many survived then?"

"You, me, 5 of my squad and one of the pilots. Rest are dead"

Loken sighed again, It would be difficult with a whole battalion, let alone 8 survivors. His mood didn't cheer up much when he left the cruiser, and took his first look at the felucian scenery. He became transfixed on the sheer alienness of it, glancing up at the cloudless sky he noticed the two fleets in the planets orbit, firing and absorbing shots, that could have decimated a city. A republic cruiser exploded.

"Sir" the sergeants voice, pulled him back to the moment, "We better get going, the Clankers would have picked up the crash by now and felucia's famous for having... interesting night life."

"Ok, sergeant lead the way. Have you let Oky and Jim know of our position?"

"No, the amount of interference up there, makes it impossible. and if the fighting continues to get as bad as it has, there might be no one to contact, We're going to head to a small Clanker outpost a few kilometres north of here, we'll try to contact them then. The Men have all the equiptment, they can carry and we're going to detonate the ship to cover our escape."

Garviel Loken, and 7 clone troopers disappeared into the undergrowth.

Edited October 30, 2008 by simonjedi

[Da Death Star!]

Carry on.

M'kay.Oh,by the way,Simonjedi,would it be okay for my character to have been a stowaway on your Cruiser?

[simonjedi]

M'kay.Oh,by the way,Simonjedi,would it be okay for my character to have been a stowaway on your Cruiser?

sure, you have to get out quickly before it explodes though :P

Edited October 26, 2008 by simonjedi

[Da Death Star!]

Thanks

IC:William Jones coughed from the smoke of the wreckage and pulled out his blaster pistol.Then he saw multiple thermal detonators scattered around what remained of the cruiser."Oh S***!"He cursed as he started to sprint away from the cruiser.Then it blew.William was thrown into the vegetation by the force of the blast.He spat dirt out of his mouth and got up.He saw a man and some Clone Troopers walking through a gap in the bushes,and cocked his blaster pistol.

Remember that Will has absolutely no idea who Garviel is.

[Adam]

As Adam's pod neared the set landing point, he altered the coordinates so that he would land where he wanted to go. He couldn't let the engineers know his position, it was far too dangerous. The escape pod continued to make it's way to the set point when a Republic transport blew up. It was Loken's transport. Adam was about to change course to help when he noticed that a small group of men were making their way towards another man. One of them was Garviel. Adam heaved a sigh a relief and prayed that they didn't notice him.

***********************************************

The pod landed with an ungraceful thud, and Adam cursed the abismal landing gear. He pushed open the door- which was halfway in some orange plant- and jumped out of the pod. And all of a sudden, he was thrown foward as a piece of wreckage crashed onto the pod, causing it to explode.

Next post has pics! And, if possible, I'd like to give pr0 an introduction? I'm planning on having him find me on the surface.

Edited October 26, 2008 by Adam

[JimBee]

"Sir, we're getting a signal from an unknown cruiser, possibly a Republic ally" said a techie.

"Patch it through" said Jim.

"Yessir"

A blue hologram of an unfamiliar figure appeared on the holo-projector.

"Hello, my name is Bob Artigulu, I'm a Republic ally. Do need assistance?"

"Any we can get is highly appreciated, thank you" Butcher replied. Finally, some luck.

"Alright, how can I help?"

"You can try to take down that cruiser's shields. Unfortunately, these Republic shuttles are only passing through to get to another planet, where it is more needed... of course they don't know about-" he stopped talking. He had almost let it slip, and he hardly knew this guy! Let alone his affiliation.

"Alright, here I go..." Bob said nervously.

"Captain, call the team up here. It's time to end this" commanded Jim.

"Yessir". came the reply.

***

"What's up, Jim?" asked Oky Wan when he and the rest of the team got to the main control room.

"It's time".

"Where's Garviel?" asked Thok.

"He went in to another ship to command, but we're not sure where that ship is..." he replied. Just then, as if on cue, the group watched in horror as the cruiser flying next to theirs went up in flames. Nobody said anything for a few seconds. Wouwie broke the silence.

"Oh no... that was Garviel's ship, wasn't it?" He was afraid of the answer.

"Y-Yes..."

They silently grieved over Garviel's death as their ship shook by the force of the Seperatist cruiser's cannon fire...

Remember, they don't know that Garviel escaped, or that Adam left the ship. By the way, Adam, how would you take all of the comm links in the ship?

Edited October 26, 2008 by JimButcher

[simonjedi]

My ship that i was in, was a Consular class crusier (Lego set 7665) not a Venator or an Acclamator

"Sir, we're picking up a lifeform behind us"

Confused Garviel looked over "do you think its a survivor?"

"I doubt it sir, everyone was accounted for, it could be a separatist"

"hmmm" Garviel thought "Sergeant, Get into ambush position, lets play him at his own game."

"Yes sir " A clone chuckled.

{a few minutes later}

Garviel and his squad of clone troopers, watched silently as the tracker walked past him, It wasn't a droid or even a native, it was a man. He was wearing a slightly burnt jacket and the only weapon he was carrying was a blaster pistol.

Lokens Comlink beeped, it was Zak, the pilot of the ship. "The clankers must be getting desperate if thats the sort of people working for them." Loken smiled and moved his hand to tell the clones he was going in. he silently creeped over to the man and put his gun to the back of the man's head.

"Don't shoot" the man cried out "I'm with the republic" and dropped his gun to the floor.

Loken pulled his pistol away and gestured to the Clone troopers. They emerged from the foliage, weapons still aimed at him.

"Sir what do you think?" Inquired trooper Thire "is he legit?"

"I think so, in this place, saying that to an unidentified person, is either going to get you shot or imprisoned." He turned towards the man "I'm Garviel Loken, who are you?"

"William Jones, Nice to meet you."

"Same" Loken, he glanced up at something crashing down from the sky, he dismissed it as wreckage entering the atmosphere. "Sergeant, any word from Jim?"

"No sir noth-"

"WAIT, Jim as in Jim Butcher?" Will shouted "I know him and MacK, how are they?"

"MacK is dead" Loken said blankly "He allowed us to escape hoth." He then looked up at the still raging battle in the sky and sighed, "Looks like it could be all for nothing."

"Sir, we better get going, its starting to get dark. We'll interrogate him later"

The group continued their trek.

Edited October 26, 2008 by simonjedi

[Adam]

I'm still waiting for a reply from pr0visorak, and I can't really post until I get one.

JimButcher, I didn't take all of the commlinks out of the ship- I took the engineers' commlinks and disabled their communications to the rest of the ship. You can communicate with anyone except the engineers.

Sorry.

[Da Death Star!]

Uh,Will only knows Moda,Jim and Thok.

"So what are you doing here?"Will asked Garviel.