The Star Wars Comic Game-Season One

[BPac21]

8P-4C reactivated. He had been knocked out after a confrontation with a Hailfire Droid. The next thing he knew, he was here. He looked around. The Mogenar-class droid was in a room which seemed to be underground, with a titanium door on one side. He thought he heard noises from above, so he started melting the door.

The chamber he's in is the one the stairs lead down to.

[Oky]

Ah, good to see you finally posting, BPac! I was worried that you might have changed your mind about joining.

pr0?The droids have already attacked us,and your LEAVING?!Besides,Oky said no more side plots.

Oh well. Just let that coward have his fun.

Jim inspected the electronic key for a while, then he said: "Sorry, Will, I have no clue. But keep it with you; it might become useful later! Now, go back down to that secret room and see what you can find. Then, come back as soon as you can, we don't have much time!" "Will do, Jim" said Will and hurried off.

In that moment, an RGS descended from the sky and landed right next to them. As the side dorrs slid open, they could see the man in charge. "Wouwie!" everyone who knew him said. "There you are - finally" Jim said. "Where the heck are your troops?" "I told them to attack the droid forces." said Wouwie proudly. "Never mind those! Tell them to attack the separatist base! With everything they've got!" "Oh... alright" said Wouwie disappointed, having thought to have done something right for once. He did as he was told, and shortly thereafter, the ships turned around and flew to the CIS base. Once there, they dropped all their bombs and fired their heaviest weapons, but to no avail. All the bombs and shots were caught by a large deflector shield that surrounded the facility. "It's worse than I feared" said Oky Wan. "That's a very powerful deflector shield. The only way to take it out would be from the inside." "Which means that we might as well go into the enemy base and destroy the time machine at its location" added Jim grimly. "Wouwie, tell your pilot to get ready to take off again. We will fly toward the edge of that shield and then continue on foot." Jim turned around to the others and said: "Who wants to help us infiltrate the base?"

Now you can meet up with BPac, Death Star, and bring him up to us so that you can join us if you want.

Edited November 10, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi

[Adam]

Adam looked around. "Has anyone seen-" His raido buzzed, as if on cue, and a clone notified him that pr0visorak would be investigating something off-location. "I'm in," said Adam.

As they soared toward's the CIS base, dodging missle fire, the group went over a plan.

"Alright- we have here the layout of the CIS base on Felucia," Oky Wan said as he pressed a button, causing a blueprint to appear on a screen.

"And you've located the spot where the time machine could be?" Jim asked. Oky nodded.

"Or," he said, "it's rather what I haven't found." He pointed to a large blank space on the blueprint. "There's also a large amount of the type of energy here that we detected on Adam, Garviel and JD when they came back from the future."

"Well," Adam said, "It looks about the size of the time machine the Rebels had in the future. But the only way to access it seems to make us go zig-zagging throughout the base, and we'd be bound to face more than one troop of droids." Wouwie agreed. "I don't think we have enough clones to handle all of them inside the base, based on what we've seen outside of it..." He gestured to the seemingly endless wave of droids that were holding their own against the gunship fleet. "And I'm not so sure I agree with the idea of 'winging it'." Butcher turned to Oky Wan and asked, "Are there any alternate routes? What's the plan?"

"Well," Oky Wan said grimly, "it would be nice to drop in, but there's the matter of the shield and the fact that the time machine is on a lower level. Not even the vents go near it. However," he said, in a more determined tone, "there's a path blocked off by rubble and foliage. Droids don't go there because they're likely to short-circuit." Thok looked up. "And where is this path?" he asked. Oky indicated a strip of hallways that went from the right side of the base to a point near the time machine's supposed location. "It's not the best of plans," he said, "but it's all we've got."

Well, I haven't posted in a while- sorry about that! Great to see BPac joining us, but what's with all of the side-plots and backup? Anyway, I'm working on a facility, so pics should be up soon!

[Da Death Star!]

Will jumped down rock by rock into the secret room(Or whats left of it )and sprinted over to the staircase.Unfortunately,the small boulder that had smashed through the floor and revealed the staircase had blocked the staircase from above."Damn it!"Will whispered to himself.Will started to move the boulder,but it wouldn't budge.Will sighed,it was going to be a LONG day.

Edited November 10, 2008 by Da Death Star!

[JimBee]

Ermm, Death Star? You know that Adam's already gone, on a RGS with the rest of us (not including you and BPac), right?

