halixon Posted December 3, 2020 Posted December 3, 2020 *Your entry has earned 14 XP* On Koda Station... Nevara and 9-LOM arrive shortly to Koda Station, meeting with their contact within the ISB, Officer Thetos Rand. Officer Rand - “Ah, Agent Nevara, glad to meet a capable analyst.” He said, shaking her hand. Nev - “And it’s good to meet an even more experienced agent.” She said, eyeing his pins and rankings, the cloak signifying a more regal weight to the man. “Now, what have you got for me?” Officer Rand - “Right. Well, it’s an odd situation.” The Officer gestured to the crime scene next to them. A stormtrooper with partially yellow armor lay dead on the ground, appearing to have murdered a Mon Calamari civilian, whom also lay dead. The two appear to have murdered each other. Officer Rand - “Now, it’s not so much the dead Mon Cala we’re concerned about; the Maker knows we could do with less of them. No, what’s specifically intriguing about this scene, is the stormtrooper. His yellow armor designates him belonging to Moff Pyerce’s garrison. I’m sure you heard about his recent defeat.” Nev - “I did. What’s this trooper doing so far away from his Moff?” Officer Rand - “Well, Pyerce’s forces were scattered after his humiliating defeat, and we’ve been searching for his remnants ever since. He’s still a threat as long as he’s alive. I was called in to investigate the appearance here of this stormtrooper.” Nev - “Why was the trooper after that Mon Calamari?” Officer Rand began to speak, when 9-LOM interjected. 9-LOM - “Mon Calamari recognized as Oldack Griaga, age forty-four, registered in the Imperial Database as an informant. Oldack was one of many Imperial informants in the Outer Rim. It appears he was relaying information on Moff Pyerce’s whereabouts to the Triumvirate, when he was found and murdered by this stormtrooper.” Nevara and Rand gave each other an astounded look in shock of 9-LOM’s abilities. Officer Rand - “Quite the impressive LOM you’ve got, Nevara. When did you acquire it?” Nev - “A week ago, before my departure here. I have yet to see his full capabilities.” Officer Rand gave 9-LOM an approving, and somewhat envious look. Officer Rand - “Now then. We know the motive of the stormtrooper, and the goal of the victim, but what we really need to figure out is where this trooper came from, and if the informant did indeed have any information regarding Pyerce’s whereabouts.” Nev - “Shall we?” Officer Rand - “Be my guest.” To Be Continued... _________ Minifigless: Spoiler Quote
marvelBoy123 Posted December 3, 2020 Posted December 3, 2020 A good story and a really great scene. There are so many great details throughout the room and the minifigures are brilliant! Quote
JOKA Posted December 3, 2020 Posted December 3, 2020 Really like that Stormtrooper... is him s Pyerce loyalist? Quote
Darth Bjorn Posted December 3, 2020 Posted December 3, 2020 Nice little vignette with some nice details... ? Quote
JintaiZ Posted December 3, 2020 Posted December 3, 2020 (edited) Nice build. Looks spot on. Edited December 3, 2020 by JintaiZ Quote
Brickwolf Posted December 3, 2020 Posted December 3, 2020 beautiful vignette with a very good story! Quote
halixon Posted December 4, 2020 Author Posted December 4, 2020 20 hours ago, JOKA said: Really like that Stormtrooper... is him s Pyerce loyalist? Yes indeed! 21 hours ago, marvelBoy123 said: A good story and a really great scene. There are so many great details throughout the room and the minifigures are brilliant! 19 hours ago, Darth Bjorn said: Nice little vignette with some nice details... ? 12 hours ago, JintaiZ said: Nice build. Looks spot on. 10 hours ago, Brickwolf said: beautiful vignette with a very good story! Thanks All! Quote
Ross Fisher Posted December 4, 2020 Posted December 4, 2020 A really nice clean build with some great detailing. Well done! Quote
RocketBoy Posted December 6, 2020 Posted December 6, 2020 As others have said, a lovely build with excellent details. I love the dialogue! Very well written. Quote
halixon Posted December 7, 2020 Author Posted December 7, 2020 On 12/4/2020 at 2:06 AM, Ross Fisher said: A really nice clean build with some great detailing. Well done! Thanks! 14 hours ago, RocketBoy said: As others have said, a lovely build with excellent details. I love the dialogue! Very well written. Again, thanks! There's plenty more story and dialogue coming! Quote
Ross Fisher Posted January 6, 2021 Posted January 6, 2021 I've just looked at this again. That Harry Potter Uniform in the window is really distracting! Everything else is perfect. Quote
MKJoshA Posted January 7, 2021 Posted January 7, 2021 Nice floor gradient. Seems like you joined the wrong Faction though, detective work is what CorSec does! Quote
dvogon Posted January 7, 2021 Posted January 7, 2021 Nice little scene. The setup for the story is very good. I like that hologram and the stairs to make the room a bit different. Quote
halixon Posted January 8, 2021 Author Posted January 8, 2021 On 1/6/2021 at 2:48 AM, Ross Fisher said: I've just looked at this again. That Harry Potter Uniform in the window is really distracting! Everything else is perfect. I tried to find a good casual top to look like it was drying on the rack in the window, but I definitely could've picked something more... star wars esc On 1/6/2021 at 6:45 PM, MKJoshA said: Nice floor gradient. Seems like you joined the wrong Faction though, detective work is what CorSec does! The ISB works very hard, and Nevara's primary duties within it is trailing and forensics. Her loyalty is to the true Empire, but otherwise, maybe she would be CorSec. On 1/7/2021 at 5:48 AM, dvogon said: Nice little scene. The setup for the story is very good. I like that hologram and the stairs to make the room a bit different. Thank you! I found that I build too many rooms with very little variance in elevation, so I wanted to try something new for myself. Quote
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