Simulterious Posted September 19, 2020 Posted September 19, 2020 (edited) *Your entry has earned 7 XP (x2 for limited challenge)* Cloud swoop racing by simulterious, on Flickr A world of luxury, Zeltros offers it's alien patrons a variety of entertainment options. If you're looking for some high adrenaline fun, try swoop racing! Our specially adapted models can fly at high altitudes, even among the clouds! Try our standard "Red Rocket" or if you really want to go all out; "Helios" is the speeder for you. Capable of reaching record speeds and featuring a stylish golden plating, this one will take you for one hell of a ride! WARNING: Some species (especially humans) are prone to hypoxia at greater elevation. Zeltros Zaranasi Resorts is not responsible for any injuries inflicted upon customers. Edited September 24, 2020 by goatman461 Quote
Rebel Pilot Posted September 19, 2020 Posted September 19, 2020 Awesome build, the cloud and bikes look great, and I love the disclaimer at the end. Quote
marvelBoy123 Posted September 19, 2020 Posted September 19, 2020 The clouds are cool and that gold speeder seems very appropriate for Zeltros! Quote
Simulterious Posted September 19, 2020 Author Posted September 19, 2020 1 hour ago, Rebel Pilot said: Awesome build, the cloud and bikes look great, and I love the disclaimer at the end. Thank you! I wrote it like a commercial, so I thought something like it would be nice. 1 hour ago, marvelBoy123 said: The clouds are cool and that gold speeder seems very appropriate for Zeltros! Yeah I really wanted to make something unique! Quote
Ross Fisher Posted September 19, 2020 Posted September 19, 2020 Very classy vehicles, and that cloud is lovely. Quote
Denal31 Posted September 20, 2020 Posted September 20, 2020 I dig the setting you went for here. Very nice speeders as well! Quote
n1majneb Posted September 20, 2020 Posted September 20, 2020 Nice part usage with the sausage handlebars, Quote
RocketBoy Posted September 20, 2020 Posted September 20, 2020 (edited) The story is great! I love that whole vibe. The clouds are beautiful and both speeders are looking nice. The bright green engine fire looks a little whacky, might look better in blue or orange? If I have anything to quibble about, it's your photography. It doesn't always do your builds justice. Maybe look into running your picture through one of those editing programs (there are even a few sites) that can auto-fix your white balance? I think that and tweaking your contrast could make your stuff pop a little more. (Ignore all this if it's a stylistic choice, just thought I'd say.) Anyway, always love seeing some quirky, peaceful builds. Edited September 20, 2020 by RocketBoy Quote
Darth Bjorn Posted September 21, 2020 Posted September 21, 2020 Super creative entry. Too bad you were pressed for time on this one, but you made the most of what you had. Great work! Quote
JShortForJay Posted September 22, 2020 Posted September 22, 2020 Very classy gold bike, it looks neat Quote
Simulterious Posted September 23, 2020 Author Posted September 23, 2020 On 9/19/2020 at 8:03 PM, Ross Fisher said: Very classy vehicles, and that cloud is lovely. Thanks guys! Quote
MKJoshA Posted September 24, 2020 Posted September 24, 2020 Love those clouds! The bikes are a little simplistic, but you have nice action effects out the back. Quote
dvogon Posted September 24, 2020 Posted September 24, 2020 Those clouds are very nice and the bikes are quite creative. Quote
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