"So we just stride on over there, blast the rubble to smithereens, and just waltz on in?" Bitcher inquired. "I hardly think it's going to be that simple".

"Of course it isn't. They've got Anti-Air guns mounted on every corner. We're going to have to think of something else before we go in that way," replied Adam.

"Well..." said Oky Wan mysteriously. The group turned to face him. "I could sneak in and deactivate the AA Guns".

"Hm, good plan" said Jim. "But you'll have to be extremely cautious. I'm sure you can do it though, just pull a few wires, do your techie stuff and you're in".

Oky Wan rolled his eyes. Jim made it sound so simple, but he agreed nonetheless.

Hope this okay, Oky Wan.

Edited November 10, 2008 by JimButcher

[Oky]

Wait a minute! It's a secret base that we found out about just by the end of the last chapter. How the heck are we supposed to have acquired blueprints?

Adam DOES have force powers,right?

No, I don't think so. Just a lightsaber.

Ermm, Death Star? You know that Adam's already gone, on a RGS with the rest of us (not including you and BPac), right?

He is filling in the gap in Adam's post. It's kind of a flashback. And it was never said that Will and 8P-4C (BPac) are not with us, so they could very well have boarded the gunship with us during that gap.

Hope this okay, Oky Wan.

Sure.

"(...)?" Bitcher inquired.

Edited November 10, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi

[pr0visorak]

pr0?The droids have already attacked us,and your LEAVING?!Besides,Oky said no more side plots.

Sorry I needed to find JD, to find him I need to indentify the bounty hunter and the only place I can do it at is my own ship.

Oh well. Just let that coward have his fun. [/color]

Yes! The cowardly pr0 is coming to save the day!

Clone:"Sir! We have entered the coordiantes you have requested and are reaching right about...now!"

The clones and Arc's looked up and saw the number of ships...

Clone:"Sir thats gonna be a out millions of clones there sir!"

pr0:"Yes clone, get us inside the first one."

Clone:"Yes sir!"

The gunship flew in and landed inside the base.

Commander:"Sir, I thought we were supposed to wait for your signal?"

pr0:"Yes and you will continue to wait."

The clones took out JD future body and passed it to the medics where they can stabalise him. pr0 than took out the dart.

pr0:"You see this commander? Ask one of your clones to pass it to my weapns expert and tell him to use the code I gave him to search throygh all databases even if restricted. Commander, also tell the shipmasters that I want to talk with them now."

Commander:" It will be done sir!"

pr0 entered the bridge and saw the shipmasters holographic form waiting for him.

pr0:"I think you should know who I am, even if you dont introductions will have to wait. Master Yoda has asked you here for a specific task and you will not move no matter what. Felucia is heavily attacked, but you will not move at all untill I tell you too. It appears that they are on a secret mission. Once this mission is complete than you can come in and back us up. If the sepratists find a lot of gunships there, they will suspect something and this might jeprodise the mission. Therefore, do not move and just stay here and guard this planet for the mean time."

The shipmaster's looked dissapointed but they were loyal and ready.

pr0:"Look, I know you care about your brothers out there, but this mission is important, is ths mission is successful. We can save even more of your brothers than before."

The shipmasters nodded silently and logged off.

Weapon specialists:"pr0, some down to the lab now. I might just have a profile of your bounty hunter."

pr0 went down,hoping that Jd still had a chance to survive.

Edited November 10, 2008 by pr0visorak

[Da Death Star!]

Ermm, Death Star? You know that Adam's already gone, on a RGS with the rest of us (not including you and BPac), right?

I know,when I posted that I hadn'tr seen that post,I already edited it.(But I'm gonna have to wait for BPac to burn through that rock)

[Darth_Dracus]

When is this gonna take new people cause I might join.

[pr0visorak]

When is this gonna take new people cause I might join.

Erm, I am not sure. It can take quite a while and pleae if you are not posting to the story please post in a different color. You might be able to join but you have to wait for Jimbutcher's response. No promises...

[Oky]

Erm, I am not sure. It can take quite a while and pleae if you are not posting to the story please post in a different color. You might be able to join but you have to wait for Jimbutcher's response.

Or mine! Co-leader, remember?

But yeah, pr0 is right. We will start recruiting again when this chapter ends, and no one knows when that will happen. Sorry, but until then, you'll have to wait. Once the time comes, though, we'll be happy to welcome you to the team!

