[Factions Ep. 6 - Cat A][L13 - Fondor - TT] Old Sins

[marvelBoy123]

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Farantros narrative:

Pyerce's forces were already there when we landed. Thats the problem with remnants, we all follow the same imperial intel and so we came into conflict with Pyerce's men at one of the most valuable locations on the planet - a research and records facility built under the old empire. We were tasked to secure the south entrance while another force collected some information from the north - something to do with a cloaking technology. The Carrion Crows didn't normally work with humans or other regular forces but we were told this was one of the most important parts of the whole operation and besides it was progress that an alien legion could even be involved in an operation like this. 

This part of the facility had originally been a proposed mine and so tunnels ran deep underground where Pyerce had based many of his forces. While the rest of the Carrion Crows secured the facility from above myself and Hecyst Nalucew took out the forces below.

Well that should have been the mission completed, but I had other ideas. It sometimes happens that you find information a little above your pay grade and before the operation, I had discovered a specific file held within the south block. While the rest of the Carrion Crows guarded the facility from the outside, I had ventured in to collect the file.

Room 317. Section X. Item 78912. Battle Log: Montellian Serat...

Spoiler

My third and final episode entry, really happy with this one. I have tried experimenting with the layers in the ground as well as trying some more advanced techniques for the landscaping and facility.

Some details I worked into the floor using pipes.

Really happy with this blast door design.

Also, in the case of Montellian Serat, I would recommend brushing up on your Devaronian history, I will be delving deep into Farantros past in future builds.

 

As ever, feedback is appreciated!

Edited September 5, 2020 by goatman461

[Jody Meyer]

this is a great build lots of great rock wall techniques, good story. 

[Darth Bjorn]

@marvelBoy123 Man! You're really stepping it up! So many good details in this build. The pattern on the tower, the blast door, the transition in the soil, and the menacing look of your sigfig, while he instills fear in Pyerce's forces! NICE!

[marvelBoy123]

1 hour ago, Jody Meyer said:

this is a great build lots of great rock wall techniques, good story. 

Glad you like it!

 

3 minutes ago, Darth Bjorn said:

@marvelBoy123 Man! You're really stepping it up! So many good details in this build. The pattern on the tower, the blast door, the transition in the soil, and the menacing look of your sigfig, while he instills fear in Pyerce's forces! NICE!

Thank you, I've really tried to explore some more advanced techniques so I'm glad it paid off. 

[Tariq j]

Really excellent work . The rock formation is great and I love the small details like the chemicals oozing out of the wall and the detailing on the tower.

[n1majneb]

Alot of nice detail in the build here, the ground detailing works really well for the location with just as much going on above and below ground

[marvelBoy123]

16 hours ago, Tariq j said:

Really excellent work . The rock formation is great and I love the small details like the chemicals oozing out of the wall and the detailing on the tower.

 

14 hours ago, n1majneb said:

Alot of nice detail in the build here, the ground detailing works really well for the location with just as much going on above and below ground

Thanks, detailing the landscape both in the layers and rocks was something I really focused on in this build. The idea for the veins of the yellow substance within the wall actually came from the 'Lego Ninjago Build your Own Adventure' book of all places. The idea to have some oozing out went from there and I ended up using 4 minifigure legs as well as other pieces to achieve the effect. Glad you like it!

[MKJoshA]

There are a lot of nice little details. I love the trooper falling down the hole, your door to the right, the yellow veins, and the overall Imperial feel of the building. Nice work!

[dvogon]

Great work! Several well identified places, good amount of details and cleanness. I specially like the cave and the fact that it can be viewed from most angles.