Posted September 19, 20204 yr *Your entry has earned 7 XP (x2 for limited challenge)* Cloud swoop racing by simulterious, on Flickr A world of luxury, Zeltros offers it's alien patrons a variety of entertainment options. If you're looking for some high adrenaline fun, try swoop racing! Our specially adapted models can fly at high altitudes, even among the clouds! Try our standard "Red Rocket" or if you really want to go all out; "Helios" is the speeder for you. Capable of reaching record speeds and featuring a stylish golden plating, this one will take you for one hell of a ride! WARNING: Some species (especially humans) are prone to hypoxia at greater elevation. Zeltros Zaranasi Resorts is not responsible for any injuries inflicted upon customers. Edited September 24, 20204 yr by goatman461
September 19, 20204 yr Awesome build, the cloud and bikes look great, and I love the disclaimer at the end.
September 19, 20204 yr Author 1 hour ago, Rebel Pilot said: Awesome build, the cloud and bikes look great, and I love the disclaimer at the end. Thank you! I wrote it like a commercial, so I thought something like it would be nice. 1 hour ago, marvelBoy123 said: The clouds are cool and that gold speeder seems very appropriate for Zeltros! Yeah I really wanted to make something unique!
September 20, 20204 yr The story is great! I love that whole vibe. The clouds are beautiful and both speeders are looking nice. The bright green engine fire looks a little whacky, might look better in blue or orange? If I have anything to quibble about, it's your photography. It doesn't always do your builds justice. Maybe look into running your picture through one of those editing programs (there are even a few sites) that can auto-fix your white balance? I think that and tweaking your contrast could make your stuff pop a little more. (Ignore all this if it's a stylistic choice, just thought I'd say.) Anyway, always love seeing some quirky, peaceful builds. Edited September 20, 20204 yr by RocketBoy
September 21, 20204 yr Super creative entry. Too bad you were pressed for time on this one, but you made the most of what you had. Great work!
September 23, 20204 yr Author On 9/19/2020 at 8:03 PM, Ross Fisher said: Very classy vehicles, and that cloud is lovely. Thanks guys!
September 24, 20204 yr Love those clouds! The bikes are a little simplistic, but you have nice action effects out the back.
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