Oky Wan readied himself. Once the pilot gave him the green light and the door of the RGS slid open, he jumped out. Sailing to the ground, he tried to avoid the enemy fire. Then, when he neared the ground, he activated his jetpack and slowed down gradually. When he was only a couple of feet off the ground, he cut the power and landed on his feet safely. I am really getting the hang of this thing, he thought satisfied.

Oky looked around. He had landed amongst the giant plants that surrounded the plantless area where the CIS facility lied, and he was not far from one of the AA turrets. He ran over as fast as he could. Once he had reached the edge of the plant jungle, he stopped and hid in the bushes to observe the situation. There were a couple of droids guarding the entrance to the tower that lead to the control room of the turret. How am I gonna get in there unnoticed? Oky Wan wondered.

Edited November 10, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi

[Wouwie]

Beep beep...beep beep..The internal communication thing rang..

''Yes?'' A clone asked trough the microphone.

''Commander, it's for you! Rex!''

''Damn! I totally forgot him!'' Wouwie responded quick ''Put him on speaker.''

''Where the hell are you Wouwie?! I'm waiting at the point!''

''Plans changed! We're attacking the CIS Base..Sorry I didn't told it to you before..''

''Coordinates?''

''Alpha Fox 2319B.. Be there ASAP, but whatch out for the AA guns!''

[-JD-]

JD (present)....

He woke up. The bounty hunter was dragging him through the undergrowth. His arm was limp. He knew he had to escape. He picked up a rock, turned over and threw it at the hunter's neck. He fell unconcious. JD got up and ran. He burst out of the bushes and saw a CIS base, tripped and fell into a startled Oky Wan.

Oky Wan: You son of a nerfherder! GET OFF!(lol)

[Oky]

Yay, I got company!

Oky Wan pushed the wounded clone off of himself and got up, patting away the dirt from his armor. He looked at the clone and paused. There was something familiar about those blue markings on that clone's armor... "JD? Is that you?!" "Er... have we met?" the clone asked. "Are you kidding me? We fought General Grievous together with the others on Hoth and took down a separatist cruiser before coming here, remember?" "Sir, I have never been to Hoth and never seen the Droid General in person" the clone replied confused.

There was something strange going on. Oky knew that this was JD - he could feel it - but somehow he didn't seem to be the same JD he got to know. He seemed... younger...

That's when it hit him. This must be the present version of JD, he thought. He must not know that his future self is around here; that could lead to a paradox in the time-space continuum. I better keep an eye on him, Oky decided. "Er... never mind what I said, JD. Your arm looks pretty bad, let me take a look at that." Oky got out his medi-pack and treated JD's arm as well as he could. Then, using the foliage around them, he made a hanger for JD to carry his arm in. Afterward, he asked him: "Do think you're fit enough to fight?" "Of course, Sir" replied JD in traditional clone manner. "Good. Now, do you see that AA gun? We need to hijack it so that my partners can infiltrate the enemy base behind it!" "Got it!" said JD.

Hey, pr0, do you want to join our little group before we go in too?

Btw: Remember, JD, that you still need to explain how and why your future was altered, and if it's still in danger.

Edited November 12, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi

[BPac21]

8P-4C, after an hour of using his eyebeams and SOOPER LAZER PISTOL broke through the rock. On the other side he saw a figure. ''Who are you?'' The droid said. The figure replied ''We'll get to that later. Come on up these stairs.'' 8P-4C complied and jetpacked up into a chamber, headfirst into a wall.

Edited November 10, 2008 by BPac21

[Da Death Star!]

"Come on and get your head out of that wall!"Will snapped at the droid."By the way,whats your name?And where did you come from?And is there anything else down those stairs?"Will added."My name is 8P-4C,I came from the room at the bottom of these stairs"8P-4C replied."Was there anything else in the room?"Will questioned."Anyway,are you strong enough to carry a passenger on that jetpack?"Will added."I think so"8P-4C said."Good"Will said blankly.

One ticket for the droid express,please

[Oky]

8P-4C, after an hour of using his eyebeams and SOOPER LAZER PISTOL broke through the rock.

It took you an hour to get through one rock? Usually, in SW, it takes people (and droids) only a couple of minutes to get through solid steel doors, even without a lightsaber, so that must have been one tough rock! Or your "lazers" are just very weak.

Either way, this means that this is not a flashback anymore, and that you and Will are definitely not on board the gunship with Jim and the others, right?

Edited November 10, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi

[BPac21]

You and Will are definitely not on board the gunship with Jim and the others, right?

Correct.

''Gah,'' 8P-4C said as Will got off him ''Are you full of SOOPER PIES? Anyway, is anybody else here? And is there anywhere I can get an upgrade my SOOPER weak SOOPER EYEBEAMS and SOOPER LAZER PISTOL into Plasma Eyebeams and a Rail Gun?''

Edited November 10, 2008 by BPac21

[Lt. Col. Thok]

*snip*

That's when it hit him. This must be the present version of JD, he thought. He must not know that his future self is around here; that could lead to a paradox in the time-space continuum. *Snip*]

...which would then lead Revolver Ocelot into the game and make everyone go, "WTF?"

Thok saw the approaching ships and realized that this would be a good chance to get some supplies. He used his contacter to contact an approaching gunship, which landed near him. He ran towards it, yelling something to Jim about "contacting his unit". He stumbled into the armory, ditching his travel uniform for the more heavy duty standard white armour with a blue arm. Remember? Let's pretend that gunships carry many types of specialized armour... He also got a new rifle, picked up several ammo cases, and two sidearms. He wouldn't be traveling lightly anymore. Just as he was leaving, a snide voice called from the depths of the room.

"I hope you have the permission forms for all that equipment."

Thok smacked his forehead. He had been caught by the quartermaster with unlicensed equipment, and this was a court-martial offense.

Arrgh! Bureaucracy!

Edited November 11, 2008 by Lt. Col. Thok

[Oky]

Correct.

Thanks, but what's up with all the "SOOPER" stuff?

...which would then lead Revolver Ocelot into the game and make everyone go, "WTF?"

I never played MGS, so I don't get it.

Also, I don't understand where and when your post is taking place. Is that before Jim, me, and the others took off from the destroyed communications center?

Edited November 11, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi

[JimBee]

When is this gonna take new people cause I might join.

Well, to be honest, you probably won't be able to join for a long time. We have to finish this chapter first, and this might be the last one of season one. There will probably be a large break then. Sorry.

Edited November 11, 2008 by JimButcher

[Wouwie]

Well, to be honest, you probably won't be able to join for a long time. We have to finish this chapter first, and this might be the last one of season one. There will probably be a large break then. Sorry.

Large break?! Did I missed anything?!

[BPac21]

Thanks, but what's up with all the "SOOPER" stuff?

Just showing that they are overrated and very weak. And the pie was the first thing that came to mind. Now, I'm waiting for Da Death Star to let me upgrade!

[-JD-]

The future JD woke. He examined his arm. It was there, fortunately.

Clone: Welcome back!

[pr0visorak]

pr0:"Well, what is the situation?"

Weapon Speacialists:"I only know that he is an Alien and that the gang he came from is mostly dead, I cant find a name or anything sir? Its like he barely exists! I only managed to find this info after searching through republic police force records."

pr0:"Well, I can't save a soldier like that! Keep searching and digging, I want a name! What do you think he is going to wait up and tell us!!!"

Suddenly the comlin opened...

Clone Medic:"Sir, JD is fine. He is fit and ready for battle sir!"

pr0:"Right...I will be there soon."

Weapon Speacialist:" What was that?"

pr0:"Your dream come true!"

pr0 walked down to the medic bay.

JD:"Well pr0, I thought I was in heaven cos everything is so white!"

pr0:"Yeah, clone get the Arc's and troops ready! We are going back!"

The clone nodded and left.

pr0:"Well, our search for your present self was bad. You alive was shocking. Thats good! That means you are not dead, yet..."

JD:"Where am I?"

pr0:"You are in my personal army."

JD:"Your personal army yeah right!"

pr0 kept silent...

JD:" Right, we better get back to the others..."

pr0:"Yeah, lets go!"

JD:"Right, so I looked out of the window and see a lot of gunships! Are you going to tell Oky and Jim?"

pr0:"No, you won't tell them a word and you will tell them nothing."

They walked to the gunship and flew off.

JD:"So, you mind telling me who you really are? A commando cant be that good now can he?"

pr0:"Fine, it all began when..."

Can I ask a question? Why isnt skipper 24 playing? He is on the players list but isn't playing. Why is that so? By the way, JD did you get my pm?

Edited November 12, 2008 by pr0visorak